Life as it is... (KR 2 shot) part 2 page 5 updated

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Life as it is...


kria- i dont want to live in the darkness rey.. i dont want to... i want to enjoy my life.. i want love and care i want to feel the feeling of being loved feeling of being cared and feeling of having you right by my side... please help me rey i don't want to live in darkness... kria's heart cried... she wanted to get up and speak to rey she wanted to hug rey she wanted to love her life with him... her heart cried... she wanted to get up but she couldn't... she didnt have the strength to do so...
rey- i wish u could hear me kria.. i wish you could speak to me...i am sorry kria...
rey sleeps thinking about how it all started...

3 years back

it was just like a normal day for any one but for rey and kria it was a special day..today they were going to confess their love for eachother!!!
like anyother couple they obviously faced hardships but they over came it... both of them were excited to meet eachother... but what did they knew...
destiny awaited them... it had something else stored in it...
only if they knew it wasn't the time...
the time was simply imperfect... may be they weren't meant to be...
rey was on his way all set to go propose kria but he couldn't... what ever he saw next left him stunned... he was shocked... rey ran to his love... he hugged her... and just uttered only one thing...
don't worry kria everything will be fine...
Kria was very happy!!! Finally she was going to be rey's!!!
finally they would become one...
but what did she know about what awaited her... Her destiny,, it had other plans for her
as she was walking down the stairs she missed a step and fell...she fell rolling over hitting her head deep getting a scar on her head...
as she was becoming unconscious she saw him coming towards her,,, she smiled seeing him there but before she could utter something she closed her eyes...
Rey immediately took her to the hospital he was scared all his way only the dreadful fall of kria played in front of him...
he didn't want to loose her she meant his life!!! He would become a soul less body if something happened to kria...
he broke his thoughts and spoke to himself- ye kya soch raha hai rey... Kuch nahi hoga kria she will be fine... Kuch nahi higa usse,...
and he trembled,,, he didn't want to loose her...
after some time the doctor came...
rey- doctor kria kaisi hai?? Is she all fine? Kab tak theek hogi wo? Usse zyada chot toh nahi lagi na..,
doctor why are you quite say something...
doc- only if u allow me to,,,
rey- am sorry...
doc- umm mr??
rey- reyaansh singhania
doc- so mr.singhania the patient inside kria unke girne ki wajah se she has lost alot of blood and unka brain bhi effect Hua hai,,.And...
rey- and kya doctor?
doc- and ab shayad hi she can become normal... Shayad hi she can speak to you,,,
rey- what do you mean doctor?
doc- I am sorry to inform you mr.singhania but ab wo coma mein chali gayi hain...
rey- what??
doc- she will b able to hear you but react karne ke liye it won't b possible
Bahut rear cases mein hota hai...
you just have to pray ki wo theek ho jaaye and she comes out of the coma...
And the doctor went...
rey feel on his knees,.. He cursed things... He never thought something like this will happen... How he had imagined his life with her...how he wanted to hug her...he broke completely... His was incompletely without her,,,
rey- kyun universe ji kyun? Why did you do this to me? And kria ke saath hi kyun? Wo toh kitna baat karti thi na aapse... She always shared things with you..but phir bhi aapne uske saath aise Kia... Kyun universe ji kyun...
and he broke down...
after sometime he went in and saw kria lying there...
he went towards her and stroked her hair...and then kissed her forehead...
rey- I love you kria,,. You are my life and you always will be... I'll wait for you to get up.. And I know you will because I know you live me too!!!
and he stayed there...
after sometime the gang came and rey simply went off from there... Yes he needed time.. He needed time to take all this... He was handed kria's bad which kria used to carry...
he saw a diary inside and took it out..,after all his baatcutter had something stored in it...
he started reading it...he smiled through his tears... His baatcutter had been soo cute and soo crystal clear... Her diary had her feelings their memories and mostly everything about him!!!
yes she loved him and always spoke about him... But now she wasn't there... He had to wait for her... How much he has already started missing her.,,
Kria had loved him from all her heart... She always thought about him... How much she had loved him.,.. Their fire exit meet, their confession, their misunderstandings, their love...
everything she had expressed in her diary...
One year had already passed and kria was still in coma...rey had asked the doctors to shift kria in his house...
he would be with her... In a day only for 3 hours he would go to college and then the next hours he would be with kria...he never wished to go to college but kria always wanted him to live life to the fullest,.. She always told everyone the same thing.,, "ek insaan ke jaane se life ruk nahi jaati aur rukni bhi nahi chaiye warna us insaan ko bhi bura lagega"
how he smiled remembering her talks... She was an inspiration to everyone... She would make sure everyone are happy,...
Rey without fail would speak to kria everyday... He would tell her about all his whereabouts and then he would sometimes cry in front of her and sometimes laugh fakely...
he was broken...
and one fine day when he couldn't tolerate he played the music... Her favorite music and started dancing on it,.. He danced to the rhythm...
he knew she lived dancing,.. And dancing with him on her favorite song was a dream for her,,.
as the music ended he ended his dance,, he felt relieved after dancing.., he hadn't danced since kria went in coma but today after dancing he felt a bit relaxed and then he sat next to her,., he spoke to her telling about how good he is feeling now after dancing ... Dancing on her favorite song,., and that's when he saw her move her finger,.. He saw her reacting... He was shocked and happy,, he immediately called the doctor... He made kria hear her song and he spoke to her,,,
he could see her moving her fingers... He saw her opening her eyes and he smiled he felt happy!!!
soon the doctor came and he checked her up... she was fine now but a bit weak and she wasn't supposed to strain herself. told the doctor...
kria had gained her consciousness and rey's happiness knew no bounds... He was as happy as ever,,,.
after the doctor go rey went and hugged kria,,, and soon tears made their way out... Both of them hugged each other tightly... After one and a half year kria finally woke up and rey had finally got his life,.,
they broke the hug and just looked into each others eyes which spoke volumes...


after a very long time i am back with some story!!!
soo happy!!! missed writing!!!

this is my two shots so this is just the first part...
and second part kab milega i don't know...

and guys i really do expect comments from you!!!
joota chappals flowers everything allowed!!!
will be waiting!!!!



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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing and fabulous chapter brilliant... do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sim tu to jhatke diye ja rhi hai..phle online love nd ab ye...
this is osum...emotional concept...
kriya in coma jst wen they were on the verge of confessing...
this is wonderful...she came back to life after hearing music..so touchy..
update nxt soon
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...
its very emotional...
totally loved it..
plzz update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Supab story
Rey lobe kria so much that he wait so long for her
To geet well
Isehi kehte he true love
Which never see the time n keep waiting for their lobe
Supab concept
Beautifully written
Very heart touching
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres.
Very touching concept.
Brilliant,
It was a shock for me jab dono confession ke verge par and then the tragedy...
Ummm, second part kab milega . . .

Update soon


Waiting for the second half

And a longer one

Please...

Nikki.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing storyline and update
lovely concept
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update...
loved it...
Outstanding concept...
kriyaansh are too sweet...
they love each other so much...
kria was in coma...
and rey was in so pain because of this...
they were going to propose each other but destiny had other plans...
they had to wait for whole three years..
but the wait finally get over...
and now they can be together forvever...
waiting for next part...
thanx for pm...
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simz...!! 🤗
Ye kya tha ?? 1st part hi itna sad..
You know I was literally crying while reading.. 😭
Koi itna bura kaise kar sakta hai KR k sath..
Aww Rey.. He loves her so much..
Too excited for the last part..

Osam concept.. Loved it..
Abi k liye no jutta chappal only hugs.. 😛

Lekin agr sad endng hai to pehle btade i wont read d next part..
Agr nai btaya to zarur marungo ek do.. 😉

Love Rupanshi ^_^

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