FF:Qurbani- pg 24prt 33

Hello!My name is Prianka, u can call me Priya if u want.Well.......I'm a very silent reader....& I'm a big fan of all ur fanfics!I love sooo many of them....b/c of u guyz,i got inspired and decided 2 rite a fanfic.Its da 1st fanfic of mine...and hopefully i cud make it fun 4 u guyz 2 read.Well....Here i go!!!

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*~*~*~QURBANI*~*~*~

PART ONE

WALIA HOUSE:

Uday Walia-Father of Jai Walia. He is currently the owner of Walia Industries.

Krishna Walia-She passed away.

Masi-Sister of Krishna,after she passed away Masi took da responsibility of takinf care of her niece & nephews.

Dadi-He is da mother of Adi, but she lives wid da Walia family.

Jai Walia-He is 35 years. He is a business man, whose industry is in top 10.

Tarun Sablok-Cousin of Jai,son of Uday's sister.He is a lawyer.

Nachiket-Lil bro of Tarun,tries 2 help out in da business.

Pushkar: Son of Uday's best friend,treats him like a son.

Jigyasa Bali-She is the small sister of Jai Walia. She has 3 kids, who are Ranveer, Sahil and Anu. She is married 2 Aditya Bali.

Aditya Bali-He is Jai's very best friend of Jai and second he is the husband of Jigyasa.

Ranveer-First child of Jigs and Adi.

Anu-Second child of Jigs and Adi.

Sahil-Lastly,he is da third child of Jigs and Adi.

Tony-He is da butler of da house.

DESHMUK HOUSE:

Nishikant Deshmuk-Father of Roshni, Bani, Piya and Rano. Very gud friends wid Walia house.

Anjali Deshmuk-Mother of Roshni, Bani, Piya and Rano.

Roshni-First daughter, who is 34 yrs old.

Bani-Second daughter, who is 30 yrs old.

Piya-Third daughter, who is 28 yrs old.

Rano-Fourth daughter, who is 23 yrs old.

Dadi ma-Grandmother of Roshni, Bani, Piya and Rano. Mother of Nishikant.

Raghu kaka-Butler of the house.

Srry 4 da long intro(lol)....& plz excuse me 4 da mistakes dat i do in hindi b/c i speak bangla..not hindi.

Deshmuk's Residence:

Raghupati Raghav Raja Ram
Patit Paawan Sita Raam
Ishwar Allah Tero Naam
Sabko Sanmati De Bhagwaan

The two sisters sang out in the early morning. Two of them went upstairs 2 wake up the other 2 sisters.

Second sister: Are...ye abhi tak so rahi he!Ab subhe 8 bach chuki hai.

Smallest sister:Iska matlab Roshni Di ko kuch bhi yaad nehi.She began 2 scream at her, she shook her.Di....kya aapko yaad nehi ke aaj apka shooting hai...woh bhi sare 8 baje?!?!

Roshni got up trying to wear her tang top properly since it was falling to da sides. And there she was standing wid a panickin face.

Roshni: Wat?!Its its its ......8 AM!!!!No u gotta be kiddin.Oh my god!!I have 2 hurry..or else i'm doomed.She rushed into the washroom while the smallest sister went 2 Piya's room 2 wake her up.

Smallest sister: Hello....kya koi hai iss kamre main?!

Piya: Rano!Leave me alone,let me sleep!Aaj to koi jaldi nahi hai,kyun ki aaj Saturday hai.

Rano: Haan...to?Phir bhi humein to utnahi padega.Dekho...agar tum nehi uthi,to phir mujhe kuch karnahi padega!She went 2 da washroom 2 get a bucket full of water,by dat time...Piya woke up by da noise of the water dat Ranowas doing.Piya went 2 do washroom in the hallway 2 get a bucket full of water & brought it in da room where Rano was.Rano came out of the washroom wid da bucket and was about 2 splash it on Piya,but she didn't find her in da bed.She wondered where she went.Piya, who was standing behind Rano.....splashed da water on Rano.😲(LOL)

Piya: Huh...I got u!Tum humesha mujhe aisi shararat karti rehti ho.....lekin aaj uska badla leliya hai.

Rano:Oh my god!You...you scoudrel!U wet me.Main tumhe aaj nehi choroonga!😡Rano began 2 chase after Piya.Piya began 2 run downstairs 2 da kitchen.

Piya: Bani di...Bani di aap mujhe bacha lijiye...plz plz plz!!!Piya tries 2 hide behind Bani.

Rano: Aaj to main choroonga nahi us badmosh ko.Bani di....kya aapne ne dekha hai Piya di ko?Bani nodded her head left to right. Aap mujhe jhooth bol rahi hai. She looked around da kitchen…until her eyes laid on Piya, she was behind Bani. Rano goes there 2 get Piya, Rano was about to raise her hand on Piya until Bani caught her hand. The camera zoomed on her eyes, lip, and cheek.

Bani:Rano…yeh sab kya hai?Tum log abhi iss umra main kya kar rahi ho?Agar Papa ake yeh sab dekhliya hota,tab Papa kya kahenge…hmmm?

Nishikant: Main sirf yehi boloonga ke tum abhi bhi mere bache ho…tum log agar shararat nahi karogi to phir kaun aisa karega?

Bani:Papa…maine aap se umid nahi ki.

Anjali:Tumhara Papa thik bolrahi hai.

Bani: Mummy!Aap bhi?Chodiye yeh sab baatein,hum sab chale nasta karne ke liye?

Dadi ma: Haan haan…mujhe to zor ki bhook lagi hai.She screams out from da dining space.Every1 laughs from da kitchen.

Everybody sits down and they all were waiting 4 Roshni 2 come downstairs. After a while she comes down stairs and sits down in a hurry.

Bani: Roshni di,ap pehle khana lelijiye kyun ki aap ko der horahi hai. Bani gives food 2 Roshni and passes out da food 2 every1 else. Everybody got buzy wid their schedule 4 da day b/c there was a lil party at home at night.Anjali,Bani, & Rano got buzy wid cookin,Roshni went 4 shooting, Nishikant went for meetings, Piya went for shopping(4 da party,as usually) and lastly Dadi ma was reading the bhagavad gita 2 God.

In the kitchen Rano got buzy making palak paneer & jheenga curry. Anjali was making lamb tikka & basmati rice. Bani was making chicken korma,alu gobbi and chana masala.They made more items(I just named them specificly 2 make u guys juss drool(LOL)). When Piya came back from shopping(lol), she made Katchumber salad and chicken pakora.

The phone rang right after they finished cooking. Bani ran for the phone in excitement…she somehow knew that a phone call was going to come.

Who can it be ?Keep guessin!!!!😆😆

P.S.I can't give da next part soon, but i'll try my level best 2 post it as fast as possible.Hope u guyz like it…..i know dat I didn't bring in Jai in here yet. But dn't wrry…they'll be comin very soon!!

Hi Priyanka!!!!

Congrats for your first ff!!!👏

Very nice starting, now whose calling🤔 let me take it😆😆

Looking forward to read nxt update😊😊

Minu😛

That was great!!! just loved it!! plz continue soon!!! 😃

dat was gud. 👏 .continue soon!!

Hey Priya, the start is wonderful..Hmm, Roshini is Bani's sis..very diff..
SO is Jai calling now?
Pls continue soon..

Hi Priyanka,

Great start to your fan fiction. I like the introduction of all the characters.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Hi priyanka
congrats for your first ff
i loved it
u r the best
waiting for your next part of ff presentation
great frnd

amazing part
sounds really good
cant wait 2 read the next part
👏

congrats on your first ff...great start...the sisters look like fun... 😃 😃 ...just as long as they stay away from each others hubby...we will be all good...lol...cant wait for next update
JAZ

priya!
your first FF woo hoo!
that was an awesome start
i hope you continue soon