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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey u wrote so well👏
But as i was reading the whole thing tears came rolling down my face.😭
But it was really nice😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.....i m extremely sorry...trust me i m not pessimistic...even i cant see rajveer dying..it was just an imagination...even wen i was writing this i too felt the same..i don't know wat happened but ithought wudn't dis be a perfect ending of lrl..sorry once again
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow yaar wat feelings in those words 👏
but plzzzz shonna ko kuch mat karo... 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_lrlroks

Sir get up …sir please get up…she screamed with tears trickling down her face…😭

His body was motionless …few drops of her tears fell on his forehead…his eyes stared at her…naina…

This was the only thought which moved around his brain…

Slowly he spoke… just believe in urself becoz I believe in cadet naina ah Singh ..he winked and a smile spread over his face…

It was night… she sat like a statue with his lifeless body on her lap…I lost him…I lost my inspiration… my pillar of strength…my trust…and perhaps my love

Today she is happy becoz her brother's photo is hung in the hall of fame…she stood in front of the wall and read the names…capt.naveen singh alhuwalia…next was:capt.rajveer singh shekhawat..

Life moved on…but every night .. In her dreams.. He comes.. The same ever smiling and unforgettable face…she remembers one of his promise…

"When things r changing all around us…and the world seems to move too fast

Don't forget I will be right beside you…

So when u look towards future changes… or think how the past used to be

Don't 4get to look beside u coz that's where u wud find me loving u from all my heart

That's one thing you can count on… That will never change…."

She thinks" HE KEPT HIS PROMISE…even after he died".......

plz comment...

😭

yaar tune to pura ruladai

mere bedroom mai pre monsoon aagya tha kuch deair ke lia

👏👏

acha likha hai

liekin raj ko marna zrore tha kya😭

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