The Queen of Dark !! KriYaansh One Shot

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

wow dis was ausome...

Queen of Dark n King of Encounters...

I loved the way I described it...

Chasing each other in that place...

Comming face to face...

The Kiss...

and everything else...

dat was such an ausome concept...

Keep writing...

I love Ur Works...

Love Aditi...

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MysticMuse

@Mystic_Muse

Dazzler

+ 18

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome update

love it

thanks for pm

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awiiieee..
Super OS di..
Criminal Kriya n Super Cop Rey... Haiyyyeee...
I so loved dis awssmmm Chase btw them...
Determined Kriya to get Rey for her desires n den Rey ending up losing ... N our Queen winning... Haiiiyyyeee... Superb di... Ekdum superbly written.. Loved it...

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Rajeshwari_KR

@Rajeshwari_KR

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

The concept was so amazing

The way you wrote was breathtaking...

loved it...left me speechless

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Beautifully written i loved the concept so much
The queen of dark and he is king of encounters
Amazing writen
In first encounter she fall for him
Do write more

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

amazing

beautifully written

thanks for the pm

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

awesome os...

loved it...

kriyaansh liked each other in first sight...

and they kissed...

rey was not able to shoot kria...

lovely...

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Amazing!!!
Kriya is d Queen of dark n Ret is d King of encounters!
Both of dem lykd each oder at d first sight!
D chase is described quite gud!
Dey kissed!!
N den rey cudnt shoot her!
Awesome!!!
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