MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT YOU [ PART 37 ( A ) UPDATED ]

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sonali mishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Beautiful update👏

Loved sandhir's bond😊

Interesting precap

Update soon

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Anushka Mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

its superb and amazine.sandhir love bonding still interesting.updet asap.thanx for pm me.😉

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anu_anya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

lovely
beautiful
awesome
superb update
loved it
sanyu was so caring
precap is very interesting i think after dat part rd will confess his feelings
thanx for pm
continue asap :)))

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CaramelCritters

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

what an amazing & beautiful update...this is so serene...i'm waiting for jealous randhir

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_Angel_love_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Hey! Smiti

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,

lovely, lovely update dear😳😳

Lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏⭐️

Love it to the core❤️

Very well you've described the scenario👏⭐️

lovely you've pinned the emotions of Randhir👏

Sanyukta love's Randhir so much

without any condition❤️...Her concern for him😳

I just love this FF😳

Keep it up👍🏼

Update soon

Eagerly waiting😉

Thanks for pm

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Archana Kannan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Sanyu is a pure soul yaar... Her love is so unconditional and pure.. i really loved this part dear... pls update next part asap yaara...

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sugunmanas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

I am a silent reader of your ff . It is very touching emotional and close to real life. Stay with us always with your writings. If you start writing novels you will definitely flourish

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SAKSHI SINGH

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

loved it smiti 😊
i m totally loving this ff
it is so emotional
thanks for pm me
lots of love
sakshi

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pari1995

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Oh god seriously yaar padte padte kab khatam ho gaya pata hi nahi chala
Loved it yaar
The way u penned their emotins was just awsome
Plz plz plz update soon and thanx for pm
Love
Pari

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Nain5000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Heyy guys... Here wd nxt... So here I go...

PART 31a - JELOUS RD

A week later..
Days passed and gradually she was healing my wounds. I started realizing that I was actually falling for her. Her angelic face, her deep brown eyes, her soothing words, her selfless love, her soft touch, her rosy lips, her feathery caressing everything were just talking towards her. I wanted to touch her, walk with her miles interlocking my fingers with her, place my head on her lap and feel her depth of her finger stroke on my face and to be around her not just the whole day but also my entire life. I wanted her to open up infront of me her caged heart with pain. Another day passed with her and I did not know how.

We met in evening at our regular spot on sea-shore. This time I decided to ask her about her life. She had shared my every pain with, I too wanted to take her pain which she was murmering in her sleep. She was missing her baba all time.

She was sitting at our exact place making random patterns on sand with a pretty smile on her face I gazed her. Her hairs were waving in air, the evening sun was brightening the glow on her face.

"hey beautiful, may I join your smile with you", I pouted mounting my hands inside my pocket.

"is anything new today that you are asking to sit", she said with a circled pink blush on her cheeks.

"actually someone is blushing today, thats why", I said sitting down.

"actually someone is blushing for another one but unfortunately that another one never noticed it and cleanly he does not care", she taunted.

"is it? Then what should another one do? Punished?", I questioned.

"i cant punish as he is really very cute"
"oh I see. Someone is not in a mood to fight"

"well someone fights only with another one", she said planting her both palms on sand.

We both giggled a long time. After a few minutes, finally I asked "umm.. Someone.. I mean sanyukta, you did not told anything about your past".

My words distracted her. She shidtes her gaze towards sea and then started playing with her toes digging her head down.

"you did not answer", I again queried.

"its not such a long story rd. I was happy till my parents were there. The day when they left us in an accident, responsiblities made my shoulders heavy. I became parent of my siblings. I was totally shattered but someone and something was there to strengthen me. Then brijesh uncle, divya's father helped me in every possible step. I topped my 10th board in district level, got in the best college admission best job, everything was due to him. But vibhu wanted to engg, I needed money, so I came here without the knowledge that my life would change here. I never thought that for the person, I am alive, I will get him here", she said a single breathe.

"as?", I asked.
"my love", she replied.

"how could you be so strong?", I asked again.
"for my best friends, divya and siddhant. Yes ofcourse for you too", she lipped out with a smile.

"as you are there for me, I will also be there for you. You made me smile and I will do it till I am alive", I had a talk with my mind.

I came out of my thoughts when she ticked infront of my eyes.

She stood with a smile and forwarded her hand towards me.

"come, lets have a walk", she demanded.

I smiled at her and placed my palms over her hand. We started walking. I was hidding my hands inside my pockets and she had interlocked her arms. We were silently walking over there. Suddenly she spoke to break the silence.

"umm.. YAM why did you suddenly ask me about my past today"
"actually not today, I wanted trying to ask it from last few days but could not. That morning you were murmering your baba's name in sleep"

"hmm everyday I dream of him. I miss him a lot. My baba was my most protective layer n maa was the strongest pillar. She was independent and I learnt this from her"
"seems you became more strong after them"

She just smiled and we moved few steps more. Suddenly she spoke but strange thing was not to me to someone else.

"heyy sid, you here. I mean its a big surprize for me", she said hugging him.

"omg. I could not believe in my eyes, you here. Must say darling, you look hot sweetheart", he said breaking the hug.

"you will never leave your habits. Anyway I am here for shooting but you here? How come?", she asked.

"ahaa congrats. Whatever I am here for conference meeting with foreign deligates. I am here with my boss.", he replied.

My jaw slid down and my mouth opened after listening to the entire convo. "why the hell is he so sticky and sanyukta, she is not even arguing with him for such flirts. Fevicol huh", I struggled with my mind making an annoyed face.

To be continued...

Thank you 4 reading...

Hope u all like n enjoyed it... Dont 4get 2 cmnt... Lv u all...

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SMITI

Edited by Nain5000 - 10 years ago

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