DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow what a twist
superb update

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update so maan and gang are intelligence bureau officers and maan is their head!!! They all were protecting sam and mr.khana knows about it!!! Loved the update !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super update with an interesting twist...Loved it..Pls continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful part...interesting tern of events...maan and his team protecting Sam...now what will happen? Will Sam confess her feelings to maan?or maan will confess his love to geet?
Want to know what will happen now???? Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Wonderful update
Maan & others under cover officers
Dev used geet to kill sam...but maan saved sam & geet too
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG dono updates mindblowing
itna sab kuch ek saath. baap re yeh dev kitna kamina nikla aur geet ko istemaal kartha gaya😡😡aur yeh buddu uspar shaq ki nahi kiya

so maan is under cover cop and protecting sam from underworld people and in this geet phass gayi hai.

chalo now atleast geet came to know about maan
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
very exited about next part
thank u for nice update

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 26
awesome dear...
OMG so that Dev is the criminal...
poor Geet...
so they were all lies...
and Geet idiot gave her sim too to him and started using the one he gave her...
will that cause any trouble?
shes so naive...
so all officers...
Maan is gonna yell at her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 27

Geet ko patha nahi ab kya karein...uski hoshiari toh Dev ke samne har gayi, ab ye sochne sudarne ka kaam toh Maan ke haath chodthi hai, ab Maan kya kehtha hai Geet wahi karegi

She waits for Maan...

Maan comes in the evening...

Maan: chalo, Geet, humme jaana hai

Geet koi sawaal nahi karthi...she just goes with him...

Maan takes her back to Delhi...

At the apartment...

Geet locks herself in her room...

She is totally exhausted...this day has turned her life into hell...she feels betrayed...even her babaji had no mercy on her...

She feels like that's the end of her life...

Many a time she thinks why she didn't jump off the window then itself and ended her life there itself...but she didn't know that there was this man, Maan, who had taken control of her now, she wonders what will happen the next day...she keeps thinking about her mistakes and their consequences...

It's 2 am...Geet feels thirsty...

She comes out omly to find Maan still there, lying on the couch...

Geet is puzzled to find him there...

She had already given him a lot of trouble...she decides she will not troulble him anymore...

Next morning...

Maan wakes up...Geet is standing beside him...

Maan: tum teek toh haina?

Geet: hmmm

Geet has packed her bags...

Maan: ye sab kya hai?

Geet: mujhe ghar jaana hai, mein bas aapko thank karne ke liye wait kar rahi thi

Achcha hua ki issne mujhe thank karna chaha, warna ye ladhki apne aap yahan se chale jaathi, aur mera kaam ko aur mushkil banathi, ab ye mere responsibility hai, achcha hotha ki mein isske haath bandh ke rakhtha, par mein aaisa bhi nahi kar saktha, iss pagal ladhki ne toh mujhe bhi pagal banadhi, warna mein aaisa nahi pasjaatha

Maan: kya?

Geet: haan, aapne mera jaan bachaya, mujhe yahan tak lekhe aaya, isske liye bahut bahut shukriya, ab mein chalthi hoon

Geet tries to leave...Maan stops her...

Maan: kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: apna ghar, apne pariwaar ke paas

Maan: tummara ghar kahan hai?

Geet: Hoshiarpur

Maan: tum akhele jaogi?

Geet: haan

Maan: mein bhi tummare saath chaltha hoon

Geet: nahi, mein chali jaoongi

Maan doesn't wait for her answer...

He picks up the bags and walks...

Geet: rukhiye

Maan: chup...buikul chup, tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Ab bahut ho gaya tera tamasha, ab chup chap mere saath aao

Maan stares and Geet had to shut her mouth...

Geet follows him...through out the way Geet maintains silence...

Maan too leaves her alone...

Geet pehle bar Maan ke barein mein kuch achcha sochthi...ab toh woh Maan ko ek alag hi andaaz mein dekhthi haina...kaise woh Geet se mila tha, ussi waqt Geet ne dev ko bhi mila tha...

Aur jaise Geet ko laga ki Maan duniya ke sabse bada Dhust danav hai aur Dev sabse achcha hai...

Geet kitni galat thi, ye toh ulta hi hai, Maan utna Dhust bhi nahi hai aur dev kitna badmaash kahinka hai?

Kash Geet Dev ko milthi hi nahi?

Kash Geet ke duniya mein sirf Maan hotha?

Babaji, ye mein kya soch rahi hoon?

Geet couldn't stop thinking about Maan...

Kaise Maan ne uss din Geet ko uss gundon se bachay tha?

Kaise b'day party mein Maan ne ek bar phir Geet ko bachaya? Agar ussi din blast hotha toh?

Aur Maneet ka passionate dance, Geet ussko kaise bhool sakthi? Maneet ka forced dance...

Maan ka gussa, aur usska speed, Geet ko ussi din Maan ki takat ki ehsaas hui thi...

Aur uss din barsaat mein bhi, kaise Maneet ka Milan hua tha? Kash woh pal wapas aatha, aur Geet Maan ke bahon mein kushi kushi apne aapko soupthi, kash mein aaise kar sakthi?

Her heart longs for him, his support, she just needs his broad shoulders to rest her head and cry her heart out...

Maan stops the car...

Maan: tum kuch khaogi?

Geet: nahi

She looks pale, she is weak and still scared...

Maan gets her some juice...

Geet: mujhe nahi chahiye

Maan just stares and Geet grabs the juice and finishes it off within seconds...

Geet falls asleep after she ran out of tears...

Maan keeps driving feeling pity for her...

Maan thinks that maybe it was his mistake...

Dev was so close and yet Maan coudn't recognize him...it's all his fault...neither he ignored Geet nor he missed Dev...Maan deliberately avoided Geet and kept her away from his thoughts as she was disturbing him so much...he avoided her so that he could focus on his case...but Dev cleverly made use of Geet as his shield...Maan couldn't see thru that shield for he was afraid of his own emotions...

How could he let his feelings affect his work? He kept his eyes closed in Geet's case, he even didn't bother to know her native and other family details...

He gathered news about everyone Tasha, Pinky except Geet...he didn't want to know her for that would distract him...moreover she was so innocent that he believed her too much...he took her for granted...he never took her seriously ...may be Geet was his weakness and Dev's strength...

Had he known her better, had he kept a close watch on het, this might not have happened?

As Maan was thinking about his mistakes, Adi calls...

Maan: what? Ye kaise ho saktha?

Maan is shocked to hear what Adi just said...

Maan's shocking voice wakes Geet up...

Geet: kya hua?

Maan: kuch nahi, tum pehle apne ghar ka rashtha bathao, humme jaldhi jaana hai

Geet: aapko koi kaam hai?

Maan ko toh ab Geet se zyada important koi kaam kaise ho saktha?

Maan: tum pehle apne barein mein socho, mujhe patha hai ki mujhe kya karna

Maan is so pissed off hearing Adi's news and he gets angry with poor Geet...

Then he realizes his mistake, and he just keeps driving without a word...

That's a little better, but Geet is very upset, but she knows that she had messed up his job...

She quietly directs him and they soon reach the Handa house...

Geet is very relieved to be home back...

She gets off the jeep and waits for Maan...

Maan: tum andar jao, mein samaan lekhe aatha hoon

Geet knocks the door...

Brij opens it...

Brij is shocked or rather annoyed to see her...

Brij: tum?

Geet didn't expect him to react that way...

Geet: veerji?

Ranno comes running towards the entrance and stops as Brij stares her...

Ranno: Geeet

Geet: maa

Geet steps foreward...but Ranno stands still...

Geet is surprised...what happened?

Rajji and teeto rush to Geet...they are the ones who are really happy seeing her back...

All the others were shocked to see her...

Darji: rukho

Darji shouts at them and they had to obey him...for everyone is scared of darji...

And this time Geet has committed a big mistake...

Darji: sab apne apne kamre mein jao, ye hummari Geet nahi hai, hummare liye woh kal hi mar chuki hai

Geet: Darji?

Brij: suna tumne, ab yahan kyun aayi ho? humme bhi tummare saath thane le jaane?

Darji: Brij, darwaza bandh karo

Brij: chale jao yahan se

Maan comes with her things...he doesn't like the way they treat Geet...

He gets angry but controls his anger for Geet needs them badly now...'

So he had to be polite...

Maan: Geet ko bolne ka moka toh dijiye

Brij: tum kaun ho? isska ek aur aashique? Aur ktine aashique hai?

Maan gets very angry...he clenches his fist but controls his anger...

He didn't want to make things worse for Geet...

As of now she needs her family the most...

Geet: veerji? Ye kaise sawaal hai?

Darji switches on the TV and increases the volume...

TV reporter...jaise ki humne bathaya ke isska saathi, ya ne Ms.Geet abhi bhi lapatha hai, sunne mein aaya hai ki woh ab Delhi se bhaag gayi, police usske peeche hai, they show Geet's photo

Darji: isske pehle ki mein tumme apne haathon se mardaloon, chale jao

Geet: Darji, mein aapki beti hoon, mein kahan jaoon?

Part28

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part
Poor geet...uske pics tv pe
Ab maan kya karega...geet kahan jayegi

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