SWARON OS! THEY ARE DEAD WITHOUT EACHOTHER!!

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

pakka Drama queen hai re.. :/
SwaRon ko maarne chal padi..
it was sad to see such a small understanding destroy SwaRon's life..
Sharon could have tried talking to Swayam..
still in the end they became one..
keep writing.. :)

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@nishi_taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Very emotional piece of work :)

liked ur style of expressing emotions :)

last part was best one media reporters one:)

firstly i was thinking why u dragged taani as such a neg char but then i read down and realized taani is swayam's siter :)

this is what misunderstanding can do but good one:)

i would liked it more if it would have been on taarey bcz i dont know any about swaron so i read it thinking swarion as taarey:)'

lovely dear :)

with love

nishi:)

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

It was such an emotional OS.

But i loved how you portrayed the depth of their love...beautiful.

Thanks for the pm.

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

diya...it is highly emotional ...

i liked your concept but the situation which can be better...

it was a silly misunderstanding, and 4 that suicide which is not good...

what i like the most is your headline that is "they are dead without eachother"

after the sucide part the pain swayam gone through you penned it well.

love u

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JensenVruShan

@JensenVruShan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Hey Diya

very well written OS. You described all the emotions of both especially Swayam to perfection but

don't be mad the concept was not so great, suicide is not something I think anyone will appreciate.

I loved the phrase "they are dead without each other" it describes SwaRon love to the T just wish it hadn't been in the literal sense

Keep writing

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