AbhiGya SS: Benaam Sa Dard... Completed. - Page 13

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Uff ho Chahat..😭😭😭...I am crying and crying. What an emotional chapter. I don't even have words. Loved all the special moments. Kanyadaan, Pragya's advice for Aaliya, her argument to Purab...then so much at the hospital, birth and heart attacks and surgery all at once my gosh!!! lol at jealous Abhi moments...will want to see if he can earn a chance with Pragya after all this mess. Thank you so much dear, your story is very moving, I wish I could tell you more constructively but I'm too lost riding the emotions heehee 😉 👏

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Loved it to the core a very emotional part, beautifully crafted and execute , Thank You for the pm. Please do update soon curious how Abhi is going to win Pragya back and will she forgive him for all the heartache he gave her.

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Originally posted by: nicky13

Thanks for the pm ... Thank God truth is out ... But feel bad for sarla g and Dadi ... Feeling gud to see a jealous Abhi ... Loved it :) plz continue it soon Chahat :)

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Chapter 4

Abhi and Pragya took care of Abhi's dadi during her time in the hospital. Whenever Abhi tried to help Pragya for anything concerning her mother Pragya stopped him. She had not spoken with him. She took help from everyone but him. Suresh was there all the time after Akaash had taken over the responsibility of Raccho and the new born baby girl. Abhi was feeling left out from Pragya's life. No one from Abhi's family asked about Suresh. They knew that he was a family friend. Family friend yeah right' thought Abhi, He is trying to take my place in Pragya's life and her family's. My place in Pragya's life... Do I have one now? Did I ever make a place for myself in her life?' Abhi's eyes were constantly on Pragya but she did not once look at him. 3 days later Sarlaji got discharged from the hospital. Abhi wanted the best home care facility for her. Sarla Arora professor Pragya Arora ki ma hai Rock Star Abhi ki saas nahi.' Pragya declined as she could not afford it. She gave Abhi silent treatment and when she opened her mouth she spoke as if she was speaking with a stranger.

Pragya worked double shift as she took care of dadi in the day and her mother during the night. If it got too late at night Abhi would want to give Pragya a lift in his car but before him Suresh would be there with his udan khatola to take Abhi's princess to her mother home. Sometimes Abhi felt so angry at Suresh he felt like beating the crap out of him. Pragya saw the way Abhi looked at Suresh.

A week passed by Abhi had enough of Pragya's silent treatment. He reached KumKum Bhagya marriage hall. Pragya was handling her mother's business. She was there at the marriage hall. She saw him. "Aap yahaan kya kar rahe hain? I don't have time for any accusations nor do I have the strength to deal with you. Please leave." "I know!" Abhi screamed. "What? What do you know?" "I know that Purab and BulBul... I can make things right. I want to make things right. Pragya I want BulBul and Purab to have their love. Main sab theek kar donga. Purab aur Aliyah ka divorce karake main Purab aur BulBul ki shadi kara doonga. Then everything will be alright. You will forgive me right?" There was a shocked look on Pragya's face and tears in her eyes. Kaise insaan hain aap? Kaise bhai hai aap? Kaise dost hain aap? You are standing in a marriage hall and talking about breaking a marriage? You want to break your sister's marriage and get my sister married to that man! Have you completely lost it? Rishtey todna bahut asaan hai ek second mein toot jaate hain Mr. Abhishekh Mehra but rishtey jodne mein umara beet jaati hai bahut mushkilein aati hain rishton kio jode rakhne mein. You think I will let you break Aliyah and Purab's marriage? Do you think I will allow my sister to marry a person who is someone else's love, someone else's husband? Meri behan ka ghar main kisi aur toote ghar par nahi banne doongi. You know what please leave! I can't even look at you right now."

Abhi left and Pragya got back to her work. She managed her home, Abhi's home and KumKum Bhagya efficiently. She had a lot of assistance from all. Abhi used to stand outside dadi's room and see Pragya with dadi. He was slowly realizing her worth. He was falling in love with her. He wanted to propose to her but he remembered her words Meri behan ka ghar main kisi aur toote ghar par nahi banne doongi.' Abhi thought if she would not want BulBul to do it no ways would she make a home with him till he had Tannu's boyfriend tag on him. He went to his room and did the needful. He was no longer Tannu's boyfriend. It was late in the evening. That day Suresh had not come. He had backed off seeing Abhi's genuine efforts. He had though given Abhi a piece of advice. He had told Abhi "Don't make the mistake I made... Don't let her go..." Abhi was never going to let her go. Abhi gave a ride to Pragya to her home. She invited him in. This was a change. Abhi took it as a sign of progress. Abhi went to meet Sarla. When he came out he had tears in his eyes. He went away without meeting Pragya.

The next day Pragya came to Abhi's home in his absence. When he returned home he saw that everyone was tensed and that every belonging of Pragya was missing from his room. Only the temple she had left behind. Abhi went to see dadi. "Dadi Pragya..." "Chali gayi wo... I did not stop her..." "But dadi..." "But what Abhi? Did you want me stop her? Why should I have? Give me one good reason." "Because I... I love her dadi... I want her in my life... I need her in my life..." "I... Abhi you are still stuck on I... Does she think you are whom she needs in her life? Does she think you are the one she wants? Abhi have you asked her what she wants? Her mother wanted her to get married... She got married... You treated her like nothing... She took it for her mother's health... Now her mother's well being depends on seeing Pragya happy and it is not with you... So she left. Kisi ne uss se kabhi kuch nahi poocha bas karne ko kaha... If you want her to come back in your life you will have to ask her, convince her and if she is ready then get her back... If not you will leave her alone..." Abhi looked down and was going out from dadi's room. "Abhi do everything right and get her back." Abhi looked back at dadi, she was giving him a bright smile and thumbs up. Abhi ran to her and hugged her. "My dadi too is a rock star hai sirf Pragya ki dadi hi nahi."

Abhi began his mission Pragya patao. Purab and Aliyah too came to help him. "Bhai first of all ask for forgiveness. Then court her. Then propose to her then get her home." Abhi and Purab looked at each other. "Kya baat hai planner kya planning hai!" Aliyah felt ashamed of herself. "Aliyah Abhi is joking he did not mean to remind you of anything. See you are a girl if a guy wronged you how would you like him to apologize to you..." "Bhai just be yourself and she will forgive you." Abhi smiled. It was easy being him. He was Abhi the Rock Star, how difficult would it be for him to make Pragya forgive him. He went to Pragya's home. He spoke with Sarlaji and convinced her that he was in love with Pragya and wanted her back in his life. He promised her that he would treat her daughter with love and respect. Sarlaji did not have faith on him but she saw the truth in his eyes and she gave him his blessings. She also told him that it would not be easy. Abhi smiled at her and said "Hum hain toh ghum hai." That was exactly going to be Abhi's problem.

That evening when Pragya returned home from college she saw the entire house had flower bouquets with her name written on them. They were all for her from Abhi. Abhi was standing outside the house to see her flash a smile and run into his arms. Yeah like that was going to happen.' She came with a stern look on her face. "Ye sab kya hai? What are you doing here?" "I want you back in my life. I called up Tannu and told her it's over." "You broke up with her over the phone? Disgusting! I want my house cleared in 10 minutes. Send all these flowers to various hospitals. There are patients who don't have anyone to send them bouquets send them from your side. Don't ever come back." She went back into the house. She saw everyone from her family hanging at the windows. Abhi saw them all run away and he assumed they got a lecture from Professor Pragya. He did as she asked him.

The next day Pragya got up early as she heard a commotion outside her bedroom window. Groggy, hair messy up, side of face covered in dried drool, boogers in eyes she opened the window and saw a huge crowd in front of her house. She wore her specs to see clearly. There he was once again. Abhi the rock star saw her and he began singing.

Maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Are maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Tumko aata hai gussa hamko aata hai pyaar

Maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Ae baba maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Tumko aata hai gussa hamko aata hai pyaar

Maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Pragya came to the door and saw her life size picture next to Abhi. It had a mike in its hand. Suddenly the female picture of her began singing... As in a voice from that picture was heard.

Khvaab dekhe phulo ke bol hai kaanto jaise

Saaf kare ham dil kaise maaf kare ham kaise

Khvaab dekhe phulo ke bol hai kaanto jaise

Saaf kare ham dil kaise maaf kare ham kaise

Ahbi took that picture in his hands and began dancing with it.

Chhodo na chhodo na zid ye chhodo na

Dilruba dil mera haay aise todo na

He kept away that picture as if Pragya would go away from her.

Na na na mai nahi maanati haath jodo na

He tumko aata hai gussa hamko aata hai pyaar

Abhi came close to Pragya the real one and sang with a smile on his face.

Maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

He opened his shirt and there was a heart with her picture on it. Pragya saw it and found it to be quiet cheap. She went inside the house.

Pyaar hai kitna chir ke dil tumhe dikhaaya jaaye

Tumhi bata do ab tumko kaise manaaya jaaye

Pyaar hai kitna chir ke dil tumhe dikhaaya jaaye

Tumhi bata do ab tumko kaise manaaya jaaye

Abhi followed her into the house and Abhi showed her his hand on which Pragya's name tattoo was done. Pragya realized it in a second that it was done with a marker. She walked away from him.

Hu sab pata chal gaya jhutha hai ye pyaar

Ab mujhe rokna hai nahi aasaan

Abhi dramatically climbed on the sofa and took a sheet and put it around his neck.

Haa tum kaho to abhi de du apni jaan

Tumko aata hai gussa hamko aata hai pyaar

Maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Ae baba maaf bhi kar do yaar maaf karo sarkaar

Pragya took that sheet and pressed it. She then opened the main door of the house and showed him the way out. Abhi felt helpless and he went home. Nothing he was trying was working on Pragya.

**

The room was dark, so dark. He made sure his eyes were open, fearing he had gone blind. He couldn't see his hand, even though it was literally an inch from his face. He gathered his courage to call out a hello, hoping against hope that someone would answer. Nobody did.

He knew he was being silly, he knew no one was there. No one had been there since 3 months. Yet he sat there waiting... Waiting to smell the fragrance of incense sticks... Waiting to hear the tinkles of her anklets... Waiting to see her face... Waiting to hear her voice... Waiting for her to scold him for leaving his wet towel on the bed... Waiting for him to burn his finger in the hot coffee she brought for him... Waiting for her to soothe his pain... Waiting...

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata...

Sab kuch to hai

Kya dhundhti rehti hain nigahen,

Sab kuch to hai

Kya dhundhti rehti hain nigahen...

Kya baat hain main waqt pe ghar kyun nahin jaata,

Kya baat hain main waqt pe ghar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata...

Woh ek hi chehra toh nahin saare jahan mein,

Woh ek hi chehra toh nahin saare jahan mein,

Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo door hai woh dil se utar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata,

Benaam-sa yeh dard thehar kyun nahin jaata,

Jo beet gaya hai woh guzar kyun nahin jaata...

The gazal fit perfectly to Abhi's condition. It had been three months but he had not been able to seek forgiveness from Pragya. He had tried every trick in the book. He had taken help from everyone even Robin but nothing worked on Pragya. He could not understand what else he could do... He did not know what she wanted from him.

"Arre Aliyah Purab what a pleasant surprise!" Pragya welcomed Purab and Aliyah. Aliyah was glowing. "Kya baat hai someone is glowing? Honeymoon ka effect hai ya mere bhai ka?" Pragya teased Aliyah. In this period Aliyah and Pragya had become friends. "Bhabhi..." Aliyah blushed. "Ok since when does she blush? Purab what have you done to her where is Rock Star Abhi's sister?" "She's still there but she is taken over by Purab's wife and baby's mumma..." Aliyah said in a very low voice. Pragya did not hear it clearly but then she played the words in her head. Pragya squealed with joy. "Aliyah that is such a good news!" Aliyah was 1 month pregnant. Sarlaji blessed Aliyah and also gave her instructions not to tell anyone till her fourth month. Pragya noticed that Aliyah wanted to speak with her in private. They went to her bedroom. "Kya baat hai Aliyah everything alright na?" "Bhabhi why don't you forgive bhai? You forgave me? Then why not him?" Aliyah became emotional and tears flowed from her eyes. "Aliyah shh... aise rote nahi baccha... I forgave you because you came to me and asked for forgiveness. We talked it out and we sorted everything. Abhishekh has never come to me." "But bhabhi..." "Aliyah listen to what I am saying Abhishekh never came to me... It was always Rock star Abhi with whom I have nothing to do with... Mera rishta Abhishekh se hai... Mera dil, mera yakeen Abhishekh ne toda... Toh wo sab jodne ke liye Rock star Abhi kyun aaye?" "Bhabhi bhai nahi samjhenge ye sab... Mere liye dadi ke liye aa jaiye then hum sab milkar bhai ko theek kar denge..." Pragya patted Aliyah on the cheek.

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"Tum? Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho? I knew it tum mere paas wapas aa jaaogi." Abhi smiled and he was about to go hug Pragya. "I haven't come for you. Dadi and Aliyah both need me so I am back and you too had asked me to come back for dadi's sake... So I came back for them not for you." Pragya took her clothes and went to change for the night. Abhi locked the washroom from outside and he called the house help. He had the extra blankets removed from the room and also the sofa. He lay on his side of the bed decently clothed. He smiled as Pragya would have to share the bed with him. He lay there facing her side making cute faces as he had begun phase 2 of Pragya manao mission. He would not mess this up as he had from his informant BulBul had come to know why Pragya had not forgiven him. Rock Star Abhi would go on break till husband Abhishekh did not manao his wifey Pragya. He had already thought of cute cute ways he would manao her but... Uh Oh! His smile faded. "Arre darwaza kholo... Mujhe bathroom mein band kyun kiya hai? Abhishekh I swear if this is your doing I will not forgive you!" Abhi sat up on bed. He had a death scare look on his face. He opened the door. Pragya looked at him. "Wo the lock gives trouble... you were not there na toh everything got spoiled. Now everything will be ok." "Yes especially you..." Pragya mumbled angrily and saw the reason he had locked her in the washroom. She gave him an angry look but turned away from him and smiled. Abhi saw her image in the mirror. He jumped with joy. "Hasee toh phansee."

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Originally posted by: vivkriti

Lovely update. Such a emotional chapter. Loved it.

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Originally posted by: Humzy

Wow awsm update

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Very nicely written

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