New Ragna FF: Uniqueness of love and friendship Part 2 (Pg 3)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Main theme : The plot revolves around two couples who are from completely different background falls in love each other and dealing with the problems they face. The story also reflects the growing friendships between two girls.

Characters

Kalpi : An arrogant but very caring, practical girl and intelligent who faces lot of problems since childhood. Lives with her mother in a small house. Unaware the events which led in her childhood. Dream to become a surgeon by working hard and belongs to a small class family. Childhood friend of Yash. Knows how to deal with challenges.

Shikha : Daughter of very rich businessmen who is brought up in a very conservative family. A very simple and sophisticated girl who is craving some love from her parents who are busy in their social life. Raised by a nanny to whom she is most attached to and unaware of outside world. Wants to live by her own and childhood friend of Raghav.

Raghav : Son of another rich businessman. A spoilt brat but loving at heart who is pretty straightforward in everything. Free living and loves his freedom until someone comes and gives him challenge. Childhood friend of Shikha.

Yash : A tough guy who wants to become rich by standing on his feet and not accepting anyone's favor. Also belong to a lower class family and childhood friend of Avni . Does not believe in love until a young girl who is completely opposite meets him. Childhood friend of kalpi .

Max : An evil guy who is the biggest enemy Sid from college days. Seeking revenge on Sid. Sets his eyes on Shikha

Payal : Best friend of Shikha. Very helpful to people and supportive to Shikha. Loves Raghav from childhood. Brought up in a reserved environment by her family. Her parents are friends and business partner with Raghav and Shikha's family.

Armaan : Brother of Yash. Can do anything for his family. Pretty similar to his brother and very strong to face the challenges. Strong support of Yash. Love interest of Payal

Nandini : Avni's mom who raised her alone. A very caring and simple woman who wants her daughter to become successful.

Sakshi : A very conservative woman who cares about money and fame a lot. Unintentionally hurts her daughter's feeling by giving no attention to her. Shikha's mom

Hey guys I just wanted response for the first part, I will continue after I finish my current FF

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abhiya23 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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No one liked the plot 😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ur plot is good..dont worry abt..its just that many hav left the forum..a suggestion, change the names to incl. Raghav-Kalpi or if u want Aryan-Suhana 😉😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept and CS
But I would like if RagNa is apart of the story
You can just change Avni character to Kalpi and Sid character to Raghav :)
It's just a suggestion
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the plot..
If u can then please change the character names to ema characters.. It helps in connecting to the story..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear ur story intro was good but it will b good or i can say awesome if you give name ragna ti the main lead pair..u know na dear ragna magic..it always work..😉
when i read the intro of the story ,i was like...no ragna...my interest in the story become dull(Dont mind yar)...😲 Nd i think above said members who commented here ,their reaction was also same as me...

sorry if i hurt u..if u dont like feel free to ignore😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I thought some people still read without Ragna,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat3

I thought some people still read without Ragna,



only problem is,everyone here is mad for RagNa/AshNa😆, including me...so not able to read anything in ths forum other than those related to RagNa/AshNa..what to do???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I might not write this FF since this seems common from EMA
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Part 1

The story opens with a young girl standing on a hill thinking to reach the height of success by achieving her goal. The girl is introduced as Kalpi who belongs from a small class family. After her father dies her mother raises her single handedly. Kalpi receives a scholarship after she passes her high school. Another young girl from the same college named Shikha who is very simple and straightforward. Kalpi and Shikha study in the same college named Greenfield College but both of them not friends yet. Both are in the final year of the college. Everyone in the college is making preparations for the final exams. Kalpi goes to her home where she finds that there is no electricity at her house. Meanwhile Shikha tries to talk to her mom but her mom is busy which makes her feels bad that there is no one who can encourage her to top in the college. She talks to her nanny about it.

Shikha : Why does mom and dad always avoid me? Don't they love me ?

Nanny : They love you a lot dear but they just do not express it. You have to work hard and make them proud.

Shikha : I will definitely make them proud one day and prove my worth. Alright I will go to sleep . Good night nanny

Late night Kalpi who is studying under streetlight goes to her home whereas Shikha also studies for her exams. The next day Kalpi 's mom blesses her and wishes her good luck. She tells Kalpi that she will definitely top on her exams. Other side Shikha's nanny wishes her all the best which makes her feel encouraged. Both girls heads toward the college to give their finals and goes to their respective classes to give their exams. After the exams the principal announces the youth festival competition for the college before they all graduate their final year. Shikha who is selected to dance in the competition gets scared as she cannot dance in front of the audience.

Shikha : What should I do Payal ? You know I can't dance in front of people

Payal : I think you should go talk to the principal.

Kalpi overhears their conversation while passing from the place and decides to help Shikha. Shikha goes to talk to the principal that she cannot participate in the competition but Kalpi stops her from going.

Kalpi : What are you doing ? Afraid to face the challenge?

Shikha : What do you mean? I cannot dance in front of people. I just dance for my own

Kalpi : But this is not just the question of you but the whole college reputation. You cannot walk away from this challenge. If you will not face this right now you will never be able get rid of this problem in your whole life

Shikha : But what should I do then?

She motivates Shikha that she should perform as if nobody is watching her and she is performing by her own. Shikha goes to auditorium to do the rehearsal . Everyone in the college is practicing for the youth festival. Kalpi gets happy when she sees Shikha doing rehearsal. The youth festival day comes where everyone is excited for their performances. Kalpi wishes Shikha good luck and motivates that she has to win the competition. The performances start and it is the time for Shikha to perform as it was the last performance of the competition. She gets nervous for a while but she remembers Kalpi 's words and starts her performance. Everybody applauds for her dance and judges gets impressed by her performance. The judges announces the winner of the youth festival which is Greenfield college. It won because of Shikha's performance. The whole college praises her and congratulate her for the victory.

Kalpi : Congratulations you did it

Shikha : I couldn't have done it without you. Friends?

Kalpi : I don't have friends whom I can call my own

Shikha : Do you mind if I call u my sister?

Kalpi : Please let us not be more than friends,

Shikha : Okay then from now you will be my best friend

The story introduces new entry named Raghav who is the childhood friend of Shikha, Raghav is driving fast on the road accidentally hits Kalpi . Raghav goes to her and sees if she is okay.

Raghav : Are you okay?

Kalpi : What do you mean? First you hit intentionally and then ask me if I am okay

Raghav : Sorry?

Kalpi : What sorry? I could have died but why would you care, I know rich brats like you who never think about others

Raghav : Now thats enough, even I can answer to your attitude

Kalpi : Finally you showed your colors

Raghav : Even I can say that you came in front of my car on purpose

Kalpi : Shut up, I don't have time to argue with people like you

Raghav : Who told you I have time to argue with you

Both head towards the opposite direction. Both says to themselves to never see each other again.
Edited by ashpat3 - 10 years ago

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