IPKKND New FF: The Redemption - Chapter 5 : Concern - Page 2

Originally posted by: laksh65

loved the start
if it is a show based track starting from arnav's MU seeing the terrace scene, then I would request you to shape up the story that will have arnav's redemption, which was never shown in the serial, it was injustice to khushi, that she was called gold digger, then later characterless, during shital track,he insulted his own wife in front of his ex girlfriend, his contract marriage and his evil treatments after the contract marriage was never brought out in open in front of his family.

In short khushi shouldnt have forgiven arnav so easily, and he should repent hard and earn her forgiveness.

Thanks

i agree with u..
Update soon, i would love to read it.

Love it!! The title the start and the way u write

Anywhere there is a redemption story, I am there.

I only have one request. Please complete it. Thats all I ask

Waiting for your update

awesome start...loved it..
looking forward to read more. .
plz do pm me ur updates. ...

hi dear nice start, continue soon..
Please pm me when you can..

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amazing start.would love to read more...

Chapter Two: Decision

Khushi wrapped her arms around her waist, trying to hold herself together, hoping that the small physical action would also be able to provide her with some semblance of mental strength. She couldn't fall apart now, not after what had happened.

She needed to find Arnavji...needed to tell him the truth.

Would he believe you?, spoke a voice at the back of her head. What if he Jiji's the wedding?

She closed her eyes against the pain that thought brought along with it. Her family would be devastated if that happened, but she couldn't wait.

She had seen something in Shyam's eyes tonight, something dangerous, when he spoke about getting rid of Anjaliji...like he had made plans for it already, plans that had nothing to do with a divorce.

Shyam was greedy by nature, he would never give up the luxurious lifestyle being a Raizada damad provided to him, which meant that he would find some other way to get rid of Anjaliji. Once Khushi came to that realization, she could'nt keep quiet anymore.

She had been hoping that he would change for the better, that Anjaliji's love would make him see sense, but she realized that she had been wrong. Nothing would change that scum. He was a man possessed, and he would go to any lengths to get what he wanted.

She knew she wasn't getting out of this intact. Arnavji would'nt take lightly to being kept in the dark for so long. He would hold her responsible, and she was prepared for that. She only hoped that he would believe that her family was innocent, and not do something rash, like stop the wedding.

But she had made up her mind, she wouldn't let any harm come to Anjaliji.

This ends today, whatever the consequences.

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"Crying is all right in its way while it lasts. But you have to stop sooner or later, and then you still have to decide what to do."
- C.S.Lewis, The Silver Chair

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AN : Thank you for all the lovely comments. PMs will be sent out for this FF, so add me if you want to be updated when a new chapter is posted. Please like and comment, if you like the update.

AN Update : Apparently, I cannot send out PMs until I am out of the newbie status. Sorry.

Interesting!! Waitin for d nxt part :)

waiting to read the next part
this was short and nice

too short update...it seemed to end b4 it started...otherwise it was a good piece of writing...but plz include arnav as well khushi's scene in every update..
so make it big next time...