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PART 26 - 30 : SCROWLL DOWN

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PART - 26

Maan in his ego hurt Geet badly. He left her mummring in her mouth cursing him. After a while when both fresh n up,their breakfast came which she denied completly.

'Geet come here and have your meal.' Maan commands her.

'mujhe nahi khana.' She denied even without glancing at the meal for once.

'why?' Maan asked.

'mujhe bhook nahi hai.' Geet showing her anger indirectly to him.

'as you wish. Khana yaha rakha hai jab bhook lage to kha lena.' rather then manaofyied her he pretend casually towards the their rift.

Geet glared him and punched her pillow hardly. 'Khadus, Akdu, Sadu, dust danav hai pure. Ye nahi k aake sorry bol de. Fine mujhe bhi nahi khana. Ek dinn nahi khaungi to marr nahi jaungi.' Geet cursed him in her mouth as he wont even try to rectify his mistake. In his insanity he hurt her which least he bother.

Though he wasnt made her realise but he was aware of his mistake and also the reason of her denial. Still he waits for her to melt. He think she wont able to stay hungry for long and mend. Today not his day. Four hours passed but she dont even glance at her food. He glance her. She was busy in watching tv. Maan took plate and sit near her. He coughed to grab her attention. 'aahhh.. Geet tv chhodo or pehle kuchh kha lo.'

'i told you Sir..' she gave stretch on it. 'i am not hungry.' she dont pay heed on him.

'Geet mera gussa khane pe kyu nikal rahi ho?' he admit that he is aware of her resent. 'Please kha lo.' he requested this time still fails to convience her. 'ok baba i am sorry. I know zada ho gaya. Mujhe hath nahi modna chahiye tha.' atlast when he saw no other option he apolozise for his wild behaviour.

The moment he apolozise she turned to him abd cribbed like a small kid. 'pata hai apko abhi tak dard ho raha hai mujhe.' she pouts and showing him her arm,that still aching becoz of him.

'i am sorry and i promise aage se nahi karunga.' He was almost ready to hold his ears but Geet stopped him.

'its ok.' she said meakly.

'ab to kha lo.' He offered again with a smile.

In return she too passed a smile and both take their meal. 'so kaha chalna hai aaj?' he asked for the outing.

'kahi nahi kal ka adventure kuchh zada hi ho gaya. Aaj rest hi karenge.' she said annoyingly.

'kyu aaj mere like perfect life partner dhoodne nahi jana?' Maan taunts her.

'dont worry wo kaam b jane se pehle kar k jaungi.' Geet is determined for her decision.

'kyu kal kisi ko pasand kar liya kya?' Maan again taunts her.

'wo ladkia...huhh sab ki sab bakwas thi. Aap tension kyu le rae ho main hu na. Ye tension ab aap mujhpe chhod do.' Geet wont getting his taunts and let his words casually.

'ok do what you want. I will finish my office work.' Maan took his laptop and start doing his work.

Geet cant stay silent for a long. Her mischievious mind is boosting her. 'Maan sir kal wo Sameerane jaise apse baat ki,mujhe achha nahi laga. Or aap b kuchh bol nahi rae the.' she again start discussing about her.

'hmm so what i had to do as per your according?' He asked.

'sir i have an idea.' Geet's voice chimmed suddenly same when she is upto something.

Maan who was engrossed in his work suddely stopped and look upwards to glance her. 'kya? What are you upto now?'

'main na ab usko usi ki language me jwab dungi. Sabak to usko sikhana hi padega.' She rolled her eyes while thinking how she deal with her now.

'sabak kisliye?' Maan asked strongly.

'because she hurts you.' she told clealry.

'Geet we are not going to do anything ok. Leave her.' He cautioned her.

'why leave her.' she argued. 'wo apko dukh pahuncha k apni life me khush hai. Or ap usi ki wajhse ab tak akele ho.' Geet wont ready to spare her as she was the only reason behind Maan's gloomed life.

'whatever. Let me clear you one thing. We are not going to do anything against her. Mujhe usse koi lena dena nahi hai. So let it be.' He was so strongly determined on his decision.

'dont lied. I know you hurted alot yesterday. I knew.' she raised her voice and Maan turn mute. Geet went near him. 'sir apne mujhe dost mana hai na to aap apne dil ki bat mujhse share kyu nahi karte ho?' Geet wants to know what is running in his mind.

'Geet why you eant to discuss her again and again.' he was getting frustrated when anyone talk about his past.

'because i want you to get rid of all the bitter memories of past. Wo bhi humesha k liye. Kab tak aap uski wajhse khud ko takleef dete rahenge. Jab wo apni life me khush hai. To apko b pura haq hai.' Geet cant see him in pain and this pain of him is poking her to teach a lesson to Sameera.

'leave it Geet. I am ok now.' Maan said meakly without glancing in her eyes.

'sir aap theek nahi ho.' Geet know he is lying..


SHE went near him. 'ok let me check.' she put his one hand on his chest where heart lays and covered his eyes.


'Geet what are you doing?' Maan,sometimes get irritated with her chidlish behaviour but he tried to keep himself calm.

'aap chup rahiye or apni aankhe band keejiye.' she commands him bossily.

'why?' he argued.

'kyunki main keh rahi hu. Ab chup kariye or ankhe band keejiye.' she told him strongly.

'fine. Tum manogi thodi na.' Maan give up.

'sir apne aankhe band kar li na?' she asked to confirm.

'ha kar li.'

'good ab jaldi se sochiye ki aap sabse zada pyar kisse karte ho dadi ma k alwa?' Geet start interrogating to make him poured his feelings.

'Geet ye kya bachpana hai...' Maan doesnt get why she is doing all this.

She quickly placed her soft finger on his lips. He feels her buttery soft finger and urged to kiss it,but he control. 'shhh chup rahiye or jo kaha hai wo kariye.' She was holding a control on him.

Maan obeyed her. He start thinking and in his concious mind he get an image,which was not cleared right now. 'Kuchh dikha?' Geet asked curiously.

'hmm.' he replied.

Geet turned excited. 'wow. Tell me who is the lucky one?' she get excited and wants to know the name.

'cant say,nothing is clear. Sab dhundhla sa hai.'

'achha..' her excitement downed suddenly and she start thinking. 'ok no problem. Just tell me one thing,the image you saw was of Sameera?' He asked to scann his feelings accurately.

'NO.' he was quite quick in replying.

Get put his hand down. 'ab aap ankhe khol skte ho.' she allowed him. 'sir ek baat to confirm hai ab aap us creep se pyar to nahi karte. To lets me allow to teach her a very good lesson.' she asked for a permission her gleamed eyes filled with mischief and her naughty mind ids all set to make plan agains her.

'Geet i said NO.' he again stopped her.

Her all excitemet subsided with his big No. 'sir why not? Ab to aap usse pyar bhi nahi karte ho?'

'Geet stop behave like a child. You are not going to do anything and that is final.' Maan stared her and his voice stern.

'please sir. She plead.

'i said No' he roared this time and shutted her.

'ok fine nahi karti apki us Sameera ko kuchh.' she said annoyingly.

'Geet main uske liye nahi tumhare liye keh raha hu. Koi bura kare to iska ye matlab to nahi ki hum b bure bann jaye. Wo apni life me khush hai to rehne do. Geet you are not like her. So please leave her and stayed as you are.' Maan explain why he wont want her to react or take any step against her. Moreover he cares for her and dont wanna let her come in the eyes of society as much. As she always said she left one day so it is very necessary for him to keep Geet away from all,specially from Sameera.

'ok aap pareshan mat hoiye. Nahi karungi main kuchh.' Geet said to calm him but she had somthing in her mind. 'dont worry Maan sir aap kuchh nahi karna chahte na sahi. Par kuchh na kuchh to main zaroor karungi us Sameera ko uski place dikhane k liye. Lekin sabse pehle mujhe ye zanna zaroori hai ki aap dono k past me hua kya tha. Kyu wo apko chhodkar chali gai.' Geet talking in her thoughts.

Rest of the day spend calmly as they had nothing to do. Maan engrossed himself in his work again and Geet as usual eating his brain in between with her non stop chatting. But now Maan get use to of it so he wont irritates like before.

PRECAP: - GEET WAS SO SCARED AND HER BRIGHTENED FACE TURN PALE. MAAN ASKED FOR THE REASON BUT INSTEAD OF REPLYING SHE HUGGED HIM

'SIR MUJHE GHAR JANA HAI ABHI,DADIMA K PAAS.' SHE DEMANDS SUDDENLY.

NOTE:NEXT AFTER GETTING PROPER RESPONSE AND LIKES.

Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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PART - 27


REST of the day was quite bore sply for Geet. Maan found peace in his work but Geet,getting bored. She watch tv or listening music to entertain herself. Being a restless soul she cant sat idle so she made a plan for next day and told him before going into her bed.

'sir kal na hum beach pe ghumne jayenge. Us dinn to theek se ghum b nahi paye the.' she told him with a wide smile which gave him a signal of her mischief like last time.

Maan lost in thoughts and imagine again she is wear only lingeries for beach. 'NO, NEVER',he shout loud suddenly and almost scared her.she stare him so he lowered his voice. 'i mean Goa is a nice place so we can explore other spots,but not beach.' his protective behaviour towards her reflecting through his behaviour.

Geet smiled secreatly,as she was fully aware why he is reacting like that. She controlled her laugh and try to talk camly. 'dont worry sir,this time i wear full clothes. Ab to le chalenge na?' though she trying harder but teasing came in her words. Maan wasnt satisfied. he knows how much mischievious she is. He is staring her with suspecion. 'i promise.' Geet promised to convience his suspecious mind.

'ok... If you are insisting so much then we go there first.' Maan agreed reluctantly because his heart is still worried for her.'ab ek kaam karo jaldi se apni ice cream finish karo kyunki mujhe sona hai.' he commands her to sleep as he want to end the topic.

Geet nodded like a good student and follow what he told her. Bot slept calmly. Next day Maan woke up a bit late. He glance the watch and then at the window which is covered fully with curtains. Daily he get up early as sun rays came direct on his ace through window.
But today window is properly covered. Geet come out of the washroom and wished him morning. She is ready to go for outing. 'good morning sir. Uth gaye aap? Chaliye ab jaldi se fresh ho jaiye fir breakfast kar k ghumne chalenege.' She was so excited and her face gleamed like a sunshine.

'Geet ye window...' Maan asked but before that Geet explain itself.

'achhe se soye na aap. I know is window se subah subah hi light ana shuru ho jati or sari neend khrab ho jati hai tabi aap theek se sote nahi ho. Isliye maine window covered kar di. See smart hu main' Geet felt proud telling him. She felt delighted for doing good things for him and today she feels she done something good for him.

Automatically smile crept on his sculptured lips. Her small gesture gave him unexplainable bounces. His heart felt rejoice,though it was not easy to explain in words. He get up and went to washroom. Meanwhile their breakast came. Maan changed and come out. Both fest their meal and as decided last night went to beach. Both were walking on a sand and Geet as usual telling her never ending stories. The excitement of her eyes was of any small kid. Maan start enjoying her antics,full of life.

'Maan sir lets go for skiing.' Suddenly she demands seeing others.

Maan get scared for her what if she hurt herself. 'no way Geet. Its too dangerous. No not at all. I am not going to allow for this.' he denied her wish.

'sir pls na sir pls. Trust me kuch nahi hoga mujhe. I know how to handle it.' she insist and when he wont melt Geet pouts and dumped her feet in anger.

Again he bow down before her stubbbornness. He do all the arrangements for her safty. Geet is ready for skiing. Maan checked all her gadgets and rope before accelerate the boat. 'are you sure this measure are enough? Because if a single wound she get then i wot spare anyone.' Maan asked in a threatning mode,to make sure that she wont get hurt.

'dont worry sir mam ko kuchh nahi hoga. Rescue guards sath hi rahenge.' diving guard assured him again.

'ab chalo b?' Geet provoked as she got irritation with his talking session with guards.

Maan accelerate the boat to pull her. Guards were with them. Maan's only concentration laid on her so he wont increased the speed much. She enjoyes alot with the water splash everywhere. After half an hour both come out from the sea. She is panting heavily still satisfied.

'maza aaya na sir? Aap aise hi darr rae the.' she was happy proving herself right.

'ha bahut aaya. Geet do tell me one thing,how do you know? I mean from where you learn skiing?' maan get curious as he is the one who was scared,not Geet. She was very confident.

Her all glow and confidence vanished by his single question and she start fumbling. 'wo...wo ha. Wo meri ek school friend thi jo bahut rich thi. Usi ne mujhe swimming and skiing sekhai.' Geet told him. She was glancing here and there,avoide looking at him.

'ok. Ye lo towel or jake changing room sukhao khud ko. Or clothes b change kar lo.' Maan believe and send her to dry herself.

GEET quickly left as she was seeking to avoide the convo. She changed her wet clothes. When she come out,her attention was not on the path,and she collide with someone. The person with whom she collide was so strong and tall. His physicque is very strong so she falls down. She chined up to glance who was the idiot who made her falls down. She glance at his face,but the person was busy in talking with someone so he pay no heed towards her. The very moment her eyes widened with fear. She slipped backwards in a pace moment. When she slipped far away from him,she stood up and start running unconciously,not even glancing the direction she is heading towards. Due to this she again collide with a hardened chest. Her heart thumped against her ribs and she panting heavily. She was scared so much and had no courage to look up. Her whole body is shivering,till two strong hands clapsed her arms.

Her beats lower down a bit as she familiar with warmth of this pair of hands. Geet hugged him firmly,feeling safe in his embrace.

Maan couldn't able to understand her behaviour. Just a moment before she was enjoying like a care free kid,then what happened her so sudden. He pulled her chin up and saw her teary and paniced eyes. His heart sinks. She is the one who always make him smile and right now her own eyes filled with tears and fear. How could he bear that.

'what happened Geet?' Maan's eyes too filled with pain.

He asked for the reason but instead of replying she cuddled him more firmly,as she was absorbing herself in him. Maan embraced her. He was feeling her uneven hearbeats.

'sir i want to go back home. Mujhe dadima k pass jana hai.' Geet demands. She is whimpering and her words are broken.

Maan was so confused with her mysterious behaviour. The firl who wasnt ready to leave goa,now suddenly demands to go back to dadima. Maan parted her to glance her face. 'Geet look at me and tell me what happened?'

Geet saw his eyes. Concern and pain both were there so she controlled on herself. 'sir pls can we go back to hotel. I am not feeling well.

Maan cupped her face. 'Geet kya hua hai? Abi tum itni khush this fir achanak yu itna ghbrai hui kyu ho?' He asked politely but she didnt reply so he scann the route she is coming from,but found nothing. ' Geet waha pe koi hai kya?' he asked one more time.

Geet scared more. 'nai sir aisi koi bat nahi hai. Bas meri tabiyat theek nahi hai. I want to do rest,if you wont mind.' Geet dont tell anything to him.

'Geet i am coming here for you only,or else i had no plans for all this,you know that. Geet if you not feeling well then go for a doc first.' Maan worried and wants to be her alright.

'nai sir doc ki zaroorat nahi hai. Rest karungi to theek ho jaungi. She convienced him.

Maan took her back to hotel. In whole route she wont utter a single word. The girl who cant sit quite for a sec,turned silent for half an hour. Though he felt weired but gave space and wont ask again. They reached hotel. Even in the room she remained same,silent and lost. Maan cant controlled and ask again but she didnt tell him anything. She even skip her lunch and went to sleep. She slept for hours.

At 9pm Maan thought of awakening her as she doesnt eat anything since morning and he dont want her to escape her dinner too. He went to her and called her. When he didnt get any reply he raised his hand to shake her. He touched her and found her body is burning like a heater.



PRECAP:-
ummm no precap 😛
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PART - 28



SOMETIMES things happens beyond our power to understand them...


Maan touched her shoulder to awake her,but get no respond from her side. He jerked her shoulder twise,still she wont make a movement. Maan found her body temprature is high. He checked her forhead and confirmed. Maan turned worried. He shaked her and patting her face frequently,so may she open her eyes. He paniced as it was confirmed that she is not sleeping,but went unconcious due to high feaver.


'ise to bahut tez bukhar hai. Now what will i do?' he thought while roaming his fingers in his hairs.


Maan called at the reception and asked them to arrange doc immediately. In meantime he sits besides her and covered her properly. Stroking her hand with soft hands to give some relief to her. Maan is really tensed. Every passing minute rosing his tension,till doc arrived to their room.


'doc please check her quickly. Ye uth hi nahi rahi hai. By the evening she was perfectly alright. Dont know what happened and she get feaver. Now she...' Maan spoke briskly,explaining doc each and everything in detail. For the first time he is talking as much,and non stop. Doc glancing his face. Panic and fear was evident in his eyes. He quickly filled an injection. 'are you going to inject her,and without checking.' Maan asked strongly.



'no Mr. Khurana ye to apke liye hai. First of all i have to calm your senses so i get a chance to check your wife.' Doc mocked of his restlessness and panic behaviour. Maan squirmed and shut his mouth. 'common Mr. Khurana no need of panic. Atleast allow me to check your wife first. Aap aise hi badbadate rahenge to main patient ko kaise examine karunga.' he advised him to be calm for a while till he examine Geet.


He sat near her and checked her pulse and temprature. 'doc kitna feaver hai?' Maan asked worridely and Doc stare him. Again he trying to stay quite,but not for a long. 'doc please tell me what happened to her. Why she is not awakening?'


'aap bolne denge mujhe?' Doc scold him. 'dont panic like a kid. Nothing serious. High feaver hai isliye apki wife unconcious ho gai hai. I will give her an injection,she will get relief.' He was bit irritated with his non stop questioning.

'but doc i dont know about her allergies. What if she had,so is it necessary to give injection to her?' Maanright now wasnt sure what he saying. Her condition scared him.


'Mr. Khurana no need to worry. Jitni apki umar nahi hai na utna mera experience hai. Is injection ka koi side effect nahi hoga.' He stare his from the gap of his glasses and inject her. 'you know what i think apki wife se zada dard to apko ho raha hai. I must say you love her alot.' doc teased Maan on his impatient and childish behaviour.


'no aisa kuchh nahi hai.' Maan gave explaination to his remark.


'you mean you wont love your wife?' Doc is now taking him on remand in joking way.


'no i didn't meant that. I mean...' he doest found words to defend himself or to give explaination. He is fummbling so doc eased him.


'Relax Mr. Khuran. I am just kidding. Though there is no need of worry but still in case of emergrncy,you can call me anytime. Main isi hotel k room no 503 me hu.' Doc leave him and assured that she will be ok now.



'doc ye suddenly itna kaise beemar ho gai?' Maan is curious.


'may be weather change or may be food habbits. Koi b reason ho skta hai.' he said in a casual manner.


'doc she have a very strange habbit of eating ice cream before going to sleep,or else she babbles whole night in sleep. Do you think she get sick because of this habbit?' Maan is concerend so wanna tell to doc if it helps in her treatment.


'strange habbit,but if she is habitual then it must not be the reason. Waise kafi salo baad main is habbit k bare me sunn raha hu.' Doc went on a thought process and thinking where he first witnessed this habbit.


'you mean aap b kisi ko jante hai jise ye problem hai?' Maan asked curiously.


'ya. Actually kafi saal pehle ki baat hai. When i was practising one of most reputated hospital of Canada,then i came in contact of a kid who had a same habbit. Us time ek accident case aaya tha mere pas. I think that time she was only 5 year old. I remembered how naughty she was. Even getting injured she cant do rest for a minute. Jitna time hospital me thi utne me hi usne pure staff se friendship kar li thi. Non stop chatter box thi wo. Use b bina ice cream khaye neend me badbadane ki aadat thi same like your wife.' doc told him.


Maan get suspecious. 'doc kya naam tha us bachhi ka?'


doc put strained and his forhead squeezed. He think alot and try to remind the name of that baby girl.'ha yaad aaya. Meethi. Uska bhai or parents use Meethi keh k hi bulate the. Ab to wo b itni hi badi ho gai hogi. I wish i could see her. Anyways you just take care of your wife and in case of emergency contact me.' He advised him.


'doc any precautions?' Maan asked without thinking much.


'for what?' Doc glanced him from his glasses edge. His tone is again teasing. Maan looked him innocently. 'just joking. relax. IC k alwa khane me healthy food do.' he smirked and left. Maan was about to sighed he came inside again. 'and ya one more thing just avoide proximaty. I hope you understand what i mean. I know you guys are on HM but...so take care of this.' he shook his head stared him and left the room.


Maan locked the room and sat near her. He was disturbed seeing her laid dull and unconcious. Maan caressing her head softly when he recieved call from dadima. He quickly pick up the call. 'Dadima kaisi hai aap?' Maan feels good as he was missing all of them.


'hum to theek hai bete. Par aap to hume bhul hi gaye waha jake.' Dadima too teased him.


'dadima Geet...' Maan couldnt able to hold andwants to share his feelings with his dadima.


Dadi sensed the tension in his voice. 'kya baat hai bete? Aap pareshan lag rae hai. Is everything alright? Where is Geet? Baat karwaiye humari unse.' Dadima get clue that something is related to Geet thats why Maan uttering her name.


'Dadima she is unconcious due to high feaver. Dadima i wont understand what to do. Here we are alone.' Maan was hard for other but before dadima he turned to a small kid who needs protection and care of his grandmother.


'Maan bete aap ghbraiye mat. Jaise hi feaver kam hota hai aap use leke fauran yaha aa jaiye. Hum private plane ka arrange karte hai. Don't worry.


'dadima wo b ghar aane ki zidd kar rahi thi' Maan told her everything.


'hum to theek hai bete aap dono wapis a jaiye. Or ghbraiye mat. Apna or Geet ka dhyan rakhiyega. Hum rakhte hai.' dadima strengthened him.


After half an hour Geet regain her concious. She try to opened her drowsy eyes gradually. She trying to get up,but cn't as she very feeble due to feaver. Maan come up and helped her. She leaned back. Maan adjust some pillows to give comfort to her.


'how are you feeling now?e he asked softly. He got bit relief seeing her concious.


'sir i am fine.' she said but coughed at the same time.


'ya of course i can see that.' Maan taunts because he cares for her. 'dadima ka phone aaya tha,and i told her everything. Wo chartered plane ka arrange kar degi. Hum log kal hi wapis jayenge.' Maan informed her.


Geet again coughed badly and stared him with her big eyes. 'dadima ko btane ki kya zarurat thi?' she worried for dadima's health as she now get tensed for her.


'ha wo muh se nikal gaya.' Maan said abstructly.


'sir aap b na. Abi wo khamkha paresha hongi. Layiye meri baat karwaiye,main bol dungi i am fine.' geet took lo of strength even uttering a small sentenses. She have a cough too.

'Geet just take rest ok and dont stressed yourself.' Maan commands her. He sat near her and checked her temperature. 'abi b kafi tez bukhar hai. Maine mana kiya tha skiing k liye par tum sunti kaha ho kisi ki.' Maan scold her.


'sir...' she coughed again. 'feaver skiing ki wajhse nahi hua hai.' She said confidently.


'to firr?' Maan wants the reason.


'mujhe kya pata. I am not a doc.' Geet quickly cover up.


Maan stared her but wont shout. He arranged fruits for her. Geet twitched her lips making bad faces at the view of fruits. 'sir i am not going to eat this.' she threw tantrums.


'Geet tumne lunch b nahi kiya. Pls thodasa kha lo.'


'nahi sir please.'


'Geet chup chap khao. Aaj yahi milega. Or ice cream to bilkul nahi milegi.' Maan stared her and she pouts.

'ok fine aap bhi khao firr.'


'ye kya baat hui?'

'mujhe pata hai apne b dinner nahi kiya. Or na karoge i know you.' Geet said confidently as she knew how careless he was reagarding his food. 'aap sath me khaoge to hi main khaungi.' she put condition.


'ok fine main b khaunga. Now happy?' Maan agreed. He dont want her to use her energy in talking. Geet smiled weakly and both eat fruits only.




PRECAP:-
Geet stirred and buried her face in his musculine chest revealing from his shirt. Her warm lips touched his bare skin and made very difficult for him to laid with her. He trying to move but she circled his waist. Maan's warmth comforting her.



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Geet slept after taking her medicines. Maan was laying on couch. His eyes went dizzy but before falling in sleep,he was fully awaked by her babbling noise. He went to her. She is babbling constantly. Maan noticed she was shivering. He immediately turn off the ac and waits to subside her trembling but no use. Maan rubbed her hands and feet,which aint help either. She need more warmth. Maan was in dilemma. He know exactly what to do but cant able to take decision. After thinking much he gave importance to her need,so he ripped the sheet and slipped quickly in beside her.

]He pulled her onto her side with her back to him,into the warmth of his hard lenghth. He concious may she objected or even shout on him,to his taking control like this. But she needed this only at this very moment. His body is so warm for her. Her rapid breathig gradually slowed down and become stedier. She felt sleepy and protected. It was a half concious thought,so transient she didnt even question the strangeness of it as she drifted off,secure in the strength of his arms and in the cushioning warmth of his body. She babbles and Maan hear something.

''i don't wanna come with you. I don't..'' the only sentence she is repeating continously. But as soon she got relief and due to effect of medicines her sleep deepened,her babbling stopped. She turned to Maan,who is still awaken.

Geet buried her face in his musculine chest revealing through his shirt. Her warm lips brushed against his bare skin of his chest and send ripples of sensation through his whole body. It becaome very difficult for him to laid next to her. He thought of moving from there,but Geet circled her arm around his waist and struck him with her. Its very easy to carried away when she is as much close to her. He feels his body is burning with new tormentation.

'stop it Maan,there is no need to think much. Stay calm and sleep quitely.' Maan cautioned himself and trying to get rid of thoughts vibrating his beliefs. He won to overpowered himself and managed to sleep.

In morning she found herself laid on him,feeling so warm and cozy. She felt very secured in his arms. Sleeping with a stranger is not acceptable,but he wasn't a stranger. She trusts him. He was still sleeping like a baby. Geet wriggles to come out from his arms. Her moments awake him to. Both glance each other. Tesnse air flowed between them. Maan loosen his grip on her. He was bit concious of her reaction. He have a strong believe that she gona burst on him. Before she shout on him Maan trying to clerify her. 'Geet wo main...'

Maan wants to but Geet wont even alow to complete. She cuts in between. 'thank you sir.' Maan wont believe on his years. He was amused and stare her in amusement. Is she exactly ment which she said right now,or its a taunt. Instead of cursing him she saying thank you to him. 'i know sir i was shivered badly last night thats why you slept here.' she clerifies his all doubts.

'ha Geet maine ac band kiya tha,but you shivered alot,trust me...' Maan dont want her to mistook him.

'sir aap pe trust nahi hota to apke sath nahi reh rahi hoti. Main to firr bhi shrarati ho sakti hu par aap nahi.' Geet's word took away all his tension and cleared the air between them. Maan's eyes gleamed seeing her trust on him.

Maan checked her temprature. She still have feaver. 'Geet tume to abi b feaver hai.' he feels concerned.

'i am fine sir dont worry. Just tell when we have to left for home?' Geet wants to go back Mumbai at soon as possible.

'fresh ho jate hai pehle. Firr breakfast kar k niklenge.' Maan told her the schedule. Geet's eyes too gleamed. 'achha Geet ek baar dadima se baat kar lena.'

'main usnhe hi call karne wali thi. Aap jaiye i called her.' Geet assured and gave smile to him. Maan went inside the washroom.

Geet called to her. 'good morning dadima.' she wished her morning.

She sighed hearing her voice. 'good morning beta kaise hai aap? You sounds so low beta.' hearimg her chocking voice dadima get worried.

'dadima i am fine. Ye Maan to bina wajh khud pe pareshan hote hai or apko b kar diya. Dadima i miss you all.' Geet turned gloomed again.

'we all miss you too beta. Aap log a jaiye beta. Waise bhi apka dhyan rakhne wala waha koi nahi hai.' Dadima talked with her and she feelss her motherly care,which delighted her.

In washroom:

Maan remove his shirt. He was standing infront of mirror and he noticed her lipstick mark on his chest. Maan rubbed his fingers on that portion and lost in the moment when she was so close to him and snuggled him firmly. Reality hit him soon and he washed the mark instantly. 'calm down Maan she is just a mere employee of yours. So no need to think much. I help her and she helping me,thats it.' he clenched his eyes,still seeing her face only. Maan was vibrated violently with his new grewing feelings. He was scared,not ready to accept them. 'ye ladki mujhe pagal kar k chodegi. Bas jaldi se ye drama khatam ho or,taki main life firrse se normally jee saku. Or yahi sahi bhi hai hum dono k liye.' he turn on the shower at full pace to coold down. He decided to maintain distance with her,specially and physical contact.

Maan come out,so now its her turn to use washroom. She too wants to resh n up. But due to feaver her body turn feeble. She only took two step and her legs start shaking. She was about to falls down but he saved her. Maan hold her lovingly. Maan saved her. Geet's eyes still closed out of fear.

'Geet you ok?' he asked.


Hearing is voice she realise that she is safly lands in his arms and saved now. Geet opened her eyes and glance in his deep dark brown eyes.. Both lost for a moment.
'Main theek hu sir.' she broke the trance moment between two. Maan supports her and make her stand on her feet.

'what are you doing? Dont you know that you are not well?' Maan scold her.

'sir but i need to change na.' She said meakly.

'ya.. Ok let me help you.' Geet's eyes popped out with shock. 'i mean washroom tak le chalta hu.' Maan scooped her and left her in washroom. 'when you done called me. I will come to take you.' he instructs her. Maan closed the door. Meantime maid come and packed their belongings.

Geet's condition is really worst. Some how she managed to take bath and change. With the support of wall stepd out slowly slowly. As she opened the door Maan ran to help her. Geet clenched his shoulder and walk with him. Maan settled her on couch and gave medicine.

'take it,firr breakfast kar k hum check out karenge.' Geet take tablet and looking for the water,but Maan gave glass of milk intead of water. She made annoying face at the glimpse of milk.

'sir aap pani do. Ye main nahi peeungi.' Geet denied strongly.

'Geet doc ne strictly instruct kiya hai ki medi dhood se leni hai. So peena to padega.'

'fine to mujhe nahi leni medicine bhi.' She put down the tablent on plate.

Maan glared her. 'medi to tume leni hi padegi or wo dhood k sath.' he commanding her.

'or agar na lu to?' Geet act stubbornly pulling his patience.

'then i have many more ways to pour it in you.' His brows raised and voice having a message of cautioning.

Geet gulped seeing his gestures of warning. 'khadus kahi k. Jab dekho rob jamate hai. Pee le Geet kahi sach me ye tujhe pilane k liye kuch kar na de.' She twiched her lips and thinking what she will do now.

'Geet agar sochna ka programme ho gaya ho to apni medi lelo,and mind it dhood pura pina hai.'he stared her. His eyes were not warm like before. It was like he always.

Geet scared and followed his instructions. She finish the glass full in one go. 'thats like a good girl. Now come and finsih your breakfast.'

'no i dont want any thing,sply after this milk.' She cribbed and kaing faces as she guld very bad thing,which spoil her mouth's taste.

'khao wara ais hi 'nashediyo' ki tarah yaha waha ludakti rahogi. Firr main nahi aaunga pakdne.' he warned her.

Her jaw ddropped. 'hwww apnne mujhe Nashedi kaha?' she felt annoyed and insulted.

Maan frowned. 'ha kaha to?'

Geet step back. 'to to kuchh nahi. Mujhe achha nahi laga ha. Aage se mat kehna.' she covring herself and pretendinng that she aint afraid of his big eyes and hard voice. 'by the way wo hota kya hai?'

She asked the exact meaning of what he called her and that makes him grinned. She is indeed innocent and act like a small child. 'pehle breakfast karo firr btaunga.' Maan put condition before her.

'nahi pehle packing b karni hai.' she made excuses.

'sab kaam ho gaya hai. Infact humare bags car me load b ho gaye hai.' Maan close all the doors for escape. No excuse is left and she had to obeyed him reluctantly.

Both left the room. He clenched her wrist firmly to keep her safe from falling. Dadima arranged everything for them. Both sit in a car. Again she felt sleepy due to her medi effect and rested her head on his shoulder. Maan arched and gave more space to her to made her feel comfortable. Both reached to aerodrome. He awaked her.

'Geet wake up.' He whispered softly and patted her cheek.

Though she awake but her eyes were dizzy. She felt sleepy and her white cheeks are red like apple. Dye to the feaver. Maan knows she is not in a condition to walk at herself,so he come out first and carried her in his arms. Geet too encircled his neck and slept again. She is completely depends on him.

Inside the plane she remain same like in a car. Airhostess come to ask if they need something but Maan send her away and instruct not to disturb them as she is sleeping on his shoulder,encircling his arm firmly.

Maan glance her and put behind the hairs coming on her face. He inhaled sharp. 'it seems all are against me. Jitna Geet se durr rehna chata hu wo utna hi or kareeb aa jati hai. Kya karu main iska? Bilkul chhote bachhe jaisi hai. Ise akla bto nahi chhod sakta na.' He was struggling wih himself and tilted his head on back seat. Closing his eyes to find the solution of the situation in which he struck with her.

In few hours flight lands. Both come out. Already his driver waiting for both. He recive both and in one hour they were at KM. Both entered inside. Maan still holding her hand. Geet is now better then before. Her medi works. All are deperately waiting for both. As soon they get inside Geet saw dadima roaming in hall, she jerkly reed her hand and ran towards dadima. She hugged dadima firmly. Maan was in shock with her behaviour. How easily she left him. Dadima kissed on her forehead.

'kya haal bna liya hai apne beta. Abi b feaver hai apko.' Dadima feels concerned for her.

'Bhabhi hum sabne apko bahut miss kiya sply dadi ne.' Annie come to meet her.

'ha or isne bhi. Tabhi to dadima ko dekhte hi hath chhuda k bhag gai.' Maan muttered furiously. He had blurted it out against his wish. He himself wasnt aware what he said exactly. His words just come out and all's brows knotted.

'dadima kuchh jalne ki smell aa rahi hai nahi?' Annie got a chance to teased him. He himself gave a reason.

All mocked and he frowned. ''ab miss to karegi na. Apne dhyan jo nahi rakha humari beti ka. Char dinn nahi hue or aap inhe beemar kar k le aaye.'' dadima too teased him.

'nai dadima inhone mera bahut khyal rakha sachhi. Ye to aise hi bukhar aa gaya.' Geet quickly raised in his support as she feels bad all are teasing him without any fault.

All three women signaled each other.

'wow ye sahi hai. Ek ko kuchh kaho to dusre ko takleef hoti hai.' Meera too jumped in teasing session and all again laughed on both.


PRECAP:- MAAN: SABKE GIFT DE DIYE ARE YOU SURE NO ONE IS LEFT?
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ALL start teasing both and made both embarassed. Maan wont like and decided to leave.


'you carry on i am leaving for office.' He declared.


'bhai not done. You just arrived and wants to go office.' Annie complaints.


'because i have a lot of work to do.' he said and left even without hearing anything.


Geet laid and rested her head in dadima's lap. She love to hide herself in her mortherly warmth. Dadima caress her head lovingly. 'bete aap bahut thak gaye hai. Hume lagta hai apkko abi rest karna chahiye.' Dadima told her to rest for some time as she is not well yet.

Meera bring juice for her which she intake without any tantrum. 'are abhi to sabke gifts b dene hai.' Geet remind herself.

'there is no need of hurry. You can do it later in evening. Right now you do only rest.' Meera also want her to relax.


'but i want to talk with bhabhi.' Annie objects.

'not now bete. She is not well and tired too.' Dadima intrupt and make her understand. She send her to her room. Geet went to his room and feel relaxed their. She love to be there again as she was seeing it after ages.

In KGI:

with Maan's arrival alarm alerts everyone. All's breath chocked and they run to their seats and trying to present perfection to his eyes. Maan entered and everyone stud up to greet him. Ignoring all he straight went to his cabin. His attitude changed suddenly. Maan summoned both Adi and Dev in his cabin.

Pinky gulped hard and asked in a scared voice. 'Adi sir Maan sir to monday ko wapis aane wale the na. To firr aaj kaise aa gaye. Aaj to friday hai.' She scared seeing Maan in office so early.


'heheheh Pinkyji wo Maan sir hai,koi fast nahi jo monday ko aayenge. Unka office hai wo jab chahe aa skte hai. Filhal main ja ra hu or else meri khair nahi.' Adi giggled and deeply prayed,Maan wont scold him.

Both dev and Adi entered in his cabin. Maan is engrossed in reading files.


'bro aap itni jaldi wapis aa gaye?' Dev was confused with his urgent return.

'Dev this is my office so only talk about work,nothing else.' Maan stared him and coutioned. 'Adi i want all the detail of the project we are going to do with Mr. Kapoor. And yes fix my meeting with mr. Ashwin as soon as possible.' Maan instruct him to.


'right sir.' he aured and left his cabin.

'Dev Mr. Fernandis k project ki kya progress report hai?' Maan asked for detail.


'very good bro. Infact unke 3 hotels ki construction shuru ho gai hai.' Dev said with a smile.


'sabka kaam abhi k abhi band karwao.' Maan commands and his brows and frowened.


Dev was shocked first. 'what? Ye aap bol rae hai? Bro isse to humra nuksaan hoga...' Dev needs explainantion.


'ha par usse zada nuksan hoga Mr. Fernandis ka.' Maan was in snapping mode.


'what happened bro? I s he done anything wrong.' Dev still in confusion.


'now i make him learn how to respect MSK's time. He mess with me now his turn to pay back it. Meeting k naam pe usne mera pura dinn khrab kiya. Jiski wajhse Geet ko kitna torture hona pada hai. I just cant forgot her condition on that day.' Maan is fuming reminding her scared face and swelled eyes.


Dev grinned. 'bro apko time waste hone ka zada gussa hai ya Geet ko jo takleef hui uska?' He teased him but his dreadful glare make him shut his mouth. 'ok i do what you want. Wo khud chal k aayega apke pas mafi maangne.' Dev assured him and he too left his cabin. Dev call his engenieer and instruct him to stop the construction till their next command.


Maan leaned back on his chair and start thinking about Dev's remark. Is this really the reason what Dev asked. He did because of Geet's pain and suffering. Much he think,he get frustrated. Meantime a knock sound broke his trance. Adi entered with the detail he asked for. Adi handover the file in his hands and he start checking every detail. 'Adi we have to do the formality work as soon as possible. So do arrange meeting with Mr. Kapoor.' Maan told him while reading the file.


'sir we tried but fails to Mr. Kappor as he wasn't in Canada. Unke office se msg aaya tha ki wo khud hume contat karenge.' Adi informed him.


'fine and what about Mr. Ashwin's projects?'

'i fixed your meeting with him. Tomarrow sharp 11.'


'Adi after this meeting do arrange the urgent meeting of all board of directors. I need to check progress report.' maan was completely engrossed himself in office work. He was counting every single detail of past 5 days.


Adi nodded and followed his instructions. Whole day Maan was busy with his work. At 10 pm he reached to KM with Dev. As he entered in hall area,one amiliar sound of giggle entered in his ear and delighted him. Geet sounds much better then morning. He doesnt even know why but he too feels good and smile came on his lips.


GEET was with enclosed by Dadima,Annie and Meera. All are busy in hearing her never ending stories. And with that they opening their gifts too seeing Dev Geet rush to him and handovered one packet to him. 'its for you. See how is it.' Geet asked excitedly.


Dev open his packet. 'hey its cool. Thanx Geet.' Dev said happily seeing his gift.


All are happy getting their gifts. 'chaliye ab aaap dono jaldi se fresh ho jaiye hum khana lagwate hai.' Dadima send both for a change. Both nodded and obeyed dadima. After dinner all moved to their rooms.


Maan scanned whole room. 'Geet tumne sabke gift de diye?' he asked curiously.


Geet think for a minute. 'yes sir de diye.' she said proudly with a smile.


'are you sure that no one is left?' Maan demanded.

Geet looked at his set and hard face. She get nerveous and brought some paper. It was a list she made before leaving. She checked it twice. 'no sir no one is left. Maine sabke gifts de diye hai.' She confirmed with a sparkling eyes. 'isiliye maine list bana li thi taki koi reh na jaye.'



Maan snatch the list from her which annoyed her. She though Maan wont trust her abilities. He checked the list. All the names are mention their with their gifts. Even servants name are also included in that except his name.


'inko to mujhpe zara yakken nahi hai.' Geet mummered in her mouth. 'dekha sir i did all this systematically. Taki koi galti na ho.' Geet had a proud feeling feeling for herself. Her voice is chimming with confidence that she wont do any blunder this time.


Maan jerked the list in her hand. His short,sharp inhale was audible as he returened to his couch. 'ab light band karo mujhe neend aa rahi hai.' He turned his back to her. There was a silence for a while.


Geet not able to understand what happened to him sudddenly but she wont bother much as his mood swings are normal for her,so get habitual of this. She silently moved to bed and sat. 'sir where is my ice cream?'


'no ice cream till you regain your health. Now turn off the lights i want to sleep.' His voice is dry.


'sir i am fine sachhi.' she insisting.


'good night Geet.' Maan completely ignoring her excuses.



This was the clear msg for her. Now there is no use of any argument with him. She turn off the lights but without Ice cream she wont able to get peaceful sleep. She start planning how to get ice cream,so she waits till he slept. After half an hour she stood up and went near him to make sure weather he is sleeping or not. Maan's eyes were closed. Geet turn happy and without making any noise she left. Gradually she reached to kitchen area and opened the fridge. She is looking for her ice cream bowl. Finally she got for what she is there. Geet dragged it out and open the lid.

'ae lo isme to vanilla ice cream hai.' She said dissappointingly seeing the flavour. 'koi nahi Geet ice cream to hai na.' she consoled her self. Geet searched spoon and scooped icecream. She is about to relish it,when her elbow hit against something hard.

She get concious and realized that someone is standing. Geet scared to death. With hr closed eyes she turned around and couraged to open her one to glance who is there. Glimpse of him made her eyes popped out. Yes Maan is there standing behind her. Quickly she hide the bowl behind her back and gave a fake smile to cover up herself.

'aap soye nahi abhi tak?' she asked to changed the topic. Maan staring her and without uttering a word move ahead towards her. Geet stepping back. 'wo mujhe na pyas lagi thi isliye main yaha aai..' she quickly think and lied.


'so you need water thats why you are here?' he asked and she nodded silently. Icecream bowl me Pani ki bottle kab se rakhne lag gaya Nakul mujhe to pata hi nahi tha.? Maan said sarcastically. 'Mere mana karne k bawjood tum yaha aa gai. Ek baar me baat samjh me nahi aati?' Maan scolds her and she trembled like a dry leaf. His glares are enough to threat her and this time he is scolding her hadly. Geet again placed the bowl inside te fridge and made a way to their room. Maan was staring her and Geet looking back again and again. Maan is still glaring and waits for her to reach to their room.


'Khadus Hitler kahi k. Thodi si ice cream hi to li thi par ghur to aise rae hai jaise main koi culprit hu or wo jailer.' she cribbed while walking and cursed Maan for not allowing her to eat ice cream. 'kabi kabi pure monster bann jate hai. Achha hua jo unke liye gift nahi liya. He dont deserve it.' While talking to herself she said something which clicked her mind. With her own words she realized that she brought gifts for everyone except him. 'Hww jhalli how can be you so dumb? Now i got why he is asking again and again. Damnit. Unko kitna bura lag raha hoga. Servants tak ko gift diye par unko nahi jo teri itni care karte hai. Gusse wale hai par care b to karte hai. Koi baat nahi,i mend my mistake.' Geet realized and determined to mend it.




NOTE:- WANNA INFORM YOU ALL THAT THIS IS MY LAST THREAD AND LAST UPDATE. AS YOU GUYS DON'T HAVE TIME TO GIVE LIKE AND COMMENTS THEN WHY I WASTE MY TIME WITH YOU.


IF I FEEL I CONTINUE IT ON MY BLOG ONLY FOR MY LOYAL READERS. THEN PLEASE DON'T COME TO ME FOR PASSWORD. [:X]
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congratulations for the new thread
will be waiting for update 😛
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Congrates on new thread richuuu :)
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congrats for the new thread dear

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