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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

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Mentalmaths, Deepika_Zaya, jazly_zayafan, Alyssa_Zaya, RUHANIKAA, zaya-firdose, poojaloveskajen, Humzy, .Anisha.,

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: poojaloveskajen
nice update!
sorry for the late comment...was on Holidays...

No problem.

Happy that you liked it.

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Humairaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Lovely update

Loved it

Very nicely written

Continue soon

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deepika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

very well written
luved it
thanks 4 pm

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

thanks for the PM

nice update...

wanna know which plan gauhar has...

continue soon!

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Gauhar s annoying
loved the update dear
very well written 👍🏼
do continue soon
cheers for the PM

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Chapter 5(A)
Place : A parkTime : Around 12
Rizwan : What happened Zain? Tell me...Zain : I want idea.Rizwan : For what? (With a smile)Zain : Shut up Rizwan. I want to make Aliya cry.Rizwan : What? But why?Zain : Its a bet.Rizwan : UmmmZain : What ummm? Give me some idea.Rizwan : Pinch her.Zain : She is not a kid yaar.Rizwan : Ok ok...

After few minutes.Rizwan : Zain I know I am no one to tell what to do with your life.. But yaar listen..leave this bet set everything. Start a new life with her. Let some days pass you will fall in love with her. I swear Zain.
Zain: No I dont take wrong what you say. Still I am just playing with her. Its just a game. I will make her 1000 time more happy than she is now. And the falling in love part lets see about it.
Rizwan : (Laughing) Ok Lets see it. Can we go now?Zain : Yes come.
Both drove down the road.

Will be cont soon.
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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago