Aashiqui ||Kriyaansh SS|| Update Page 50 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it ishana...

bahut achi..

exactly...outburst...perfect name...

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazinggg update...!!😊😊🤗
kriya-taanis relation is vry nysh..
so kriya is ready to go...interesting...😃
excited fr the party...!!
update soon!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Madhu and Angel , i understand why you guys can't accept Taani...😛 So , about that. See , if I wanted I could keep Sharon instead of Taani. But then Madhu tu toh jaanti hain na I love bringing Taani as a negative character 😆! You so can't deny that! Iss mein I didn't want any negative character but my fingers would ache! So kept her as kria's sister , plus then I made everyone think that there might be a third wheel , :P which wouldn't have happened if Sharon was the sister.


Chance?


Rey waited outside the party hall , taani came there. Rey looked at her and smiled.
"My Tomboyish best friend has seriously grown up to be a pretty girl."
Taani smiled at him and replied.
"And my ignorant best friend has finally started realizing his mistakes!"
Rey smiled sadly. Taani looked at her date , she excused herself and went in with him.
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Rey waited for kria , everybody had almost come. He thought she wouldn't come , but his heart was not ready to accept it. He stayed there , and finally she entered , looking gorgeous. He smiled , and forwards his hand. Kria kept her purse in his hand and walked ahead leaving his mouth hanging. Kria stopped and turned.
"Can we go?"
Rey immediately nods and entered. Sharon and swayam saw them and smiled. Kria ignoring Rey went to Sharon. The two girls were talking , and their dates could do nothing but look around.
Swayam spoke slowly.
"Hows it going?"
"Terrible! She isn't even glancing a look at me."
"Exactly what you did! Deja vu for us all!"
"Dude , Bas na."
Swayam laughed. Their conversation was broken by a guy , he came and asked kria for dance. She said no , but he insisted so kria had to say yes. They were dancing , much to rey's annoyance. Swayam noticed rey's annoyance and smirked. He whispered in his ears.
"Jaa mere sher le aa apni kria ko!"
Swayam spoke . Rey turned , glaring at him. Swayam laughed out loud. Rey came there , and took hold of kria's hand possessively.
"Excuse me and my date for a second!"
Rey spoke , gritting his teeth. The guy nods , knowing if he didn't go he would have his bones broken. He gulps and went away.
Kria turned to rey annoyed.
"Tumhari problem kya hain!"
"Meri problem yeh hain ki tun mere saath aayi ho! Uske saath nahi!"
"Shayad tum bhul gaye , tumne hi bola tha na. Date par aate hain ek saath phir mein apne raaste aur tum apne raaste."
Kria said rolling her eyes. Rey was dumbfounded. She continued.
"Aur waise bhi mein bore ho rahi thi , aur waise bhi tum dance karne se rahe!"
Rey looked at her and spoke in his defence.
"Huh? Why do you think so?"
"Obvious it is! Dance is to express and agar heartless log dance kar bhi le na toh unke dance mein koi magic nahi hota!"
"Oh!"
Rey smirked. He turned her. Kria looked at him.
"So you mean to say I am heartless?"
"Any doubt in that?"
"And mein magic nahi create kar sakta?"
"Bilkul nahi."
Rey held her waist and pulled her close . Kria's eyes went wide. She could bet she heard taani and swaron whistle.
"Toh help me create magic!"
Rey said slowly.
The music changed and they danced , all stopped dancing and looked at the two.
The song ended and the two just stared into each other's eyes. Their eye lock was broken by the applause they received.
"We did create magic , didn't we?"
Rey spoke , he kissed her hand and went back to swayam .
Kria looked at her hand and then at Rey. She felt anger rush through her veins and went to the terrace and sat there. She held her face , emotionally exhausted!
Why was she letting him affect her? Why? She couldn't do this. Rey was nothing but bad news and a bad memory.
Rey who ha seen her go , walked to the terrace. Be looked at her , what had he failed to see 8 years back? He was such an idiot , he thought to himself. He sighed and sat beside her.
Kria felt somebody sit her , she looked up and saw rey and looked away. Rey spoke.
"Kria , did you give me a chance?"
Kria looked at him.
"If i didn't , why did I enter with you?"
"You didn't."
"If you are sure , so why are you asking me?"
"Kria , look I seriously am not that kind of a guy who can make someone feel special. I am an ass! An imperfect jerk who has hurt you a lot. And I am sorry for that! I know , I know this sorry can't heal the wounds I gave you. But for that you need to give me a chance."
"I'll give you the chance."
Rey looked at her and smiled.
"Thank you so much!"
"I have not completed my sentence Rey."
Rey smile dissapeared.
"Mein tumhe chance dungi lekin usse pehle mujhe ek reason do , ki tum yeh chance deserve kyun karte ho?"
Rey was numb. Kria looked at him , he was quite. She smiled sadly.
"Koi answer nahi?"
Rey looked down.
"Agar yeh jaante hi nahi ki tum yeh chance kyun deserve karte ho , toh mein tumhe yeh chance dun hi kyun?"
Kria rolled her eyes and got up to leave but he caught her hand.
"Wait! I have the reason."
Rey stood up and looked at her. He pinned her hair back and spoke looking into her eyes.
"I deserve this chance , cause you deserve to get freed from the pain I gave you!"
Kria stiffened. Rey cupped her face.
"Kria , meri wajha se tum bahot hurt huyi ho. And mujhe voh saare pains hatane ka ek mauka chahiye. Just one chance Kria. Please?"
Kria looked at him. She knew he was guilty about what he did , she knew he was right.
So she did what she thought was right.
"I'll give you the chance!"
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Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
rs...nd tera start is giving me sm wrong hints...negative nd all...mtlb mene jo itni tareef ki sb bhaad me gai??
rs...nd tera start is giving me sm wrong hints...negative nd all...mtlb mene jo itni tareef ki sb bhaad me gai??
unress...
kriya's attitude man...purse pakda diya...🤣
she is giving him the taste of his own medicine...aage aage kriya..peeche peeche rey...this is fun...:-P
dance with megic...ye dono to agar sath me lade to bi megic create ho jata hai..effortlessly...
loved the way he dominated...
emotional pressure which kriya is feeling...rey is realizing that too...
conversation was deep nd very much realistic...it did make an impact...
update soon
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Its just fab
i luvd it
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Posted: 11 years ago
part( in Pge 39) - awesome update...rey should apologise to kriya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
so kriya is giving rey a chance???? awesome one...pm nahin mila😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
kriyaansh life mein tension and hurdles kya kam hai...that u r thinking of taani as the third wheel in their relationship...

rey ko tadpao ...kriya ko nehi pls

ishu pls...


well the update...was really superb...
wow kriyaansh danced together..

finally kriya gave him a chance...

update it soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Taani is NOT a Negative character!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys! Taani is no third wheel...I was telling Madhu and Angel why I put taani instead of sharon so that you guys think like that. Taani is no negative character nor a third wheel!

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