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Came here on Disha's recommendation and i can't tell you how much i have enjoyed catching up with this story.
I loved the 'Dhruv' twist that you gave in this story.
I kept waiting for the 'magical' moment when Arnav & khushi would finally be face to face so you can imagine my pleasant surprise in realising that, that happened in the prologue itself. 😆
You pulled it off so well.
In fact i think you left trails of it through out the 3 chap that the person that khushi is looking after was Arnav and not Dhruv but i guess i was not smart enough to catch up on those. Right from khushi getting flustered by Arnav and Arnav getting enamoured by the vivacious khushi.
The whole jump from present to past to present was a bit confusing initially but as you read the story forward i think the flow of the sequence of events was just perfect. In fact it made the story that much more interesting.
You are doing a fab job of narrating this story i can't wait to read what is shyam's wicked plan and what is his hidden agenda in this whole affair.
Looking to read how you will take this amazing tale forward. Would love to receive pms the next time you update.
Yeh Fitoor Tera
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