~Zaya FF - Acceptance ~|Update 4/11| Pg 18 - Page 7

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Chapter 3

Ahmed's

Friday morning:

"Kal evening free rakhna apna Aaliya" Zeeshan told her, cutting up an omelette.

"Main kaun sa disc jaa rahi hoon. Party hai?" Aaliya knew his routine.

"Don't use sarcasm with me. Jaati bhi hogi toh kaun sa mujhey bata key jaogi."

"Ajeeb ho tum Zeeshan. Trust naam ki cheez hee nahi humari life mein! Nahi jaati main akeli awara banke party karne!" Aaliya got angry.

"Accha suno. Mujhey Ahuja Constructions ka tender apney naam karwana hai. Isliye kal party mein ek bhi kami nahi chahiye mujhey. Everything needs to be perfect and as per their wishes. Paisey daraaz mein hain, dekh lena kaisey kya karna hai."

Abdullah Mansion

Thursday evening

"Mom!" Zain came out screaming of his room.

His parents were in the lawn, sipping tea.

"Zain beta! Aao baitho humaarey saath? Kuch baatein batao college ki? Sirf maa ko dhoondtey rehtay ho bhei?" his father joked, folding his Economic Times.

"Dad, ek second. Pehlay zara Mom mujhey bataye ki ye ladkiyo ki photos kis liye rakhi gayi hain meray table pe?"

His parents shared a knowing smile, before Suraiya asked him to sit.

"Ladkiyo ki tasveerein toh tum bhi rakhte the apney teenage years mein, tab toh humney complain nahi kiya tha? Aaj kyun photos dekh ke problem ho rahi hai Zain miyan?" his Dad chuckled.

"Mujhey shaadi nahi karni abhi." Zain made his point clear before his parents decided to further mess up this matter.

"Arrey! Aisey kaisey? Itna accha beta hai mera, is baat ka main thoda saas banke fayda toh uthaun!" his mom said, not helping matters.

Zain rolled his eyes. "Mom, nahi karni mujhey shaadi! Isliye bulaya hai aapne mujhey London se itni jaldi?" he asked, tensed thoroughly about his future.

"Tumhey shaadi abhi nahi karni ya kabhi nahi karni?" Usman asked.

"Beta? Kahin tum...gay toh nahi ho gaye?" Suraiya asked, wide-eyed before adding hurriedly "We fully support you though...hum waise parents nahi hain."

"Oh god, mom" Zain pressed his palms onto his eyes.

"Suraiya begum, calm down." Usman said holding back his laugh.

He turned to his son. "Abhi shaadi ki baat nahi karte hain. Inmein se pasand karney ki bhi zaroorat nahi" he said taking away the photos. He continued "Abhi sirf mil ke engagement kar lo, saal bhar mein shaadi dekh lenge"

"Par Dad..."

"Milney ki baat kar raha hoon main sirf. Nothing more. Bolo?" Usman waited patiently.

Zain thought for a moment. "Dad, aap keh rahe hain isliye mil loonga lekin koi guarantee nahi hai ki mujhey pasand aayegi ya nahi."

"Haan haan, completely your choice. Kyun, Suraiya begum?" his dad agreed.

"Aap dono toh khud hee sab kuch tay kar leejiye." She said, looking away.

Zain shared a look with dad. Taking his mom hands in his own, he told her, "Sab kuch kaisey? Main point toh aapko decide karna hai na?"

"Matlab? Main point kya?"

"Main point ki ladki kaun hai jissey mujhey milna hai?" he chuckled. He was really trying to appear as much eager as he could.

Suraiya turned towards him excitedly. "Kal na, Zeeshan logon ke yahan party hai. Wo bhi toh tumharey Dad ki hi company mein haina toh humein bhi jaana hai."

"Zeeshan? Barkat Royale mein kaam karta hai?! Aapne us din toh nahi batayi thi ye baat?" Zain interrupted her.

"Bataya hoga maine, khair Zeeshan pe kyun atak gaye, toh wahan party haina..."

"Mom, Aaliya ke bare mein main pooch raha tha aapse. Aapko batana chahiye tha"

"Zain!! Yahan main tumhe Khan Uncle ki beti Natasha ki baat karna chah rahi hoon aur tum ho ki" Suraiya got annoyed.

"Accha sorry sorry! Kya hua unki beti ko? Zain quickly changed stance.

"Hona kuch nahi hai. Natasha naam hai. Aajkal internship kar rahi hai humarey yahan, aur Dad kehtay hai ki kaafi hoshiyar hai. Toh wo bhi wahan hogi hi aur tum mil bhi sakte ho." His mom looked at him, awaiting a response.

"Aaliya..I mean, Zeeshan ke yahan party hai? Theek hai..mil lenge Natasha se..party kab hai?"

Saturday evening, Zain was in his black suit with a soft pink shirt sporting an open collar, contemplating whether or not it was a good idea to go with this confused state of mind. He was going to her place, to find about her or to find about a potential life partner?

His mom came calling asking him to hurry up and in the same frenzied state, he walked out.

Ahmed's

Saturday evening

"Usman Saab! Aunty! What an honour Sir!" Zeeshan came, his polite best self welcoming the Abdullah's. He shook hands with Usman and his sons, graciously awarding the ladies with compliments.

"Enjoy Zain" Fahad nudged him, on seeing their mother whispering to Zain to stay by her side so that she could find Natasha.

Before he could reply, his Bhabhis giggled. "Zain ki toh aaj lottery hai" Shazia patted him sympathetically.

"Natasha se miley hai hum Zain, don't worry, you will really like her. Tumhare type ki hai" Nafeesa chimed in.

"Accha? Aur aapko meri type pata hai Bhabhi?" Zain played along.

While the ladies helped themselves with the starters, Zain moved towards his dad and Zeeshan, "Dad aapko Accounts supervisor chahiye tha na koi? Mom ne bataya, Aaliya ji ka Finance mein specialisation hai MBA mein...What do you say Zeeshan?"

Caught off guard by the sudden idea, Zeeshan fumbled. "Aaliya ka haan...Finance...kya Accounts Supervisor Sir?" he directed the second part towards Usman.

"Zeeshan betay, ab aajkal upar se log alag, andar se kuch aur hotey hain. Shareef, imaandaar staff milna toh Allah ki rehem hoti hai ab. The last supervisor we had, sold our company's tenders and quotes to the rival chains, causing us a huge loss over a period of time. He earned our trust quite fast, so we didn't particularly check the audits as well...anyway, we had to fire him and now I need someone trustworthy. Someone I already know, who won't cause me trouble."

"And that's why I am suggesting Aaliya!" Zain reasoned.

"How do you know Aaliya?" Zeeshan had a hard expression. It was difficult to read, but Zain at least knew he didn't like that idea.

However, Suraiya came looking for Zain and he was taken away, saved from answering that question.

"Kahan abhi office ki baaton mein lag gaye tum Zain! Kab se dhoond rahi hoon...abhi toh yehi thi.." Suraiya said, looking for someone.

Zain's eyes went towards the window. Outside in the balcony, in the slightly cold winds of October, was Aaliya. With a glass in her hand, she was on the swing, swaying lightly.

"Mom, main abhi aaya!"

"Zain nahi! Uff ye ladka!"

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A/N: Sorry😆 But I obviously couldn't continue here at this point😆 But I promise, next update shall be all about them😳 I am somehow not really been able to motivate myself to write this story, probably because I feel it's lacking the connect...so do tell me honestly in your comments😊

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First of all, awesome chapter. It was full of emotions and beautifully written. Also, can i request one thing? Please make Aaliya fight back Zeeshan if u can. And make Zain help her in doing that. Make Zain figure out what Aaliya is going through. Its just a thought, i dont mind if you dont like these ideas of mine.

Second, can you please make other parts a little longer. I am left in curiosity that what is gonna happen next in your SS.

Third, although i am available most of the times to comment but if i dont get time to, i will comment a bit later. Actually the thing is i read all your updates as soon as u write them on my phone. But commenting on my phone is a bit difficult for me. So if i get late to comment on any of your works. Please dont mind!

AND I AM FIRST...!!!!!! YAYYY...!!!🥳

@Vinu : It's fine baby! Get dealt with all that..and then come back..nahi toh after that I will come with a danda😆

awesome update ..too good..👏
this ss is getting interesting
so beautifully written..👍🏼.
loved it a lottt...❤️
ty so much for d pm.😳.
eagerly waiting for next part..😭

This is one of the best stories I'm reading. I always wait for your updates! Thank you for updating, you write really well. Well dine and continue soon! x