SWARON OS! THEY ARE DEAD WITHOUT EACHOTHER!!

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SWARON OS
"THEY ARE DEAD WITHOUT EACHOTHER"

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I stood on the top of my building ready to just jump off...
I couldnt take it anymore. My heart was tired of beating, my lungs would soon stop functioning and my body will be full of blood.

When the heart pains, it pains much more than any dangerous disease in the whole world! A broken heart takes a milliona to heal but for some its more easier to just leave the world. And I was one of those person who thought leaving the world was better.

My life had given me hardships and problems, even though I was always filled with people who wanted to be my friends, I was always lonely. Then came that special one who gave me his TIME, who made me feel special. Who made me his.. But today after seeing him with someone else, I couldnt bear it. Not just going out with someone else infact he even took her on A DATE! He had cheated me, I was cheated again...

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FLASHBACK

I was so happy today!! I was finally going to a date with my Swayam after a long time. I called him to wish him good morning. He picked the phone up but I heard a girl's voice from behind. Maybe she was just his sister or someone but the thing Swayam said next made me die out of shock.

"Shar, Am sorry! I have promised Taani to take her out to the mall the mall today. Can we please go someother time. Please Shar!" begged Swayam.

I agreed but my mood was sad, I felt betrayed but I still trusted him. I knew which mall he was going and followed him. I found him in a restraunt alone with Taani and he actually had the courtesy to HUG HER!
"That bitch! She stole my Swayu!" I thought

I would have completely loved to murder her right now but I just couldnt believe Swayam left me for her...
I ran back home with tears dripping from my face. I cried and cried! But this was it, Swayam wasnt mine anymore, He was the reason I lived, he was the love of my life!

I messed up my room, I threw the vase and even broke the frame which contained mine and Swayam's picture.
My hands were full of deep red blood, my hair was messed up, my face had become teary and my eyes were burning with fire! I tried to walk but my legs gave up and I broke down!

I slowly drifted off to sleep...

The next day, I didnt get a single message nor a single call from Swayam. I couldnt take it anymore, I couldnt keep this inside me! I had to talk to Swayam. I grabbed my phone and called him.

"Hi! Hi Sharon" he greeted me.

Now I totally lost it!

"Hi! Goddamnit why cant u just admit it that u dont love me anymore, u love Taani. Am I right? Yes, I am. Thanks for betraying me so much, for breaking my trust and for making die! U are the worst man anyone can love, but I did love u! I was better when I was lonely but now its much worse, thanks for giving me HELL Swayam! I trusted u for gods sake" Blurted out Sharon.

"Sharon, Its nothing like that..." Started Swayam.

"U know what just stop acting!" shouted Sharon and cut the phone.

Sharon was tired now, tired of living! She had never recieved the love she had always wanted, always craved for. Her dad gave her everything except his time and Swayam, he was the first one who made her actually happy but he... just betrayed her in the end. Her mom didnt freaking care about her!

Who the hell should she live for! She has no reason to live! Her heart aches! Her dream's broken! Her love's betrayed!

FLASHBACK ENDS
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SWAYAM'S P.O.V

What was wrong with Sharon? How could she even think that I love Taani, How could she even think that I betrayed her!! How? It hurt him, his heart had stopped beating when Sharon told him all this. Why did she do this? Swayam couldnt even explain in to her, Taani was his sister but since their parents were divorced he saw her so rarely. But he loved only one girl - Sharon Rai Prakash, his Sharon, his Siren, the love of his life.

It hurt him to even see his love crying! It hurt him to even know that he betrayed Shar! It hurt him, it hurt him! He would have loved to go hell but making Sharon sad was something he would never be able to see. His eyes found their way for tears, his hands contained broken glass pieces, his blood oozed out through the pores...

He rushed to the Sharon's house! He knew that she would hurt herself! But there was no way Swayam was going to allow that.

Finally he reached Sharon's home. He saw a crowd in front of her house, he went to see what happend. Someone was dead and it was Sharon Rai Prakash...

Swayam died! He couldnt bear it! Sharon's body was filled with blood, her face was tear strained and her heart had stopped beating. Swayam took her to the hospital, he forgot how to walk, he ran! Not even the fastest runner would have beat Swayam this time. In less that 10 minutes, Sharon was in the hospital. Swayam screamed and screamed for a doctor! Finally Sharon was taken to the operation theater.

Swayam called Rey and just told him three words, " Sharon suicide, hospital."

This was enough for Rey to understand What the hell had happend. Rey called everyone and told them the news while he hurried to the hospital..

On the other hand, Swayam slided down on the wall. If Sharon was dead, he wouldnt be able to live! He would die in seconds.. He wasnt breathing, his heart had stopped beating and his eyes were only on the operation theater. He prayed and prayed just for Sharon to be alive! If she even survived he would never leave her alone, he would never stop making her feel special, he would never leave her alone and he would never let any tear to even drop from her brown orbs.

The lights were on, hours went by, no news was given!

Rey ran inside the hospital and saw Swayam broken down. Both his best friends were almost dead, he could never see them like this! Why, why had this happend? Sharon suicided and if Sharon was dead, Rey knew that Swayam wouldnt be intrested to live either.

Swayam's face had gone blue, his hands were shaking, he hadnt had even a drop of water, his hopes were dying...


Finally, a doctor came from inside the operation theater.

Swayam ran to him.
" How is Sharon sir? Please tell me!" he begged

"She is Dead... we tried our best but it didnt work. We are sorry." answered the doctor.

That was all Swayam had to hear! He ran out of the hospital and went home.
He broke everything, he threw everything, there was no place which wasnt covered with blood. He walked to the kitchen and found a knife.

He just dashed it in his heart! Swayam fell, the knife remained there, everything was spinning, he was going to be with his angel...

In a few minutes, Swayam breathed his last, his eyes closed forever, his heart stopped working..
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REY'S P.O.V

He knew Swayam would try to kill himself! He didnt want to loose another friend of his! He couldnt!

He drived as fast as he could to Swayam's house and could only see one thing : A dead body of Swayam Shekhawat...

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After 5 hours:

Millions of news reporters and media crowded at Rey's mansion asking him zillions of questions!

"How did they die?"

"Why did they die?"

"Why didnt u stop them?"

The only answer Rey could give them was : "They are dead without eachother..."
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Edited by diyaswaronholic - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow baccha such a aswom os...

nd the pain is very well written...

do write more baccha...

ur aswom writer as i say
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi... the os is nice...

but i am very sorry to say this... i didnt like the concept...

i dont like the concept of sucide and what swayam and sharons characters did in this story is very impulsive... and sharon didnt trust swayam... if there is something they could have spoke... but she didnt let swayam say anything...

and, i actually love the scene in d3 after rdx marriage where swayam tells sharon about life, love and death... he says something like, life moves on even after some people... ones life doesnt stop with someone...

I am very sorry if i have hurt you, but i told what i felt... please ignore me if you think i am wrong...

I completely appreciate the effort that you have put into this os...
Edited by srinidhi94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os👍🏼

bt it ws very emotional😭
both were living fr each other bt due 2 1 misunderstanding they die fr each other😭😭
truly diya u r develoing as a writer👏
as a true writer is who doesnt understand only 1 emotion bt he describes all 2gther i felt all d emotions in this 1 os⭐️
Edited by Mansi98 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: srinidhi94

hi... the os is nice...


but i am very sorry to say this... i didnt like the concept...

i dont like the concept of sucide and what swayam and sharons characters did in this story is very impulsive... and sharon didnt trust swayam... if there is something they could have spoke... but she didnt let swayam say anything...

and, i actually love the scene in d3 after rdx marriage where swayam tells sharon about life, love and death... he says something like, life moves on even after some people... ones life doesnt stop with someone...

I am very sorry if i have hurt you, but i told what i felt... please ignore me if you think i am wrong...

I completely appreciate the effort that you have put into this os...

thx for ur feedback!
i will definitely improve...
i wasnt there during tanha so i havent seen it.
Apologies for the inconvenience
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

thx for ur feedback!
i will definitely improve...
i wasnt there during tanha so i havent seen it.
Apologies for the inconvenience


thank you for the comment... i am very sorry if i was rude or if i have hurt you...
thought of editing it... but you have seen that before i go in and edited it...
i would have just kept quiet... i dont really have any intention to hurt you... its just the sucide... which i do not like... i think people who attempt sucide are someone who doesnt have the courage to face situations... and swayam and sharon are two strong and sensible characters according to me

but i love your other stories...
Edited by srinidhi94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such emotional os.!!!swayam sharon.truly cant live without each other...n u wrote it so well...made me emotional.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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diya dear.. this is damn good yr.. I m speechless.. it shows how a mis understanding creates a havoc... damn emotional yr.. loved it. thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u sooo very much guyss!!!
Glad u guys liked it!
thx for spending time reading and commenting!!!
Love u all!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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drama queen!!! what was this???? this was such a emotional os
u knw finally u made m cry😭
girl I was in a shock n u r title just suited d situation perfectly!!!
they died together but without each other😔
such a small mu get the worst thing in relationship u proved it n peened it very well...
I m speechless after reading this...
just hats off to u dear

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