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Originally posted by: spvd

part 23 A
awesome dear...
nice...
OMG so those people have played with Maan's life...
poor Geet and Maan...
and Rahul is shocked...
and this Vikas' has shown his true face...
cont soon dear...

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Originally posted by: CutieTeju

<font color="#660033">Geet.. gosh.. what she has done.. Maan in pain... Maanu..N Rahul.. they don't even have time to back out.. once U walk on wrong path there is no turn back from that way.. But U needs courage forit.. I don't tink both can do it now..
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Part 23 B

He looked so damaged... How could they be so careless so inhumane to prescribe such medicines, her heart squeezed with disgust and utter fury. More scared for his life, she followed him.

As if she knew this was going to change everything!

Slowly, and stealthily she followed him in his madness, down the basement, up the stairs. The thudding footsteps matching with her palpitating heart...echoing in the empty basement. Maan stopped for a moment, as if he had sensed her presence; as Geet hid herself into the darkness of the secret staircase. Maan shook his head looking down at his hand as if trying to remember something, his eyebrows furrowing in pain and discomfort. The squeaking of mice broke his train of thoughts and again he resumed his journey.

Geet sighed in relief, waiting for few seconds so as to not raise any suspicion in Maan's mind, if he was conscious of that. Squinting her eyes, she looked in the direction Maan went, an automatic smile spread on her lips as she remembered when he called her "Pink Shaitan" and she had got lost in this staircase. She couldn't see Maan anymore. Worried, and panicked she rushed up the stairs.

Maan was not there. Petrified, she rushed to the window; peeking around she tried to find him in the dark garden surrounding the farmhouse. That's when she felt his presence, behind her as he lined his arms along hers. She shivered, whether it was from the cold or his proximity she couldn't decipher.

She clutched the window sill tightly with her hands with anxiousness and trepidation. What would he do now? Would he hit her? Or force her? There was only one thing she thought she could do- go in flow with him...his actions...his craziness. Maan stepped closer to her, her back crushing to his vest clad chest. Liquid heat pooling in her lower belly, she closed her eyes giving in to his slow seduction- his calloused hands rubbing her arms slowly as he nipped her earlobe.

"Shadow... You are here, for me" He slurred burying his head in the crook of her neck. Geet squirmed in his hold, wanting to turn around...watch him, find out whether he recognizes her. Now that she could finally give a name to the unknown touch, give a face to her assailant; she couldn't agree with the identity anymore...it was the touch of her protector, her heart argued.

"I am here for you..." She whispered slowly not wanting to agitate him more than he was. She wanted to agree with him, going in the flow wanting to see what he would do. It seemed her agreeing to him and giving in to him was calming him down. His lips broadened to a grin against her neck.

"I thought...lost you, you weren't here... I came" He snuggled closer to her wrapping his hands around her waist. Unknowingly she leaned back against his chest, Maan grinned at her gesture. He began kissing, nipping and sucking at her earlobe and collarbone sending her to edge. So lost she was in his desire that she couldn't even realize his hands ascending up her body. Her body stilled as she felt the blindfold around her eyes, tightly bound. She willed her mind as well as heart to calm down, allowing him to do whatever he wanted. Maan bent down slowly lifting her up in his arms, laying her down on the bed.

He sat by her, on the bed; grabbing her palm "I love her so much...so so f***ing much" He whispered in her ear slanting his lips down her neck into her cleavage. She panicked, although she had convinced herself to calm down, but she just couldn't. As if some part of her recognized it as unwilling...an unknown touch ..or unwelcoming. She struggled hard against his grip which seemed to agitate him as he descended his body down onto her, pressing his weight onto her petite soft body. Silent tears rolled down her eyes, as his hands clamped down on hers as well did his persuading lips. He thrust his tongue into her mouth, seducing her to give in. Slowly everything except Maan and his lips disappeared into nothing drawing her into the throes of passion ceasing her struggle. Her hands wrapped around his neck drawing him closer, as he position himself between her legs. Hiking up her kurti till the underside of her breasts his hands roamed around her stomach. Geet moaned unwilling to let his lips go as he reduced his deep kiss to light nips descending from her lips to her chin, biting her chin he sucked at her neck eliciting a moan that seemed to thrill him. "I love you...Geet...love you...care for you...so much" He panted planting her lips at the end of her hiked up kurti, swirling his tongue over her belly button. Geet stilled hearing his confession, he loved her...he cared for her...so much. It wasn't Meera...it was never Meera, always her...she thought delighted. With a force of extreme will, she prevented a happy sob from escaping. As he licked along her waistline, grasping the button of her jeans; Geet stopped him, looking at him tenderly. Her eyes brimming with tears as Maan looked up. He seemed to register her panic as his lips descended on hers again. She caressed the hairs at his nape, tenderly and lovingly running her fingers through his thick mass as he slowly turned her around, flipping her over his body. The kiss was much gentle, so tender...she almost cried feeling his love, his care his concern.

"She loves you too...so much" She blurted overwhelmed with emotion constricting her heart. His hands slid down cupping her butt, pulling her up along his length. She could now feel the need to release, to express his love. Reluctantly she pressed her hands on his chest pulling away, sitting by him composing herself. Maan soon sat up wanting to be as close to her as possible. She pulled the knot behind her throwing away the blindfold, she wanted to see if he would recognise her. Indecisively he pulled away his blindfold as well. He squinted his eyes at her as if seeing her for the first time.

"S-had-ow...you are so beautifu-l" He whispered looking at her deep expressive eyes, "like her..." he blurted.

Clearly he didn't recognize her, Geet sighed sadly pulling herself over his lap. He couldn't recognize her but he felt the inexplicable need to be close to her...to hold her against him and so did he. She comfortably settled his head over her bosom, threading her fingers through his hair; slowly lulling him to sleep. For the first time he didn't feel the need to wake up...to walk away...to hide his identity like he felt the other nights as if a defence mechanism of his mind to protect himself in response to the medicinal effect. He snuggled his face closer, his nose nuzzling her cleavage as she let out the tears of happiness as she made a decision.

"I am going to stand by you, Maan, I am not going to let anyone harm you anymore I promise...I will be your shadow Maan...Your shadow... to protect you..." She promised to herself, her words echoing in the darkness, travelling in thin air. She figured if she just stuck to Maan, Maanu would realize she didn't want the revenge anymore; her avoidance would perhaps makes her realize Maan was just as tormented by the tragic incident as was Maanu. The revenge plan was so futile...so foolish, she thought laughing wistfully. Everyone was so miserable, so sad yet they indulged themselves in the silly plan... she pledged to bring both siblings together...to clear off their torment...to melt the coldness they seemed to bear for each other.

"I will love you so much Maan that you will forget any bitterness you bear in your heart... Di will love you I promise" She whispered before drifting to sleep.

His head throbbed with immense pain as if a hammer striking his brain, his body sore as he realized her presence.

"She loves you too" Were the only words reverberating in his skull, he snuggled closer to block the heavy pain. He bit into her cleavage to stop the painful groan from escaping. Geet moaned in pain squirming and opened her eyes. Maan seemed to be in pin, she thought. He tugged his hair backwards ...caressing them slowly as she leaned in for a kiss. Slowly and gently she sucked on his lips, calming him down as the pain ebbed away. Maan seemed to enjoy it as he responded instantly giving her immense pleasure; his tongue flicking around her lower lip. She gave out a low gasp expressing how much she loved his gesture. His hands roamed over her back, sliding in her kurti, arms grasping her waist and finally landing on her hips.

"Good morning" She finally pulled away after the heavy make-out session, giving him a full-fledged smile rendering him speechless. She slid her lips down his jaw, nipping his chin.

"Morning" Maan drawled out happily. Her cheerful, chirping mood rubbing on him as he felt himself in quite happy mood.

"Let's have breakfast outside, get ready soon Maan, please..." Geet requested with puppy-dog eyes. Maan nodded grinning, "Like a date... Geet?"

"Yes a date..." Geet chirped kissing him on his cheek, untangling himself she stood up on her feet. He held her hand stopping her, "You are unreal Geet..." He frowned at her. "No, I am just very happy" She smiled at him urging him to wake up leading him through the basement.

So lost he was in her happy form that he even ignored to ponder, what the hell he was doing in the farm-house that too, with Geet?

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On the day Maan returned to KM, Sanjay swore to never hit him or raise her voice at him. As if a mutual unsaid agreement, no one ever spoke about Geet in KM and neither did Mohinder visit KM. The friends Sanjay, Mohinder and Shekhar met in office of Khurana's or Handa's. They assumed Geet and Maan never met what with their orders to forbid them from meeting each other. Just they forgot love can never be restrained.

Maan and Geet met each other in the farmhouse, secretly...romancing inconspicuously and studying and helping each other. They just rejoiced in each other's company, never needing anyone else. Witnesses to their teen lovable romance being Nakul and Maanu, who chose to remain silent. Nakul didn't want to break their hearts by reporting to the senior Khurana. While Maanu didn't in fear of her father's wrath and care for Geet. Many a times she did try to dissuade Geet from meeting Maan although with subtle hints but Geet never listened.

Their young hearts soring high in a dream world, enjoying the thrill of the secret budding love unaware of the conspiracies surrounding their family.

Sanjay was depressed, Maan never befriended with anyone else ...even not talking much with him or Maanu. He only saw his eyes lighting up whenever Nakul visited with a dish by his "wife" as he claimed; actually it was being made by Geet and he would send back his compliment by email or a note through Nakul. Sanjay did try for Maan to help Meera, Shekhar's daughter in her studies but he bluntly denied. Sanjay was so hurt with Maan's behaviour and so was Shekhar. He expected as Geet won't meet him, Meera would be Maan's childhood sweetheart, ultimately securing her life and security as a Khurana daughter in law. Often Shekhar saw how closer Sanjay was to Mohinder, than to him...there was a bit of insecurity in him since the college days about their friendship. Neither did Sanjay nor Mohinder realized Shekhar's insecurity.

Months passed by with Shekhar catching Maan and Geet meeting twice outside their school. Shekhar sat in his office wondering what to do when Sanjay called by informing him how Maan was so depressed. Shekhar got an idea as he ordered the Khurana cook to mix a certain powder in Maan's meals in very small amount. It didn't seem to affect him at all.

Shekhar marvelled at his own idea, slowly it was going to affect his brain slowly...thereby Sanjay would lean on him for advices to correct Maan's health, and so maybe further on Meera...he planned out tactfully. However whether it was destiny's play or Maan's luck, he usually skipped his lunch or breakfast and waited when Nakul would bring Geet's newly invented dishes.

Dinner was entirely a different matter, the medicine did affect Maan. Geet noticed, if agitated he would be very moody...only in Geet's presence he calmed down succumbing to her sweet nothings...as informed by Nakul or Maanu.

It was about five years now, since the incident...Maan now 23 and Geet 20 years of age. Their love growing each moment with their togetherness.

Geet was worried, it was about 2 days for Maan's 24th birthday and she was worried for his moody nature. His sometimes agitated nature was worrying what was eating her insides.

"You are worried Geet...what's the matter dear?" His sweet endearments overwhelmed her. "You d-don't want us together Maan? Is that why you are so moody these days... I did notice?" She almost whispered, her eyes lowered in fear of seeing his rejection. Maan shook in fury, sucking in a breath he pulled her closer...placing his mouth on hers with such passion and love as if trying to convince her of his loyalty towards her...the sincerity of his love. And then he left.

Geet was really worried now. He didn't meet her for the next two days, did he...l-leave her...Even the thought seemed to squeeze her heart painfully. He didn't even return her calls, and even Nakul chose to remain tight-lipped on the matter, though he gave her a knowing smile.

"Maan...you achieved everything you desired Maan... Today I am very proud of you son, you have handled the business quite well..." Sanjay said proudly patting Maan's back. Vikash simply gritted his teeth.

"I do want one thing Dad..." Maan gave him a grim smile as he saw Mohinder entering KM after nearly five years with a gift in his hand, probably for him. Maan walked up to Mohinder bending down taking his blessing. He sat back on his knees, with his pleading eyes and joined his hands at Mohinder, "I want to marry Geet..."

"Are you out of your mind Maan..." Sanjay screamed gripping Maan's arm tightly pulling him up. He glared at Maan and then at the guests as they left, scurrying away. Sanjay had thought Maan had almost forgotten about Geet.

Maan snatched his arm letting out a feral growl, "We love each other Dad...Uncle please let us be together..." He requested Mohinder with joined hands, grovelling at his feet. Mohinder was shell-shocked, Geet was busy in handling business...will Maan's proposal torment her peace. He was seriously considering Maan's proposal after seeing his aloofness, although he was enraged.

"It is your birthday Maan, ask for something else...not Geet" He bit out at Maan.

"I wish to just be together with Geet..." Maan spoke sincerely. Mohinder was transfixed at the extent of his love... Even Sanjay was astonished. Vikash looked amused at the drama unfolding. Shekhar was taken aback...how was Maan still inclined to Geet even after his efforts.

"Fine...if Geet approves of you...with all your flaws then I will let you...marry her" He spoke sternly and left. However Sanjay was angry, if Maan ever hurt Geet he wouldn't be able to forgive himself.

"What kind of sick joke is this Maan??" He screamed at Maan as he gave his father a cold stare. "I just wish to marry my love...and make her happy Dad...I don't think anything is wrong in that..." He was already in strenuous relation with his father after his vehement denial of Maanu-Rahul relation. Sometimes Maan did try to be understanding with his father, pleading but all Sanjay did was taunt him... Maan waited for any word from Mohinder regarding Geet's approval. Maan wasn't allowed to even contact anyone...each of his emails and notes being monitored by Sanjay.

There started a cold war between father and son further aggravated by Maan defending for Rahul-Maanu relation, Maanu's attempted suicide, further Maanu cutting off from them and marrying Rahul...settling in London...

Finally Mohinder did come back, after a week though. To Sanjay's surprise Geet was with him. As soon as Maan saw Geet he ran to her hugging her showering her with endearing kisses.

Mohinder walked up to Sanjay engulfing him in a hug with a wide smile, "Congratulations...now we are relatives Sanjay" Sanjay was overwhelmed with Mohinder's acceptance. He hugged him back...expressing his happiness. There had been a bit of strain in their friendship since that day, and Sanjay tried as much he could from his side to mend things up.

As soon Maan drew back, Geet jumped on him wrapping her legs around his hips and kissing him full on on his mouth as if eating his lips out for tormenting her the two days...

A cough and clearing of throats from both elders finally made Geet aware of the audience. She was so so...mortified, her cheeks glowing so red as Maan let out a soft chuckle. Geet hid her face in his chest, "We are getting married Maan" her voice muffled she bit his chest to stop him from laughing so hard at the price of her embarrassment.

"Yes we are..." He said again letting out a chuckle as both elders beamed at them with delight. How wrong they were in judging their relation...in separating them...They were meant to be together...their eyes echoed the sentiment.

Maanu had left India with Rahul, after they had gained the approval of Sanjay for their marriage. Maanu was upset with her father as she could feel the strain in their relation. They married and settled in London. Though she knew of Geet's approval...she was happy...for Geet.

Vikash had left knowing something like this was surely going to happen. Finally he had got a partner to begin with the plan...

The young couples beamed at their glowing future, unaware of the impending disaster...

Precap:

Fluke in finance or a link to past

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Awesome update
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Maan geet ko recozine nahi kar payea but thank god geet ko sach to pata chal hi gayea lovely update
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Hope maan knows he was with geet
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Loved the flash back so cute loved that Maan stood up for their love and the present loved that Geet took care of him and knows now that it was only her he loved awesome update thanks for the pm.
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Awesome update. Maan does not recognize Geet while she hears his confession and vows to help him get through it. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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