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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 5


Hum chand ki bahome khud ko sama baithe
Roshni ki rahome woh najar aane lage
Jab dekhne chale fulo me khushbu
Unse hi dil laga baithe

Oh ghosh.How Gunjan sleep?totally like a child.Mayank even didn't noticed it?they both dozzed off like that?

I am enjoying this Mayan but with Rabir forever.Your ff's Kabir is too decent man and totally fallen in love with cutie pie Rachana.

She was too feelings for him and somehow she is afrading to admit it.

Rachana brave girl confess your love soon as we want to see cute romance between you and Kabir.

They are going to share one house.Great.

Chandaal chokadi will have great fun i know

@Saravati,you are amazing writer dear

hope you will like the rest aswell,my tension s growing now
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap 6
Sitaro ke mele hai par dil akela hai
Sache pyaar ka ha har haal akela hai
Hum na samaz paye unhe
Shayad humare najaro ka khela hai

Slowly slowly i am involving myself in the place of Rachana

How that little girl face all this noisy party?drink and party?we know that Rachana is Rich in her simplicity.

Kabir too feeling same.But his life was aparted before Rachana's arrival.But now he is changed for good.

Same with Mayank.But one this is diff with Mayan and Rabir that Rabir are deeply attached with each other but couldn't express it clearly [actually this is the beauty of their relation] and Mayan are showing it on each and every step.

Poor Rachana feeling that Kabir's first kiss ever for her [my thinking] and Kabir too feeling the same.

At last their lips finds the way for their love path.

Beautiful update Saravathi
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Chap 6

Sitaro ke mele hai par dil akela hai
Sache pyaar ka ha har haal akela hai
Hum na samaz paye unhe
Shayad humare najaro ka khela hai

Slowly slowly i am involving myself in the place of Rachana

How that little girl face all this noisy party?drink and party?we know that Rachana is Rich in her simplicity.

Kabir too feeling same.But his life was aparted before Rachana's arrival.But now he is changed for good.

Same with Mayank.But one this is diff with Mayan and Rabir that Rabir are deeply attached with each other but couldn't express it clearly [actually this is the beauty of their relation] and Mayan are showing it on each and every step.

Poor Rachana feeling that Kabir's first kiss ever for her [my thinking] and Kabir too feeling the same.

At last their lips finds the way for their love path.

Beautiful update Saravathi

Thanks again Alka,u making my day
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Posted: 11 years ago
Your chapters giving all the shades of on lov story.And here you are handling two love stories.Hats off to you.
I was scared when Gunjan and Mayank entered in their room where Rabir was in one other romantic world.

And first time like Rachana was saying no to Kabir for one purpose.Bravo Rachana👏That's like a good girl.Josh me bi hosh nahi khoti.Love you Rachana and Kabir too agree with that.

Four making and enjoying their fun time and Police entres.But i am not disappoointed with that at all.Now Mayank Gunjan and Rachana Kabir this is time to prove your pure love.Do something man.

Girls showed their love for your by coming out from bed when they saw you in trouble.

I love the dosti in Kabir and Mayank..

Pure love take exams dear.You will have to pass it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

Your chapters giving all the shades of on lov story.And here you are handling two love stories.Hats off to you.

I was scared when Gunjan and Mayank entered in their room where Rabir was in one other romantic world.

And first time like Rachana was saying no to Kabir for one purpose.Bravo Rachana👏That's like a good girl.Josh me bi hosh nahi khoti.Love you Rachana and Kabir too agree with that.

Four making and enjoying their fun time and Police entres.But i am not disappoointed with that at all.Now Mayank Gunjan and Rachana Kabir this is time to prove your pure love.Do something man.

Girls showed their love for your by coming out from bed when they saw you in trouble.

I love the dosti in Kabir and Mayank..

Pure love take exams dear.You will have to pass it

I like ur review a lot.the way u taking things is so matured n luv t..Thanks Alka
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Saravati,i read this chapter too.
I am not at all angree or disappointed with the story.Coming from their love story.I am very much in favour of their career first.Love is not enough for life spent.Girls decession of joining colledge is really appreciable.

I am very much happy about that family who gave a golden chance to Rachana and Gunjan to complete their studies and no in hurries for marriage.I salute you as a writer for this brave step⭐️.Rare people can understand the resposbilities as a writer.

Now i think this will teach lesson to Kabir and Mayank too that they will built their career first before thinking wrong for Gunjan and Rachana.

Bravo girls and bravo Garg family.
This is actually Indian love story.Full of rituals and full of moral values,

Outstanding dear.👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parmarA

@Saravati,i read this chapter too.

I am not at all angree or disappointed with the story.Coming from their love story.I am very much in favour of their career first.Love is not enough for life spent.Girls decession of joining colledge is really appreciable.

I am very much happy about that family who gave a golden chance to Rachana and Gunjan to complete their studies and no in hurries for marriage.I salute you as a writer for this brave step⭐️.Rare people can understand the resposbilities as a writer.

Now i think this will teach lesson to Kabir and Mayank too that they will built their career first before thinking wrong for Gunjan and Rachana.

Bravo girls and bravo Garg family.
This is actually Indian love story.Full of rituals and full of moral values,

Outstanding dear.👏👏

I would say t as the best compliment
am sooo blessed to hear such a comment from u,thanks dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
@Saravathi,

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chap-9
Rachna and Gunjan shifted to hostel for their new college n both decided to concentrate on their studies without breaking their family trust.It was difficult for girls to forget their love but new place,new friends kept them busy n not to think about past.
Gunjan:Rachna today s our freshers party n why are you dressed in old dress
Rachna: But this s my lucky dress..Whenever I wear it,I will get what I want
Gunjan:Best of my luck my best friend
Rachna fed Gunjan sweet n both took blessings from god n left to college.
Both the girls were surprised seeing the infrastructure of college.,it looked so vast,As the girls walked along the pavement between the trees they saw many seniors starring at them n freshers walking along their parents.The girls found the auditorium n came n took their seats.They waited for a quite long time for the program to start.
Rachna:Uhh finally chairman came
Gunjan:but someone pls tell her to stop she s boring me
Rachna:Shhh
Gunjan:Will they give us snacks or not,atleast I would enjoy that
Rachna laughed at Gunjan n pinched her hand.suddenly the girls heard names which were too familiar to them from Chairperson's speech,they both raised their head in so much of eagerness n was shocked seeing Mayank n Kabir walking towards Dias,Both dressed in black coat n white shirt n a red tie went running to the stage,while all the girls jaw opened on seeing them.
Both took blessings from the chairman n the chairman did the honours by giving the shield n medal n handed the mike to boys.
Gunjan n Rachna were so tensed seeing the boys they hided themselves by sitting so down in chair n Rachna's hands were shaking n Gunjan held it.
Gunjan:They cant see us in this crowd Rachna dont worry.
Mayank:Hi handsome guys n beautiful girls,We take the pleasure in welcoming u all to our university
Kabir:Each of you would have come up with a dream like I had n I am not sure if college will make u achieve all ur dreams but in the end you will definitely know how to achieve ur dreams
Mayank:Well said Kabir n I request any of the fresher to come up to stage n share us what ur expectations r
No one raised their hand.So the boys asked someone from last but one row to come up,The light flashed on the row where our girls sat.
Kabir:The girls who are hiding behind the chairs pls come up,A big applause for them guys.
Gunjan:Rachna you go
Rachna:No you go
Since the crowd shouted more Gunjan stood up dragging Rachna along her n light was only on the girls now.
Mayank and Kabir went speechless on seeing the girls,They stood still as the girls walked to the Dias.
Kabir:Mayank whats all this.Shit I thought I should never meet her
Mayank:Kabir control all are watching us
Both the boys gave the fake smile on their face n Mayank gave mike to Rachna.Kabir found her hands shaking like asusual n felt that mad feeling that she would expect him to hold her hand n scolded himself for thinking crazy.
Rachna:Good morning all am Rachna, Hi Mayank n Kabir first thanks for welcoming all of us,I dunno what to speak am really nervous
Saying it she gave a smile biting her lips n Kabir noticed it but he changed his side to crowd n was irritated seeing all the boys admiring Rachna.
Rachna:My expectations might sound too high but I think I can do it,its that after four years like Mayank n Kabir I want to adress the freshers after bcuming pride to university.
Everone in auditorium clapped for her bold answer including the chairman.
Mayank:Wish you all sucess Miss Rachna
Kabir:That was really a good one Rachna
Rachna didnt dare to look in to his n she just smiled putting her head down.And the girls walked back to crowd n Gunjan hugged her for being so bold before the boys.
Chairman:I could see lot of promising talents here,for all those I have a spl surprise,our pride Mayank n Kabir will work for our college for few months n will train the freshers.Freshers pls make use of them,the whole crowd was happy for this except for the two girls.The freshers party continued with some singing n dance performances by seniors.
Rachna:Gunjan before the boys leave,come lets go hostel
Gunjan:Dont be silly what if we get caught
Rachna:Noone will see us come
Gunjan:Rachna my snacks
Rachna:Will get you more to eat pls come now
Both the girls ran from the auditorium n stopped at the canteen for some breath.
Gunjan:Wow Rachna canteen
Rachna:Hey its nice.come lets have something
The girls bought an icecream n sat to eat,while the boys entered.Rachna dropped the icecream in shock n Gunjan swallowed her icecream n her cheeks were bulging.
Mayank:Kabir did you see who s here?
Kabir:How will I miss seeing the cheaters
Gunjan:Mayank what's this?
Mayank:Hello miss Gunjan first have your icecream n then talk..See how funny she eats Kabir
Both guys laughed hard n shared an hifive.
Rachna:Hello,We thought not to disturb you since we did mistake but you going beyond ur limits.
Rachna said it pointing her finger towards Kabir n he twisted her finger back,
Kabir:Dont dare to point your finger at me again,and both of you dont forget we are going to be your lecturers.
Gunjan:So
Mayank:You both really going to have bad time,feeling sad for you
Kabir left Rachna's finger n put his cooler on n left the place following Mayank.
Rachna:Whats this Gunjan.I hate them
Gunjan:I cant imagine they will hate us this much
Rachna:we should be more carefull Gunjan.
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Next day as the girls sat next to each in first bench n was waiting for lecturer to arrive..Mayank entered the class.
Mayank:Good morning frnds
Except for the girls all wishes them.
Mayank:So before I start with my class I have something to share with you..He started explaining on his own project.
Gunjan:I never knew Mayank s more of publicity,He keeps talking about himself
Mayank:Whats that sound,Gunjan pls stand up
Gunjan:Sir I didn do anything
Mayank:Hereafter you n Rachna should not sit together in my class,Go shift to the last bench
Gunjan scolded him badly n moved to her bench,She slept in his class hiding behind the girls n Rachna was bit worried if she will get caught l but luckily his class was over n Kabir came in.Rachna ran to Gunjan n woke her up n took her to her place.
Kabir:So how was your first class Gunjan
Gunjan:Superb sir,He took the class so lively
Rachna was controlling her laughter n Kabir sensed t.
Kabir:Rachna could you rub the board for me
Rachna came front with so much hatred in her face n after rubbin she placed the duster so forcely n Kabir was enjoying it,suddenly she stamped on the stick n was about to fall when Kabir placed his hand before her tummy that she fell in his arms.The boys whistled n Kabir left the hold feeling bit awkward.
Rachna remembered stick was in Kabir's hand while she went to rub the board n thought he did it on purpose n took the stick from down n placed on desk n left to her place angrilly.
Gunjan:What madam..flashback uh?
Rachna:No way,I hate him
Kabir to himself " Why did I help her,Oh god I should not fall for her again."End of chap -9
Edited by saravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic Update..!!!
I really love how they're all behaving..it's very interesting to read. I know they'll fall in love soon.😳
Kabir and Mayank are being very rude to the girls but I know the girls will be strong. Just waiting to see how they all would fall in love once again.
Interesting update and now I really want to read more, so please update as soon as you get time..please.😛
p.s. yaay I'm first!
Edited by Pookhi - 11 years ago

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