A SANDHIR FF- BECAUSE YOU LIVE IN MY HEART PART 15 PAGE65 - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: coolishparul

I like this story very much

thank you parul😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Hai sakshi
Lovely update
I really lkd niharika vd fb
It is so nce
Aww sandhir in bike
Wow
Both argu
N lil rom
But both fell
Blaming each other

Ha ha

aww thank you dear😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: starshiny

wow... its awesum 😛
😛
but moi so late...😭😭

loved it😳😳

niharika vardhan fb so sweet...
and sandhir..😳😳😳

thnx for the pm..

update soon..😉

aww thank you so much ayesha🤗🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BornAries

Hey! Sakshi this FF of yours is just amazing 👏



oh GOd Ankit and Vidhusi 🤣

lovely story

Do continue soon 😊

thank you sree🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: writer.anjali

😊 wow ...its excellent

thank you anjali😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MDKRM

I like this story a lot but it will great favor for me agar yeh jaldi end ho jaye bcz mera college start ho raha nd then i dont think mere pass time hoga for this ff i now kuch logo ko mein selfish lag rahi hongi i'm sorry but i want to ready this ff till an happy ending i just love this one.

thank you dear🤗

and sorry but i dont want it end so soon😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB

THANKS A LOT SAKU BATAE KE LIYE KI MAINE ABHI TAK COMMENT NHI KIYA HAI...🤪

BUT I WANT TO TELL YOU ONE THING
I LOVE THIS FF AND YEP I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE THIS...
UR AN AMAZING WRITER...👏👏
AND THIS PART WAS AWESOME...
AND THE SONG IS MINE FAV. 👍🏼
CONTINUE SOON...
LOVE YA,

ANU ⭐️

thank you anu😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gracy27

wow your ff was quite intersting plz post soon 😉

thank you dear😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

1st of all thank you everyone for liking my story. I m very happy that you all like it. Thank you so much.🤗🤗

And sorry for being late😳

PART-13

[BECAUSE YOU LIVE IN MY HEART]

Rd- dhyan kaha tha tumhara dekho chot lag gayi na tumhe..

Sanyu-tumhe v to lagi hai na aur mujhse jyada lagi hai. Bleeding ho rahi hai.

Rd-vo chodo ...

Sanyu-nahi tum mere sath chalo.

With that she held his left hand and takes him to her car. She made him sit on the back seat of car, and take out the first aid kit. She take some cotton which is wet with dettol . she took his elbow in her hand and blow the air through her mouth, which feels soothingly to randhir.

She is concerned for him. But why.

RD'S POV

I feel heaven with her. Her concerned for me give a lot emotions. She is 1st girl in my life for whom I feels in this way. But why. I also don't know WHY I feel like this. WHY??????

RD'S POVE END

Sanyu is applying cream on his wound now.

Sanyu-sorry mr mcp, but its also ur fault.

Rd-my fault really?? You were driving not I m. so basically miss doll its your fault.

Sanyu-mr mcp. [and she pressed his wound, he hissed in pain]

Rd- you ...

Sanyu[with lots of anger]-ek word aur nahi varna aur hurt karoongi

Rd-whatever. But fault was yours .

Sanyu-oh really tum to aise bol rahe ho jaise, tumne to kuch kiya hi nahi.

Rd-[teasingly]haan batao maine kya kiya tha.

Sanyu-tum.. tum... she is short of words now

Rd-haan bolo. [he feels reveal to see the effect on sanyu]

Sanyu-you know what you are a big moron. And I hate you.

Rd-haan to maine bhi nahi kaha ki tum mujhe like karo.

Sanyu-pata hai I just arghh... tumse to baat karna hi bekar hai. Huhh

And she went from there leaving rd with a smirk plastered on his face.

Sanyu sit on a his bike and try to start it but every effort goes into veins. It did not start..She starts checking every part of it. Rd come there and look at her angelic face..her eyes which are perfectly kohled, her hairs are looking so silky and blowing and dancing with air. In short she looks so cute. She raise her head and asked him what happened by waving her hand. He answered him by nodding his head still dreamingly.

sanyu continued her work, but being irritated with his constant gaze. Now she stand up. And crossed her arms to her chest and asked "what the hell mr. mcp why are you staring at me like this, I m hell irritated"

rd dreamingly indicate her that something is on her face.

Sanyu-what randhir. And she tries to remove that.

Randhir come forward and took out his handkerchief and bring it to her face. They didn't break there eyelock for a second. They continuously looking into each others eyes. Rd forward his hand and wipe the Grease which is spoiling her makeup but for rd it also look like as an accessory for her. Due to noise of horn they come out from their trance. Rd moved away from him and look at the direction of source of noise. and...

Rd-oh shit ...

Sanyu-what happen mr mcp.

Rd-give the keys of your car.

Sanyu-but why.

Rd-just give it to me

Sanyu-ok.

And she handed him the keys. He run toward the car. Sanyu couldn't understand what happen. So she again engrossed in her work..Suddenly her phone starts ringing. She look at her phone and it is flashing MR KHADUSH MCP.

Sanyu [to herself] what happened now. Pata nahi yeh mujhe ab kyo call kar raha hai.

She pick up the call.

Sanyu-haan hello mr mcp. Meri yaad aa rahi hai kya.

Rd-bakwas band karo car ke paas aao.

Sanyu- but ...

Rd [angrily]- what did I said. Come here now.

Sanyu-ok.

She handle locked the bike and rushes toward the car and surprise with the scene in front of her. Her car was badly hit with a truck . [car ka KACHOOMAR nikal gaya 🤣 ]

Sanyu-[kept her both palm on her face]-aww yeh kya ho gaya.

Rd-[angrily] kisne kaha tha road par car park karne.

She doesn't pay him or his words any attention, and come in front of her car.

And said- haw baby whats happened.

Rd was shocked , what was she saying BABY he coudnt understand but everything clear when sanyu says that

Sanyu[with crying face]-rd how this was happened. Meri baby ki kya condition ho gayi hai.

Rd-[suppressed his laughter] baby yeh car.

Sanyu-haan yeh meri fav car thi [and she starts crying]

She hugged him tightly. Rd couldn't register anything. But he also hugged her back.

Rd-sshhh ... why are you crying .

Sanyu. [with sobbing]r...rd ... its ..its ...my ...fav...car. Yeh... Mujhe ... Nanu ... Ne ...gift...ki...thi.

Rd-sshhh... don't cry, and look at to me. [and he raised her chin up]

Rd-yeh car theek ho jayegi...

Sanyu-rd yeh.. nahi ..hogi. bahut.. damage ...ho chuki hai...

Rd-shayad tumhe pata nahi hai ki main rank no 1 tha college me aur aisi cars ko theek karna mere liye left hand work hai.

Sanyu-re...really

Rd-haan. Ab main tumhare tarah dumbo nahi than a college me. [and he smirks]

She hits him playfully on his chest and hugged him again , he also wrapped his arm around her. But soon they realize in which position they are and they left each other. And look here and there. An awkward silence spread in environment. Sanyu decide to break silence.

Sanyu-umm...mr mcp..

Rd-huhh

Sanyu-ab hum jayenge kaise, I mean maine check kiya tha tumhari bike ki bettery bahut jyada damage ho chuki hai aur vo bina parts ke theek nahi ho payegi..

Rd-what...

Sanyu-umm ham aur hum aisi jagah hai jaha raat ko vehicles nahi aa aur ja pate hai, aur ab to sham ho chuki hai

Rd- aur yeh tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho.

Sanyu-aww maine socha yeh zaroori tha isiliye bata diya.

Rd-damn it.

And he goes toward his bike and recheck it 5 times. She comes and tapped his shoulder and give a beautiful smile.

Sanyu-ab kya kare mr mcp.

Rd-mujhe kya pata main to yaha naya hoon tum batao. Aur waise bhi yeh sab tumhari bajah se hua hai.

Sanyu-aww maine jaanboojh kar thodi na kiya hai.

Rd- [with lots of irritation] ya you are right.

Sanyu-accha ek baat poonchu.

Rd-haan poncho.

Rd-umm... vo.. don't mind haan

Rd-haan bolo na

Sanyu- vo kamina kaha gaya.

Rd-what...who

Sanyu-jisne meri car thoki.

Rd-jab tak baha pahuncha tab tak to vo bhag chukka tha

Sanyu-huhh bast*** kahika.

Rd [in low voice] accha hua chala gaya varna pata nahi yeh Jhansi ki raani MISS DOLL kya karti uska.

Sanyu-kuch kaha tumne.

Rd-nahi to maine kuch nahi kaha.

And they start walking along with road.

PRECAPE- I guess sandhir closeness.☺️☺️

Ok I m done guys😳

You like it or not. Tell me😉

I'll w8 for ur reviews guys plz do comment and like both.😃

And don't worry tomorrow I'll give update of ANGEL AND DEVIL KI LOVE STORY

Love you all

sakshi🤗

Edited by cuteparsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you dear😳

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