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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

awesom...
luvd d update...
waitg for their meetng...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

yo yo maine like maara aur comment bhi kara... waise mujhe isme taani genuinelu pasand aayi.////.../ kr ki toh pooch mst

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Pehle toh so very sorry jaldi comment nai kar pai ...

Bad things happen , u know 😛...

This is another of your Fabulous works Ishu 👍🏼...

N i'm so very loving it ^_^...

I like Taani as long as u know what 😳...

Tough i like her character here ...

& i see Rey is going to have to payback n get ignored...

Well he deserves 😛...

Ab Kria will be in her 'Diva' mode & i'm sure it's gonna be very interesting 😉...

The past wali Kria was so Cute But ab she will have to be attitude types 🤔...

Nevertheless the concept is great 😃...

I love it ❤️...

Looking forward to read more 😊...

N Shukriya for all those PMs 🤗

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Awesomeeenesss

Ahmazinggg

Superbbb

back to IF after long n loved reading it

em loving taani's character lots here

whud be fun to read more

update soon :)

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Nice story...
Interesting.. Do continue soon

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

finally read all the parts!!

and they are simply amazing!!!

the way taa... Character has been shown something nice and different!!!

kria and rey's relation in childhood... Not sooo good,,,

loved kria's attitude!!!

rey surely pachtayega... :p :v

and I love taaniii Ka character...

something different and kindda cupid one...

and finally their meet!!!

attitude ki baarish ho rahi Thi.,, hehhehehheee

loved it!!!

continue soon!!!

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pinky

@pinkypanrocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Omg dear...it was too good...sorry for the late comment regard all the parts...!!waiting for the next part please update soon...!!

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Ishana

@OneLove_S.W

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

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After a long and tiring day , rey finally lied on his bed. He held his had and remembered kria and his epic meet. She had surely changed. The soft spoken kria , who was even scared to speak to him , was taunting him and and calling him a chachundar? Seriously!
He smiled to himself and joked.
"Kaash! Pehle dhang se baat ki hoti , attitude toh nahi dekhati!"
He laughed to himself and went to change. He was staring at the mirror.
"Toh kya hua! Reyaansh Singhaania ki charm se Kria dur toh reh nahi paayegi."
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The next day , Rey walked into St.louis , all girls looked at him. Taani came.
"Aap aaye nahi ki , bheed lag gayi!"
Taani laughed , rey smirked . Kria entered from the gate , rey saw her for a second he was lost in her but shrugging his thoughts he spoke.
"I thought tumhari behen se baat karne ke liye line lagani padegi! I don't see any line."
Taani made him turn , and saw guys behind kria , asking her to be their date for Fresher's party . Rey's blood boiled and he didn't know why! Taani pretended to smell something.
"What are you doing taani?"
Rey spoke annoyed.
"I smell jealousy!"
"Why would i be jealous?"
"Khudhka naam hi daal lo! God! Self centered."
"Gosh! Taani.."
They were arguing when they heard kria shouting.
"ENOUGH!"
The boys stood in attention position , scared that they had ignited Rani Laxmi Bai's anger.
"Guys , agar tum logon ne mere kapdon ko na dekh kar mein jo actually hun jaan kar mujhse date ke liye pucha hota na toh shayad you would have deserved to be my date! Meri date koi aisa banda nahi hoga jo bahar ki beauty par believe kare! Toh batao agar mein tumhare saath Chudail bankar aayi party mein , jaana chahoge?"
The guys looked away in defeat and went away. Kria rolled her eyes and walked to taani. Rey had a sudden smile on his face , seeing this side of Kria. He felt something different in his heart , kria was different and he actually liked her nature. She was a diva but not the typical bitchy.
Taani pulled her cheek , kria pouts and rubbed it. Rey's admiring session was broken by kria's glare.
"Aise aakhe phaad ke kya dekh rahe ho? Kabhi ladki ko nahi dekha?"
The hell! He was caught. Cover up Rey!
"Nahi! Ladkiyon ko toh dekha hain , chudailon ko nahi! Meri bachpan se wish thi ki mein ek witch ko dekhun , lekin dekhi nahi , aaj jab saakshat ek witch padhaari hain mein toh hairan hogaya!"
"What the hell! You jerk , I am not a witch!"
She ran behind rey , who ran for his life , rey was running down the stairs when he heard kria scream , he turned and saw that she had slipped from the stair and was going to fall down , but rey was fast and he caught her , kria had her eyes closed , her hands wrapped around rey , who picked her up. Kria slowly opened her eyes as Rey bought her down the stairs. Kria looked at him , they both were looking at each other , kria was the first one to break the eye lock , rey looked away and placed her down.
"You fine?"
Kria nods. Taani came.
"Kria theek hain tu? Lagi toh nahi?"
"No! Thanks Rey."
"Your welcome."
He smiled and then received a punch on his shoulder.
"Ouch! What was that for kria?"
"Meri behen ko giraya Ullu!"
"Ek toh bachao aur phir punch khao! Great! Bhalayi ka toh zamana hi nahi raha."
"Whatever! Ass!"
They were talking , when Rey looked at kria and saw a sadness in her eyes , he knew it was because of him and that made him a bit guilty. Kria went away.

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She reached the locker room , and looked at herself.
"Kria! Get a grip on yourself , Reyaansh is an asshole! Usne tujhe itna ghatiya feel karaya hain , humesha! Guilty bhi nahi hain voh! Uske diye scars aaj tak jalte hain tujhe , aur use farak tak nahi padha kabhi toh tujhe uski existence se farak nahi padna chahiye!"

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Hope Yu Liked it. Sorry the updates might be slow , since i need ot study a lot. And don't worry if i really don't get time , i'll send somebody the story to post oit on my behalf.

Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Update was cute ...

Applause to me I m resing first from last two updates that too without pm 😳

I liked the cute fights and Tani character I m.still not able to relate 😆 my own reasons..

Story is going well.

Keep it up..

Edited by Endurance - 11 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#180

all my doubts vanished in thin air after this...story is going smooth nd perfect...
line lag bi gai nd rey jealous bi...taani is antaryami...
witch wali kr convo was super fun...
she didnt slip...kyu bachaya rey...
i mean thank god bacha liya...
i loved the last bit where u show the determined kriya...
one thing i wud suggest is give sm flashback of one or two incidents which can help us readers to relate how exactly rey hurted her...
coz the intensity with which she hates him is not less...

otherwise its wonderful...