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Posted: 11 years ago
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Conversations

"So...what do you think of me?"

"em..you seem friendly...I like you"

that was a casual remark

"how do I look?"

um..what?

"fine"

"just fine?"

W*F.

"yeah"

"on a scale of one to ten?"

Oh dear god.

"emm...5"

ha.

" I'm gona cry in the plane"

Please do.

"want some tissues?"

How mean.

"the airhostess will give me some"

Of course

"maybe she can give you comfort too"

"I wasn't expecting that"

Wow, the nerve of the woman.

"well maybe you should start expecting the unexpected"

One raised eyebrow..pshh

"not cool"

Ouch.

"did I just break your heart into a million pieces?"

"nope"

"why is it made of stone?"

Hilarious.

"you are not funny"

Joker.

"seems like its working"

Oh the joy of the win.

"not really"

mad woman or what.

" you are clearly losing it"

Mister touch me not.

"no I am not"

Keep calm. Keep calm. Keep calm.

"yes you are"

One step.

"no I'm not sweetheart"

Sweet. Of course.

"yes you are mister"

Two step.

"no I'm-"

Three step.

"sshh"

"I"

Kiss number one.

"love"

Two kisses down.

"you"

Lip lock.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Smooth as ice. This is very interestingly written! I so enjoyed reading this.
Just a suggestion? Just put the dialogue there. No thoughts. A scene entirely through dialogue.
But otherwise, made for really cool reading! 😊
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Originally posted by: LoveToLaugh

Smooth as ice. This is very interestingly written! I so enjoyed reading this.

Just a suggestion? Just put the dialogue there. No thoughts. A scene entirely through dialogue.
But otherwise, made for really cool reading! 😊


Thanks! next time i'll post one with dialogues only 😳

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