SANDHIR COLLABE FF- YOU ARE MY SOUL PART 1 PAGE 12 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Cool Character sketch 😃

aww thanks manu😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Awesome prologue yaar
Vids changed and Ankit too... New one seems to be interesting hehehehe...
Jaldi update karke suspense khol do

Thanks for the PM

thank you again manu😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

ossum prologue and concept...
cs is lovely...
continue soonish!!!
loved it to the core...
GOOD WORK GUYS.,...(y)
loads of love,

Anu

thank you kamchor🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvSHQ

Interesting...continue soon 😊

THANK YOU DEAR😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: manalee

Different loved the prologue, continue soon😃

thank you manalee😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sorry for being late😳😳

Enjoy part 1 of our story😊

YOU ARE MY SOUL

It is a strange thing that when I feel most fervently and most deeply, my hand and my tongue seems tied alike, so that I cannot rightly describe or accurately portray the thoughts which are coming into my mind. But still I'll try my best

Mansion is decorated with flowers and light. But there is nothing special in this month or there is no festival. So why it is decorated like a BRIDE. What is the occasion. Something is fishy because it is that mansion whose owner was just ... oh don't talk about that.

A 5 or 6 year old girl is sitting on the bed of her room keeping a doll near to her heart. She is wearing a purple color anarkali suit. She looks so innocence, pure as soul. Her hairs are tied in a high ponytail.

Her mother come inside the room, but the sight in front of her eyes makes her remember something, something which was the cause of destroying her daughter and son's life.

FLACEBACK

It was the afternoon, but mr, agarwal come back his home from his office. Strange. He was sweating , his breath was uneven. He was looking so tensed, but why. Mrs agarwal was in kitchen at that time. He was shouting.

Mr agarwal-anju, anju, where are you?

Mrs agarwal- what happened , you are looking so tensed. Tell me whats the problem.

Mr agarwal-we have to leave this city now.

Mrs agarwal-but why. I m tensed now plz tell me.

Mr agarwal- we have not so much time to waste for talking. We have to before they reached there.

Mrs agarwal-what are you talking about I cant understand anything.

Mr agarwal-you go 1st and ready for voyage. Go quick. Go what are waiting for.

Mrs agarwal was going to to take her 1st step but door bell rang.

Mr. agarwal-go and check. Who is there? If they ask about me then told them that I m not in city now.

Mrs agarwal- ok

She is totally confused.

She goes and open the door. There was a lady who is standing with 2 of her bodyguards. She was mrs shekhawat i.e. renuka sanyal.

Anju-you. Sorry I could not identify who are you.

Renuka-can I come inside 1st.

Anju-ok, come in.

And both the lady came inside. Mr agarwal was sitting on the sofa. Renuka comes and passed a smile to him. he also passed a fake smile . she settled on the other sofa which was just in front of him.

Mr agarwal- ohh mrs shekhawat you. What a pleasant surprise [everything is fake]

Renuka-I m not here to waste mine and yours time, so I m just coming to the point

Mr agarwal-ok , tell whats the matter.

Renuka-me and my husband harsh know your business condition very well, so we want to help you in this situation.

Mr agarwal- but why, you will help me without any reasone.

Renuka-not without reason. We will help you in a condition.

Mr agarwal[shocked] condition...

Renuka-ya condition,

Mr agarwal-but what condition,

Renuka-umm.. we will help you and you will marry ur son with our daughter vidushi.

Mr agarwal-[shocked] what.

Renuka-don't shout mr agarwal.

Mr agarwal-you are saying that we will marry our children..its a crime. And I don't shout really.

Renuka- look we want just fix marriage now, we are not saying that marriage will be done tomorrow.

Mr agarwal-no, I cannot do this

Renuka-I m giving you time, umm..i thing today is marriage ceremony of your relative, so meet you there .so now I m going. Bye have a nice day.

And she left the house.

Mrs agarwal was dumbstruck.

Anju[panic] -who was she. And what is the matter

Mr agarwal- everything is finished anju, everything is finished.[and hide his face with his both palm]

Anju-but plz tell what happened plz

Mr agarwal- if you remember I had started a new company few months back. I don't know why but association found some faults in products and decide to seal the company. They give us time of 1 week to repay the amount as penalty which they had decided. And no one ready for help us.

Anju-plz don't worry everything will be fine soon.

Mr agarwal-but when and how..

Anju-we have to take a risk for this. We should think once about marriage proposal.

Mr agarwal-ohh. You are saying that we will destroy ankit's life really.

Anju-we have not other option.

Mr agarwal-if they refuse to help us then.

Anju-we have to think something.

Mr agarwal-huhh, ok so now go and ready for the marriage ceremony and also ready the children. We are going there.

Anju-ok.

SOMEWHERE ELSE IN KOLKATA.

Renuka is talking to man.

Renuka- I m so happy harsh. What we want from a long time is finally happened.

Harsh-so they are ready for marriage.

Renuka-they have to. Because they didn't have any other option, and after that our plan ...

Harsh-huhh, but we have to wait till children will become adult then our plan will be succeed.

Renuka-haan,but till then we can celebrate our victory.and one more thing they will meet us today at their relative's marriage ceremony.

Harsh-huhh.

AT EVENING

Mr and mrs agarwal arrive their with their children sanyu and ankit. It was the marriage of their relative. Early in the starlit evening, the smoke from the sacred fire began searing her eyes. The rituals pushed the ceremony deep into the night, in a crucible of heat and haze. After the first two hours, By midnight, with Hindu priests leading a girl and her husband, in the climactic ritual, involving seven purifying circuits of the wood-burning fire, priests continue his mantras.

Mr and mrs shehawat was also there.

Renuka comes near to mrs agarwal and ask her to meet in a room, with mr agarwal.

Anju - [to mr agarwal] they wanted to meet us.

Mr agarwal-ok lets go.

They gathered in a big room.

They all settled on their seats and start conversation.

Harsh-so what you think about proposal.

Mr agarwal-I don't know why you want to marry ur daughter with my son that too in early age, but I m ready for it because I have no choice after it.

Harsh-its mean now marriage is fixed.

Mr agarwal-but wait we also want to put a condition before you.

Harsh-what, ok tell.

Mr agarwal-as you want to marry ur daughter to my son I also want that your only son will marry with my younger daughter sanyu. Its mean you will marry ur both children with both of mine.

Harsh-what.. nothing like that will be going to happen.

Renuka-ok we are ready.

Harsh-but renu...

Renuka-we are read don't worry mr and mrs agarwal

Mr agarwal-so now what

Renuka-we will meet you in ur house tomorrow

Mr agarwal-ok

Mr and mrs agarwal went from there

Renuka-harsh what was you going to...

Harsh-but what you did, rd's marriage.

Renuka-yaa it was necessary for us and for our future.

PRESENT

She comes out of trance when the lil girl called her.

Girl-mumma what are you thinking, come here na, and plz do a nice hairstyle of my doll.

Anju-sanyu beta we have to go hall now. I will do it later.

Girl-ok mumma.

They both came down stair.

Sanyu sits with her mom. There is a boy of similar age is also sitting with a girl and her brother is also present there. Her mother said to all the children that they will go and play games what they want.

Children went from there.

Mr agarwal- tell mr harsh what we do now.

Harsh-you just sign these papers now.

Mr agarwal- and what is written on it.

Renuka-this is just a agreement paper that, that you will not going to back off from this marriage.

Mr agarwal-ok give it to me.

Harsh handed him the agreement papers and mr agarwal sign them [without reading]

PRECAPE- their life after 12 years.

Ok guys this was the 1st part of this story😊

I know its too short but plz forgive me😳😳

I also know that it is boring but this part is necessary for proceeding story.😳😳

Next time I'll give big parts of my all stories [now this time pakka]

love u all

sakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Res
.
unres
yey m 2nd. 🥳 [:D/]

Cmng 2 update,
a really amazing update. 😊
Rd's parents put cndtn infrnt of sanyu's parents.
I thnk dey r in verge of sm kind of revenge. 😲
itz jst my guess.
Whtevr result may be bt our sandhir vl marry. 😛

update nxt part asap.
Edited by Mohini2012 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
fab,awesome,part. thanx for pm me.updet asap.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Hey! Sakshi
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely and beautifully written👏👏
Marriage of SanDhir😳
at small age😲
love it to the core❤️
keep it up👍🏼
Update soon
Eagerly waiting to read further😉
Thanks for pm
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Starting ichi h ...to next part kessa hoga...nice update...yr itne idea late kaha se ho tum lo

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