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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
omg interesting teaser
plz update ASAP
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#32
interesting teaser
updatexsoon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

such an awesome teaser
luved it
pls cont soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

interesting teaser
updatexsoon plz
thnks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Chapter 3(A)

Place : ZaYa Room.
Time: Around 12 in the Noon

Aliya was lost in some thoughts and staring the window sitting on the Sofa when the maid entered.

Maid: Aliya
Aliya did not answer and still lost...
Maid : Aliya...
Aliya realized someone is calling her and got up from the sofa and sais yes.
Aliya: Yes...
Maid : Are you ok? Is everyting ok with your health?
Aliya faking a smile
Aliya: Yes, I am ok.
Maid : Ok right then take rest.
Aliya : Ok.
Maid : (Monologue) Something is fishy here. Aliya is not happy here. She is lost in something. She even dint asked me for what I have visited.

Place : Barkat Villa Kitchen
Time : Around 9 at night.

Zain came from outside and reached the kitchen at first. He had a bottle in his hand and he drink some from it and kept the res inside the fridge in the place of a cold water bottle by removing it.

Place : Pool side Barkat Villa
Time : Around 11 at night

Aliya was crying out loud in the pool side. She heard some foot steps, she is shocked and in a hurry wiping out her tears.
She still couldnt make her face casual so she sat down again and started splashing the water.
She heard a voice saying...Aliya


Aliya : Yes, maamu
Osman : Aliya what are u doing here?
Aliya : Ummm I came here for...ummm...huhh...for...
Osman : Whatever go to sleep now.
Aliya : Ys, mammu.
She is leaving
Osman : Aliya
Aliya turned and responded
Aliya : Yes maamu
Osman : Is everything ok?
Aliya : Yes, maamu...Good night.
Osman : Good night.

Place : Barkat villa Kitchen
Time : Around 11:30 at night.

Aliya went inside the dark kitchen and took out a bottle from the Fridge and drank it...

Chapter 3(B) will be updated by today night.




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Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Thank you all for your like and comments on the teaser.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
I feel bad for Aliya
Awesome update dear 👍🏼
beautifully penned down
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
very well written
superb
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
awesome update
beautifully written
can't wait 4 d next part:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
very well written
do cont soon
thanks for pm :)

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