OS: A Day in the Life of Sahil's Marriage (Posted, please comment) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Asad4Zoya

Where is ur next os did u already post it if so than tell me the name of it if not than please do pm me the link.

My second one is called OS: Aahil becomes Nawab of Bhopal. Here:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4112367/ss-the-nawab-of-bhopal-part-11-preview-pg-43

Originally posted by: Marybarton

My second one is called OS: Aahil becomes Nawab of Bhopal. Here:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/4112367/ss-the-nawab-of-bhopal-part-11-preview-pg-43

Okay.



I'm so very late to the party.


But that's okay. I'm here NOW!


Wow!




What did I just read (again!)




Brilliant!!!




I absolutely love the little unspoken tension between them...the slight awareness on his side and the changes in hers!



Splendid splendid read!



Love the simplicity and sweetness that oozes out of it!


That you're talented, there's no doubt...you're super brilliant! The little moments between them, his irritation, her concern, their banter...all that LOVE!



How do you do it!


How were you able to capture the essence of the story and still manage to give us a believable and relatable side dish...?



A small treat. A bite of a Mars bar. Yum yum Delish!




At this point all more that I can say is...


Do find it in your heart to WRITE MORE!!



I want more bites at that chocolate!


I. Need.




*please...?*




Mwah mwahhh!



Thank you so very much for this OS! A balanced piece of sweetness!



Hugs!!!



FaRz

More from this story will be used in my other FF

Lovely OS
Enjoyed read it