Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi,
First of all very sorry for the delay I changed my mobile n am just learning to use it so was unable to write it I will definitely post it regularly coming forth n sorry again.N here's your chapter.
chap-11
All the students were discussing about their project with their guides.
Mayank:Mintu youridea s stunning as you are I think you will definitely win this time
Gunjan:Sir am in it too
Mayank:Oh I know it's Mintu's idea its so obvious.What Mintu?
Mintu:Yes sir its my idea
Mayank:Gunjan you are always wise in choosing ur partner
Gunjan:What you mean?
Rachna:Gunjan control he is our lecturer
Kabir:Excuse me Rachna am explaining here n what are you talking there
Rachna:Am sorry sir
Vishwa:Sir cool why are you harsh at girls
Kabir:Mind your words Vishwa
Mayank:These students have no respect on us lets show them what we can do
Mayank threw Gunjan's form n just took Mintu's form alone.All other students laughed at her. Gunjan felt it so embarrassing n ran from the place.
Rachna:Sir How can you behave so rude to her?
Mayank:I know what am doing,You listen to Kabir's class else you will be out of this competition too.
Rachna:I Quit
She said raising her voice crushing her papers and ran to see Gunjan which shocked all three boys.
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In hostel
Gunjan was crying so hard remembering everything.Rachna tried her best to console her but she didn't stop crying .
Gunjan:He s doing t on purpose? how can he treat me so..He wants me to plead him Rachna I cant do it,I want to change my college
Rachna:Gunjan bliv me I will talk to him n make sure he will never come to your side too
Gunjan:Am mad to love him Rachna,You know right how much I love him but he wants me to get hurt I cant bliv it the one who wanted me to smile lifelong is making me cry.
Rachna:I can understand it Gunjan but you should not give up,You r my inspiration n today you are falling
Gunjan:I cant be strong before him Rachna,did you see how much he was starring at that Mintu oh god I wanted to kill him at that time n he avoided me for her
Rachna:Your actual problem is Mayank rejected your form or seeing Mintu
Gunjan:Who cares for the first, How can he see any girl than me
Rachna:So you still love him no Gunjan don't start again n hurt yourself
Gunjan:Rachna be practical did you stop loving Kabir
Rachna:Yes I have no love on him n as promised my family am going to only concentrate on studies
Gunjan:You cant hide truth for so long Rachna
Rachna:You rest am going to class bye
Gunjan:Hey if you see that Mintu say I warned her to be away from Mayank
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Rachna saw Mayank sitting in canteen alone and decided to talk to him.
Rachna:Sir can I talk to you min
Mayank:Anything except Gunjan
Rachna:Sir I need an answer from you,are you trying to hurt her bcoz she broke up with you don't you think its silly
Mayank:Let it be I don't care
Rachna:But I care for her
Mayank:oh you care for her more than me
Rachna:So you still care for her
Mayank:Yes I do,I care for her n I love her too
Rachna:Really but why you hurt her
Mayank:I thought you as my good friend too but You are talking only as Gunjan's friend,You should think how much I would have got hurt when she just throwed me out of her life.You can't understand it
even you did the same for Kabir
Rachna stood there speechless seeing Mayank crying so she stepped forward to console him Mayank got over emotional and hugged Rachna.
Mayank:Rachna am really doing all this to get her attention back n to prove her that she loves me, I need her back but I want her to come first
:Guys what's happening here
Hearing Kabir's voice Mayank broke the hug n wiped his tears.
Mayank:I will tell you later man.I have class now bye both of you.
Kabir:Why was he crying?
Rachna:He is missing Gunjan
Kabir:Nonsense it is He s mad to love a girl who dumped him
Rachna raised her eyebrow n looked at Kabir who gave her a confident n no regret look.
Rachna: n Gunjan s mad too to still love him n may be that's y they are made for each other n not like us
Kabir:You really think so
Rachna:Yes ofcourse sir they both r made for each other
Kabir:I didn't ask that?You really think we not made for each other
Rachna:I guess we should talk about our friends now
Kabir:What about them
Rachna:We should help our friends join again for that we should work as a team
Kabir:Am ready but are u sure she won't hurt Mayank again for her family sake
Rachna:I have plan for that too,We gonna make Mayank to be liked by her parents as well what say
She raised her hand for hifive n Kabir too placed his palm on hers when their hands touched both their eyes locked n Kabir pushed his fingers between her fingers n their palm locked as well.
Vishwa:Excuse me
Both came back to the real world n took back their hands
Kabir:Yes Vishwa tell me
Vishwa:Sir I saw in notice board my name n Rachna name included for the competition but we quit it sir
Kabir:Hmm I gave your names
bliving you have lot of chances to win
Vishwa:What you say Rachna?
Rachna:Lets do it
Vishwa went to hug her in happiness but Kabir suddenly moved between both n Vishwa hugged him.Seeing the boys awkwardness Rachna was laughing hard
Vishwa:Sir you
Kabir:Oh come onVishwa ,You should thank me first, Vishwa with wierd expressions hugged Kabir.
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In lab,
Rachna:Gunjan you know! Evening Mintu n sir going for coffee day
Gunjan:Really oh I will teach that Mintu a big lesson today
Rachna:I think you should follow them to coffee day
Gunjan:Yes you are right
Rachna ran to Kabir n showed him thumps up n she signalled him to start his acting.
Kabir:Mayank can we go for coffee day today
Mayank:Why not man we will go
Kabir happily signalled Rachna his success.
Later in evening
Vishwa:Rachna how about we going for coffee day today
Rachna:Coffee day today no way
Vishwa:Why not
Rachna:I have more work
Vishwa:No Rachna you should come plsss
Vishwa knelt before her n pleaded Rachna felt embarrassing since everyone were looking at her and she nodded to escape from situation.
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Mayank arrived coffee day first n booked a table too,Gunjan reached next but she booked a table far behind him that he could not see her n she was eagerly waiting for mintu to come.
Kabir has come as planned and he was waiting for Rachna n he was shocked seeing Rachna coming with Vishwa.His anger reached the peak when Rachna avoided him n went inside.
Kabir:What the hell she thinks about herself she wants me to come here to see this shit,I know how to cancel her plan now
Mayank:Hey Man you came at last
Kabir came n sat with Mayank
Gunjan:Where s this Mintu?
Rachna:Why Kabir behaving like this
Vishwa:Rachna can we order
Rachna:I want to use washroom,wait I will be back in a min.
Kabir without missing his chance follwed her
Rachna:Why you spoiling the plan,we want them to spend time remember
Kabir:But Why did you come with Vishwa
Rachna:oh God he was so torturing me,I was cornered
Kabir:Can I help you then
Rachna:Yes pls...
Kabir dialed a number
Vishwa:Hello
Kabir:Vishwa we arecalling from college, your parents have come to meet you pls come to office room.
Rachna seeing Kabir's acting was stunned
Vishwa kept a small note for Rachna on table and he left.Rachna was so relieved and thanked him.There Gunjan was bored n thought to return back but Rachna blocked her way.
Gunjan:Rachna how come you are here?
Rachna:Heard Mintu is not well so thought to pick u up
Gunjan:Oh she escaped from me today.
Rachna:Come on Gunjan lets go then
Gunjan:No Rachna wait Its my time to tease him
Mayank:What y you starring at me?
Gunjan:Am so sorry for you darling,You don't even have a company
Mayank:Kabir's here
Gunjan:Kabir ha ha I think you both would be always single
Mayank:oh Is it then with whom did you come?? First find ur partner n then tease others.
He left the table leaving Gunjan yell at him more.
Kabir signalled Rachna to come out.
Rachna:Gunjan you go college I will cum soon
Gunjan:Ok come soon
Rachna ran to Kabir who was sitting on a table he booked for him n Rachna.
Rachna:Sir why did you call me say soon there's no time
Kabir:Chill down n have your coffee first
Rachna seeing the smiley on the coffee smiled the same way at Kabir.
Kabir:I think we should plan something else this jealousy thing s making them only fight more
Rachna without listening to him was enjoying her coffee,Her upper lip was painted with cream n foam as she was sipping it.Kabir was more disturbed seeing her he wanted to taste the foam on her upper lip so badly n he was controlling himself.
Rachna:You didn't drink sir
Kabir:You can call me Kabir its not college now
Rachna:You don't like me calling sir?
Kabir:No
Rachna:Ha Ha you remember how you used to get irritate whenever I call you brother.
Kabir:Yes how can anyman accept his love calling him brother
Rachna:X love right
Kabir:Yes X love
Rachna:Hmm hey what's our next plan
Kabir:I have an idea but am not sure how well it will work out
Rachna:What's that
Kabir:We become lovers again
Rachna:What have you lost it
Kabir:I mean if we pretend before them like we patch up may be they might too
Rachna:That's brilliant man,You are a genious
Both gave cheers to each other n sipped their coffee.

Edited by saravathi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Logged on hoping to find an update by you, good timing for me!
Mayank, Mayank, not sure if I wanted to feel sorry for him or give him a smack😆, treating poor Gunjan so badly just because he misses her so much!
And Gunjan getting a little vicious sending threats to the other girl via Rachna, way too funny!
Loved how just going for coffee turned into such confusion for everyone!
You saved the best last though - Sure, Kabir you have absolutely no ulterior motive by "pretending" you and Rachna have reconciled right😉; the two of them are just setting a good example for their friends😆
Loved it all, and looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Logged on hoping to find an update by you, good timing for me!

Mayank, Mayank, not sure if I wanted to feel sorry for him or give him a smack😆, treating poor Gunjan so badly just because he misses her so much!
And Gunjan getting a little vicious sending threats to the other girl via Rachna, way too funny!
Loved how just going for coffee turned into such confusion for everyone!
You saved the best last though - Sure, Kabir you have absolutely no ulterior motive by "pretending" you and Rachna have reconciled right😉; the two of them are just setting a good example for their friends😆
Loved it all, and looking forward to the next update!

Thanks Kelly, Actually ur update reminded me I should do mine n I just rushed up n updated somehow..N glad that you liked it n good confusion on Mayank 😆 n Kabir's motive or not even I dunno
Edited by saravathi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it waiting for the romance to begain
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh great!!!!
If had wished 4 something else,then I would have also got got...
Ws impatiently waiting 4 the update... n u updated...
Great update...
Luv the highfive that rabir got...
Then awww mayan r too cute here... am loving their nok jhok...(Not to 4get also 4 rabir ;-) )
The smiley in rachna's coffee n she giving a cute smile too sweet...
Kabir too much jealous I'm enjoying it too much...
Am waiting 4 them to act as a couple again...
Continue soon
N ya thnx 4 the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Saravathi,this is for your ff.



owww great work👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Saranya,beautiful update again.
What to say about these boys?

Mayank and kabir still missing Gunjan and Rachana.But thier Ego [can i call it Ego?]

But Gunjan is too hurt by Mayank but still she confessed her love.

Rachana nd Kabir became Love guru for them.Again fab acting by kabir to sent Vishnu off.

I likd the way Kabir treating Rachana.I can hear his heartbeats[i am over reacting na?]

I like Rabir here.

Thank you for your beautiful update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saravathi

Alka thanks a lot ,I cant bliv,this wow love u lotsss
And as already said am a big fan of your photos n u did t for me,I am in search of words to express my thanks..
N my name on it my real name wow I feel so spl thanks a lot for spending ur precious time for me

welcome SAaranya.Today is friendship day.What is the way to celebrate the day.I find you as a friend here.The best gift
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey saranya i am so sorry and i am back but maybe not properly but still i read it on mobile as i am online on it but tell me i loved the update and i am sorry but i liked vishwas too he is kinda very cute and totally in love with the update 😳 rachna was about to ragged but kabir came and the most important twist was that she handled the situation herself and made friends instead she is being confident and kabir burning with jealousy and hiding his laughter was too cute loved that part of chocolate 😳 and wow i am luving gunjan here too she is so cute eating chocolates 😆 wow amazing update sarnya and i am really sorry for being so late but what to do i am somewhere feeling very homesick and hostel network sucks it was not coming since so many days and now i will buy dongle and will be active here and i missed u and the ff a lot 😭
But luv the update and more of college activities
Hats off as usual 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wow ehat a twist now i am sure mayan will be togethher and rabir well they are pretending but will be together i am sure 😳 felt really bad for gunjan and even mayank as he is so much in love that he even didnt realise how he acted 😭 but rabir is to their rescue oh wow 😃 in this way they are close 😳 i am very happy with this twist and sranya what to say for your writing its very fresh and now i am eagerly waiting for the day when i will be reading your first novel and saying that this great writer is my friend 😆 and loved kabir when he tricked vishwa to leave that was lovely and and now i am happy happy
Loved the update and really sorry for the delay 😭
But hats off 👏 👏

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