You Are My 'Aaliya'(FF)Pt3upPg4

Hello guys,
this is my first FF on zaya
Plz tell me hows my prologue n do like😊😉

INDEX:
Prologue - Below
Part 1 - Page no.2
Part 2 - Page no.3
Part 3 - Page no.4(some pics are not available and i don't know why?)


Prologue:
I was feeling dizzy and everything around me was a complete blackout.
I couldn't feel nor see anything.What happened to me and how?
FlashBack:
Zain:Just go away from me aaliya!!!!!Mujhe tumse talak chahiye!
*Threw divorce paper on my face*
Aaliya:Zain...Meri baat suni un FIR papers maine sign nahi kia tha...Mera vishwas karo
Why would i do this?Woh meri bhi to mami hai...
Zain:Bus!!!Bahut hogaya ...bahut sun li tumhari yeh bakwas ...in papers par sign karo aur dafaa ho jao meri zindagi se...
I was fully broken from inside...How could do it to me...he said i was his LIFE...his WIFE!!!
I had to sign that paper because i can't see him sad nor angry...
*FlashBAck ends*

I can't remember what happened to me and why am i here in this dark room...
I shouted"ZAIN" "ZAIN" but no one was there...
GOD where am i???

So guys here it is...
Pls give opinions on this prologue
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Prologue seems interesting...
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sounds very interesting..
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look interesting.love to read more.update soon.

Interesting continue and please do PM me

Excited to read it

Nice opening indeed.

Wow it was amazing loved it! x
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So after u all r approving my prologue...
Here it is:
Zain-Blue
Aaliya-pink
PART 1-
I was feeling dizzy and everything around me was a complete blackout.
I couldn't feel nor see anything.What happened to me and how?
FlashBack:
Zain:Just go away from me aaliya!!!!!Mujhe tumse talak chahiye!
*Threw divorce paper on my face*
Aaliya:Zain...Meri baat suni un FIR papers maine sign nahi kia tha...Mera vishwas karo
Why would i do this?Woh meri bhi to mami hai...
Zain:Bus!!!Bahut hogaya ...bahut sun li tumhari yeh bakwas ...in papers par sign karo aur dafaa ho jao meri zindagi se...
I was fully broken from inside...How could do it to me...he said i was his LIFE...his WIFE!!!
I had to sign that paper because i can't see him sad nor angry...
*FlashBAck ends*

I can't remember what happened to me and why am i here in this dark room...
I shouted"ZAIN" "ZAIN" but no one was there...
GOD where am i???
Why are my hands tied up to this chair?wait there is someone who is coming...
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Rehan!!!!What why is he here?Is he behind all this?
Aaliya:Tum...Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?tumne to kahi mera hath nahi bandh rakhe?
Rehan:*After his evil laugh*Ha...main REHAN KHAN...maine hi tumhe yaha bandh kiya hai.
Aaliya:Par kyun???Tumne mujhe aise kyu bandha hai??
Rehan:Kyunki...Kyunki main tumse PYAAR karta hun,
*What??...What is he talking about!!!He loves me???*
Aaliya:Kya???Tum pagal hogaye ho kya??
Rehan:*Holds my hand*Ha...Ha Aaliya main tumhare pyaar me paagal ho gaya hun...
Aaliya*removing his hand from mine*Chee Rehan tum aisa karoge aise maine kabhi nahi socha...Zain to tum par itna vishwas karta tha...vo tumhe chodega nahi agar use pata lag gaya!!!
Rehan:Chodega to tabh na jab use pata hoga ki tum yahaan ho..(smirks) aur waise bhi woh tumse abh pyaar nahi karta kyuki woh mere jaal mei phas gaya hai...(again smirks)
Aaliya:Kya ???Jaal...to tumne un FIR par sign kia tha??
Reham:*after his evil laugh*Ha wohi mera plan tha lekin...sign tumne hi kia tha
Aaliya:*What me??*Main??
Rehan:Hain us din jo company ke documents par tumne aur zain ne sign kia tha wo divorce paper the...
Aaliya:*Kya??*Tumne mere aur zain ke vishwas ka galat fayada uthaya!!!!
Rehan:Fayada to main abh uthaunga...woh bhi tumhara...(smirks)


Barkat Villa
Ghulam and Shabana enter
Shabana and Ghulam:Zain *crying*
Zain:*shocked to see them*Kya hua phoops?
Ghulam:Zain aaliya ko gunde utha ke legaye;;;;;
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Kya aaliya ko gunde utha ke leke chale gaye????Use kuch hua toh nahi???Unhone kahi uske sath kuch kiya toh nahi..
Zain:Phoops aap yeh kya keh rahe hai??
Shabana:Zain woh aaliya ghar aari this meri saath toh aachanak gunde aye aur mujhe sir pe maara aur aaliya ko behosh kar leke chale gaye aur yeh message bad me bheja...
*shows me the message*
It reads-
MR.Zain Abdullah tumhe tumhari biwi aaliya kabhi nahi milegi
tum ne use kho diya...ab woh mere kabze mei hai...
Tumhara dushman
Kya ??? maine aaliya ko kho diya nahi aisa nahi ho sakta...woh meri hai sirf...
Zain:Phoops aap royi mat mai launga aaliya ko...
zain was about to go...but surraiya enters
Surraiya:zain tum kahi nahi jaa rahe...waise bhi tumhara aaliya ke saath koi rishta bhi nahi hai...
Zain:Par mom maine use se nikkah kiya hai...
Surraiya:Nahi zain tumne us se nikkah kiya tha...tumne divorce liya haai us se
Zain:Mom abhi divorce hua nhi hai...woh abhi bhi mere biwi hai..
How can my mom say like that i know i had hurt aaliya by giving divorce and breaking all the relationships with her...But i still love her...she is my Life...my Wife...agar use kuch bhi hua toh main zinda nahi reh paunga...
Zain left in his car,,
Car scene
Main abh kya karu main nahi jee sakta uske binna...Main aaliya ka phone track karta hoon...
LOCATION FOUND:Jaliyawala bagh
mujhe jaldi nikal na chahiye kahi woh use ke sath kuch galat na kare...
HE quickly left and reached there...

Jaliyawala bagh
Zain:"AALIYA" "AALIYA" kaha ho tum ??
Rehan there with aaliya-
REhan:Fayada to main abh uthaunga...woh bhi tumhara...(smirks)
Aaliya:Chee rehan...*He was tracing his hand on my body*
REhan chdo mujhe..."ZAIN" "ZAIN" tum kaha ho
Rehan:Yahaan tumhe koi bahane nahi ayega...(smirk)
Zain on the other hand heard aaliya's voice...his aaliya's voice
he chased her voice and reached a room
Zain:"AALIYA" "AALIYA"
Aaliya:"ZAIN" "ZAIN"
Rehan on the other hand was making her uncomfortable by touching her..
When no one opened the door Zain broke the door..
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.Zain:*Cried loudly*AALIYA
Aaliya:Zain...mujhe bachau
Zain saw rehan and was shocked
Zain:REHAN tum??
Rehan:Ha mai
Zain:tumne yeh sab kiya??
Rehan:Ha
Zain:PAr kyu main to tum par itna vishwas karta tha
Rehan:Isliye kyuki main aaliya se pyaar karta hun
Zain:Kya???
Rehan:HA tumne sahi suna
And suddenly he takes out his gun and points it towards zain...
REhan:Aur agar tum yaha se nahi hate to main tumhe mardunga
ZAin:MAr do mai khush rahunga...kyuki main aaliya ki mohhabat me fanaa hogaya
Aaliya:Zain...
Zain:Shhh



And Rehan click the trigger but...something happened
What happened????
Stay tuned to know..
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aisa isliye kyuki i am new to this foum😊