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deepika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

beautifully written
excited for next part

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Anisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

loved the update

enjoyed reading it

Gauhar is upto something 😕

waiting for the next part

thanks for the PM

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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

wonderful update!!!👏
beautifully written.👍🏼.
loved it ❤️
ty so much for d pm
plzz continue soon...

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 6(A)
Place : ZaYa Room.Time : Around 5 at evening.

Aliya keeps the towel in. She thinks for a moment and takes it back and went into the bathroom.Zain was about to leave when he saw what Aliya was doing he smirked.
Aliya : Oh God...Why this Zain is trying to trap me down. What have I done,? I just gave my food. He is acting like a police now. Oh Alaah just make his mouth shut. I dont want to get embarrassed.
Zain was behind the door. He was hearing all her monologue.
Aliya : Oh God now he had left the door ajar..!! How can I make this man understand things? Uff...
She pulls the door and sees Zain there.
Aliya screams.
Aliya : Ahhh...What are u doing here?Zain : I am searching something...Aliya : Behind the door.Zain : Yes...Why cant I search things behind the door.Aliya : Yes you can go ahead. Search.
Zain was simply looking at her.
Aliya : Search. Zain : I found out.Aliya : What?Zain : That theres nothing behind the door.Aliya : Whatever. Lemme go.Zain : Where are you going?Aliya : Kitchen.Zain : Happy Journey.Aliya : Thank you.
Zain scratched his head while walking down the room.

Place : Barkat Villa Drawing room.Time : Around 6.

Gauhar : Aliya I need to go to shopping can you come with me?Aliya : I think I wont be able to...I have some work and ...Gauhar : Aliya I need to buy some things. SOME THINGS. Can you go with me.Aliya : I will talk with the driver. He will...Gauhar : Oh please just half and hour...Aliya : I agree but...I need to tell Zain...Gauhar : I'll text him. Its getting late lets go.Aliya : Ok I'll go with you. Lemme take my purse.Gauhar : No no no I'll buy you if you need anything. You can pay me later.Aliya : Ok lets move.
Letting Aliya walk in front Gauhar took a step back.
Gauhar : (Monologue) Just wait and watch Aliya...This will be your best Shopping.
Both reached the shop.Gauhar was buying some ladies stuff. while Aliya was looking at some night wears.
Gauhar : Do you like this?(Pointing out a lace night wear)Aliya : No ...I was just looking. Gauhar : Oh try this na...Aliya : No...no...Gauhar : Oh Please for me...Aliya : Ok...
Aliya hands over the phone to Gauhar and a lady with the dress following her to the trial room.
Gauhar texts Zain as "Zain I will get late. Dont worry I will come back tomorrow morning. Bye Take care"
Precap : Gauhar calls Aliya from behind, when she turns she keeps a cloth in her nasal leaving Aliya Unconscious.

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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago

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Sunidhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Awesome...Keep up the good work!!

ANd try to update fast...plz..plz..

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VolimTeManik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Mentalmaths
Awesome...Keep up the good work!!
ANd try to update fast...plz..plz..
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Thank you so much.

I am trying to update at least one update for one day.

I only come active on late evenings.