New Adi-Mets fanfic prt=3pg2

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Hi guys. I am really addicted to Adi and Mythelli's Jodi. I really wanted to write a fanfic over summer break so I thought why not write it on this jodi since there aren't many fanfic's on this couple. Well I'll post the first part later but until then here is the character list.

The Kapoor family

- Janki Kapoor { Mythelli's mom, Janki adopted Mythelli when her father died ever since then she's with Janki Kapoor, Janki loves her very much}

- Om Kapoor { Janki's husband and Mythelli's dad, he also adopted Mythelli and also loves her a lot}

- Mythelli Kapoor {Om and Janki's adopted daughter, she knows she's adopted. But she still loves her family a lot. She believes in love and believes that some day her prince charming will come to her. She's rich but very pure and natural and is very sweet and doesn't like parties and short clothes much. She goes to collage but her last year in collage is about to end. She'll join business with her dad after collage ends. Her family and friends call her Mets}

- Pranany Kapoor {Mythelli's brother Om and Janki's real son, loves Mythelli a lot.}

The Mehra Family

- Mayuri Mehta {Adi Mehta's mom. Love's her children a lot and her husband a lot too.}

- Shikar Mehta {Adi's dad. Love's his family a lot, a very big business tycoon, has high dreams for his business to be at the top.}

- Adi Mehta {loves his family a lot. Totally spoiled- always gets whatever he wants. A total flirt knows how to charm a woman by his good looks. Has slept with almost all the girls in his collage. Very proud of his fathers money and being rich. Goes to the same collage as Mythelli and is in the same class as Mythelli. He loves to party}

- Mallisha Mehta {loves her family a lot. Very naughty, wears short clothes has same attitude as Adi and is two years younger than Adi}

Extra characters-Friends

- Pragti Aggarwal {Mythelli's best friend}

- Bharat Aggarwal {Adi's best friend}

- Shruti Singhania {Adi's friend}

- Tiny Malhotra {Adi's friend}

Ok so that's all the characters and there won't be any other characters coming up in this fanfic much but when there will be new characters coming in this fanfic then I'll update this page. So should I continue or not please tell me.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanx a tone for replying 😃 ..
episode 1-

We see a room filled with lots of sunlight. Then we see a girl wearing a
Light pink pyjami suit, she is sitting in front of her mirror. Her hairs are black and open. She has brown eyes and luscious red lips. Then we see her get up and we see her fully and it's none other than Mythelli. (Tune in Background: La Lalla Hayhey—Hay Hay Hay... Tudu du tu du tu du du…)
We see that she is running or skipping down the stairs.
Mythelli: Good morning mom, Good morning dad, Good morning bahi.
Everyone: Good morning Mythelli.
Janki: Mets beta come and eat something.
Mets: No mom I am getting late for collage and today is the math test and I don't want to be late for it or else I won't be able to finish it.
Dad: Par beta tum toh hamesha math mein first aati ho toh is bar kissi aur k ko first aana ka chance de do.
Everyone laughs. Mythelli leaves after convincing her parents to let her go.

Now we see a guy sleeping on a huge king sized bed. He has a huge TV in his room with his clothes all over the place his room is huge it's as big as a normal house. He has pictures of himself on all the walls. Then we hear his cell phone ring—ring, ring. The guy finds his cell phone being a bit sleepy. He's still under his blanket we cant see his face.
Guy: Hello
Phone: hi ---
Guy: yes Bharat what is it.
Bharat yelling: What is it you are asking me what it is? It is that it's nine o'clock and collage has started and the teacher has started to give our math tests out and you are still sleeping.
Guy: what Sh*t I'll be right there.
The guy gets up and we see his face its none other than Adi. Adi runs to get his clothes out and runs to take a quick shower, he gets ready and around nine thirty he makes his way down to the breakfast table.
Adi: Good morning mom, dad, sis.
Everyone: Good morning Adi.
Adi: Sis how many times have I told you not to call me by my name, come on now I am older than you and you have to respect me.
Mallisha: There's no way am I giving respect to a monkey… Na Na Na boo boo.
Saying that she runs away to her room. Their parents start laughing and Adi tells her that he'll manage her later as he has to go to collage and he doesn't want to be even more late. And he leaves for collage.

Adi arrives at the collage and comes to his class where there is complete silence and everyone is doing their math test. All the girls turn to look at him and all say hi to him but Mythelli is the only one does neither.
Teacher: Mr.Aditya Mehta. Toh phir aap ko time mil hi Gaya collage aana key liye.
Adi: Woh sir main…
Teacher: ab yeh woh woh… kya laga rahka hain idar aao aur yeh math test likho.
Everyone starts to laugh including Mythelli and she laughs the most. Adi looks at Mythelli and gives her a cold stare. And she stops laughing.
After the test finishes Adi rushes out of the class and goes to the cafeteria (canteen). Mythelli also goes to the cafeteria with Pragti. Mythelli was popular at school but not as much Adi was. She was a well known but unknown person. Pragti walk to their usual table in the corner while Adi goes to table that is in the middle of the cafeteria. When he goes their all the girls gather up around him. Adi feels someone looking at him and talking to someone else. It's none other than Mythelli.
Mythelli to Pragti: Look over there Pragti. Look how all the girls have gathered around that Aditya Mehta. Aur yeh Aditya Mehta apne aap ko samaj ta kya hai-ka jab dekho hamesha late hota hain aur uuski shakal to dekho Bandar sey bhi buri hai.
Pragti: Oh ho Mets tum bhi Na. Itna toh cute hai who aur tum…khair tum toh kabhi nahi sudro gi.
Mythelli: Cute my foot.
Pragti: Ok ab chup kar aur uuski aur dekhna band kar.
When he sees that Mythelli was looking at him he makes his way over to her.
Mythelli: Main uuse kab dekh rahi thi.
Adi comes and intrupets.
Adi: Toh phir kisse dekh rahi thi.
Pragti: Oh hi Adi. Yeh toh bas yuhi battein kar rahi thi.
Adi looks at Mets while Mets looks back at him and stays quiet and he talks.
Adi while looking at Mets: Aaj class mein bhi bohot hass rahi thi nah tum. Aur ab mujhe dekh kar mera bare mein battein kar rahi thi. Kya baat hai miss.salwar kameez? Key kya aap bhi mujhe pasand karne lagi hain.
Mets: Number one-I have a name and it is Mets and number two-Mera dimaag kharab hain key main tumhe pasand karon gi. Apne shakal kabhi sishe mein dekhi hain, poore key poore Bandar lagte ho.
Adi: Yeh toh mujhe bhi pata hai key tumhara naam Mets hai lekin miss. Salwar kameez tumhe zaida suit karta hai. Aur haan shakal sishe me dekne key zarurat mujhe nahin tumhe hain.
Everyone starts laughing at Mets and Mets tells Pragti that lets go from here. Mets and Adi are always insulting each other and playing tricks to get each other in trouble all the time and it is because they can't stand each other. They hate each other a lot.And oh yea both of them are rich



Edited by koolkat - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ohh..i saw this in the FF section too
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice fanfic. 😃 cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haaaaaaa its great , shuruat badi achi hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsumm!!!!.. yep yep plz do continue!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o yea btw, is it meant 2 b mehta family or mehra??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsum!!gd job!! 👏 👏
keep it up 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx a lot for the comments guys 😃
n o yea its meant to be Mehta not Mehra

Episode 2-

Next day— Mehta Mansion

Shikar: Good morning Adi beta.
Adi: Good morning dad
Shikar: Woh beta aaj raat ko maine aapne nayi deal ke liye choti se party rakhi hai.
Adi: That's great news dad, aapne party rakh kar bohot aacha kiya.
Shikar: Haan woh toh hai aur ek aur baat, tum aaj raat ko jaldi aa jana.
Adi: Theek hain dad main jaldi hi aa jayon ga. Par dad aap ney deal key kis ke saath hain?
Shikar: Woh Kapoor companies ke saath. Unki company pooray India se mein third number par aayi hain.
Adi: ok dad toh main ab chalta hoon bye.
Shikar: Ok bye beta.
After that Adi leaves for collage thinking who might the kapoors be.

At Collage-

Adi arrives at the collage and sees that someone else has parked his/her car in Adi's spot. So he gets really angry but parks his car at a very muddy place since there weren't any other parking spaces left.
Adi goes to his class when collage started. The teacher Mr. Smith comes in.
Mr. Smith: good morning class.
Students: good morning sir.
Adi thinking: good morning my foot.
After everyone settles down the teacher announces that they have to do a project with a partner and he has already chosen the partners for them.
He announces the partners—it's Pranany-Pragati
Bharat-Shruti
Tiny-Anjali [just added this name lol]
And last but not least: Adi-Mets
Adi-Mets scream in a shocked voice: What?
Adi: No no no…you must be mistaken sir are you sure me and Maithali are partners?
Mets: Yes sir, you must be mistaken please check the list again I am sure you are mistaken.
Mr. Smith: Quiet you two. I am not mistaken you two are partners and that is final and oh yea your project is on love. Now everyone get moving you all have a lot to do this project is due in two weeks. So stick with your partner.
Adi and Mets both get angry and leave for the library to start their project.
Mets: I can't believe I am stuck with you…you…a monkey…
Adi: And I can't believe I am stuck with miss. Salwar kameez.
Mets: Shut up…for the last time my name is Mets.
Adi: You shut up and haan ab aapna kaam karo…tum love par information nikalo aur main yeh magazine pardta hoon.
Mets: You…you…tum se toh baat karna he bakar hai. Agar tumhe is project mein F nahin lena hain toh tumhe meri help karni hogi.
Adi: Help aur tumhara…Oh please uuse toh aacha hai ke main kissi churaal {ghost} ke madad karon.
Mets getting annoyed just starts to walk away.
Adi asks: Aare kahan jaa rahi ho.
Mets: Marne tumhe aana hai toh aao.
Adi: Nahin mujhe Marne ney ke koi zarurat nahin hai lekin haan yeh tum aacha kar rahi hoon. Marna toh tumhe chahiya.
Mets just runs out of the library.
The whole day Adi and Mets kept on fighting and at the end they realized that they have no other option but to work together. So they decided that they'll work equally on the project and when ever they both have time they'll both meet at the library or some place else outside of collage to work on their project. Collage had ended and Mets goes to her car when she sees Adi standing near her car really pissed.
Mets: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.
Adi: Cricket khel raha hoon. Dikh nahin raha ke kissi ka intzaar kar raha hoon.
Mets: Woh toh mujhe bhi dikh raha hai ke tum kissi ka intzaar kar rahe ho lekin tum meri car ke pass kyon intzaar kar rahe ho.
Adi: Tumhari car. Oh toh yeh tumhari car hai or ho be kaise na… Itne toh tuti{broken} si hain.
Adi is looking at the wrong car he is looking at the car beside Mets—Mets car is the car that is parked in Adi's parking spot and that's why he is pissed but he doesn't know that its Mets car and neither does she know that it's his parking spot.
Mets: Woh meri car nahin hai yeh waali meri car hai.
Adi: What? Oh toh phir yeh tumhari car hai. Toh phir main tumhara hi intzaar kar raha tha. Miss. Salwar kameez how dare you park your car in my parking spot.
Mets: Your parking spot. Kya tumhara yahan pe naam likha hai. Nahin na toh phir tum kaise keh sakte ho ki yeh tumhari parking spot hai.
Adi: Naam toh nahin likha par yeh sab jante hain ke yeh meri parking spot hai.
Mets: Jante ho toh mujhe kya.
Adi: You you…
Mets interrupts: Tum mera waqt barbad kar rahe ho.
Saying that Mets opens her car, sits in and zooms away. She does all this while Adi watches.
Adi thinking: I'll take revenge Mets you just wait and watch.



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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow this is great so far! im sooooom glad thers another adi-mets ff! they rock! and your story is really good, i just love the way they fight! continue soon!

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