Letting Go! - SaHil TS|Final Part Updated

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Tamara27

@Tamara27

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Firstly... let me just say that, yeah I take all the credit for swaying my dear Juliet.

NOTE: I said "SWAY". Not "MOVE"

Juliet still loves only Asad.

She's just checking Aahil out FOR ME.

You see, she's very protective and she wants to make sure his intentions are good. Because she will do some GBH if he upsets me in future...

She's the practical, whilst I am the emotional - we balance each other out. We are together like that ;)

So... she thinks I fell in love too fast, and she needs to make sure he's right for me. I am letting her do her background checks ;)

Onto the story!

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Juliet, you already know I read it three times (that you know of!)

This is surpassing all hopes - it is taking top spot as my favourite story!

I loved how you moved them from dislike; almost hatred... to compromise... then acceptance, and finally some kind of friendship; a truce of sorts.

And now... some feelings of lust thrown in! (Yeah baby!)

We knew Aahil liked her... seriously. Like, from the beginning.

But she... didn't. Until he made that concerted effort to mend the ways of his, thatSanam didn't like.

Then suddenly... my goodness! He was everywhere, and when he wasn't? She missed him! How bloody sweet!

Then... she totally wants him close to her. I like that. There was no lust here. All Sanam wanted, was to be "close as close" as can be... to her husband.

Whom she no longer hates ;)

God Juliet! That "More tonight" line...

Tell ME more tonight, Aahil. I'll give you more, more, MOST!

Ok sorry. That line just took me off to faraway places (no... you don't want to know where ;))

Ok, I'm going to read one more time before bed.

P.S. How much do we have to nag before we get an update to this scratch?

(How glad I am you started itching!)

Love you always!

Edited by Tamara27 - 11 years ago

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jasminerose

@jasminerose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Brilliant!!

Loved the flow of the story. Simplistic yet so so engaging. There was such a pleasant feel to it that I can easily reread it.

Such cute moments were there that I loved them esp the nightmare and hand holding part.❤️

Amazingly written as always. Juliet whatever you may venture into, you send me to dreamland easily with your ultra cute romance driven stories. Loved it.

Sausage part was just so hilarious.

Next part update soon.

Edited by jasminerose - 11 years ago

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh.wow.

You did it.

You actually did.

I didn't think you would so soon. But you did. And. How is it that it feels so close to the show when you only so far have watched a few!

You're amazing Juliet. You wrote with our feelings and our believe in the characters. Very very well done, I must, must MUST say!
Adorable to the max!

That was Aahil and Sanam. Exactly.

He would totally trip her. He's that kind of guy. And she would retaliate too. She's that kind with him.

The first night after wedding. Thankyou thank you thank you for that! I didn't think you'd remember!!! But you did! I love it. I Looovvveee it. I want cry. Hugs!

Now.

Let's talk some sexy, shall we!
Who crying? Hee!

;)

What was thattt.

Maroon sausage!

Yellow mustard pants!
Yes yes yes. Yellow mustard pants!

She gotta touch the pants Jules. She gotta!

She so funneyhhh!

You so funneyh!

You!

Howww!

This is my giant Ferris wheel!

He started liking her even before right. Hayye dementor! Life sucking.

That dream she had. Of him caressing her cheek. And pecking her hand.

That's no dream is it.

That makes me very, very happy!

Very.

He kissed her nose.

That too makes me very happy! His favourite shirt long forgotten!

Yes. Her husband is hot! And she does have a licence to drool. And kill. GRRr.

Rehan who?

I imagined next he'll call her bhabhi. And Aahil can really be happy. And then pants sausage touch. And some.

And.

The bestest part.

There's another part!

Yes! I want!!

I feel it. And I believe it. You do love me.

And you love me enough to give me! I know! Heee!

Juliet. Company clause. Love what you love. I'll find myself loving it too.
I love you!

The story. Caught me by surprise! How come! SaHil.

Oh Tamara! I BLAME you for this. Yes. You're at fault. For what, I don't know. For loving ;)

Remember you love me.

Mwahhh

Edited by farz_parachute - 11 years ago

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Alya

@shinta.chinta

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful😊
Continue soon 😃

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was superb. Please update soon!!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

Res. Julia ;)

I am gonna call you by this now! 😆

Unres!

HOT DOG?! SAUSAGE?! SANDWICH. $%$%%^@#%

Yes he is a HOT DOG! Grr!! Woof woof!!

Sausage!! God! Juliet. Only you could make it sound sooo damn sexy!!

I can't beleive the way their first meeting went! Hilarious!! 😆 Lol Sanam thought Nida and Aahil have something going on! And Aahil was fuming!!

And Ravished Untamed Playboy. Oooh yess!! He WAS. Now he is Tamed ;)

AND. You just had to make him SHIRTLESS! Glistening face with droplets. And I just loved the part:

Yes! Yes his face is gorgeous and chiseled and all this shit, but right now I am more interested what is below the face, those pectorals, his abs, that sinister V.

Gahh! Yes yes below that face and below that chest and below thipse abs..and below that belly...ugh. Eh Uh ;)

God awesome or what?!

And the convo after that. Hilarious! She was drooling and he knows what effect he is having on her! "More Tonight!" Gahh!!☺️ Huskily in front of her. Staring at her lips. I can imagine how there "Tonight" is gonna be! ☺️

Loved loved and just loved!! And the ENDING!! Hahaha! He was laughing! Because she burnt his Sausage and might be buying new one!! 🤣 Innocent Sanam or is she? ;)

Good that she banged her head! 😆

And all that part where she was missing him <33 He cared for her without asking anything. She made silly stories of horror stricken her 😆 So cute and he caught her one night! Aww!! 😆

Juliet!! It was spellbound!! Super excellent!! I LOVE READING YOU!!

Yes the next part sooon!!!

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved this!! :)
It was really well written and I loved how the flow of the plot was :)

I really enjoyed the small moments where I was blushing madly, yet had the 'aww' feeling as well.

"Good Night Sanam! Unfortunately It's only Mr.Dementor for you and no one else." - I totally smiled at this <3 awww.. They're so cute.

The ending was priceless!! 😆
Only sanam can make a fool out of herself. I totally loved how he smirked and knew what she was thinking when she was checking him out!

"My husband is HOT!" I mumble hoping I was not loud.
"Thank You! And you are legally licensed Sanam, Don't be shy! You are allowed to drool openly."

I mean I think she spoke our thoughts out loud :D Who wouldn't drool seeing like THAT?? <3

Great story,! :) I'm so hooked to read the next part <3

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

you forgot my asya... and left , the butterflies hanging there...

and you shifted to saahilll..

i know the whole credit goes to tamara,...

but i want asya and ur hot asad...

now to the story...

it has your style...

awqesome update

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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"BORRIIINGGG! RIDICULOUS!
If I do find love, I would chain him down and seal him with a gigantic lock, He would never be able to leave me ever. Love had to be forever!"

Juliet. THIS is possibly the most snappier opening ever. 😆 Love it.
And my absolute favourite one:

"He looks like The Dementors from Harry Potter. His sole purpose is to suck happiness out of people."

🤣 🤣 LOL This is like crazily vivid dreams. Ii could actually imagine him do that...like a dementer.
I have thing for stories that have to do with the whole bad boy good girl plot. And here the bad boy is soo sexy!!! ☺️ And yummyy. Yummyyy HOT DOG.
And you have done an excellent job of keeping the characters true to their source and capturing the voice of each one of them without even being connected with the show. 👏 YOU ARE AMAZING.

They both are soo cute. He thought she likes Rehan. And she thought Nida and Aahil are together. And Sanam doing all that nightmare drama just to hold his hand and sleep was soo cute. And he pretended to believe her. You HOT DOG. 😆
'My husband is hot!!'
Yes! Yes! You dumb**s. Your husband is hot. And you burned his Sausage. 😆 Hot Dog without Sausage??? I wonder how its gonna taste. 🤣 And you are getting him a new one...by tonight. ;)

Oh Juliet dear. You awesomeness has no limits sweety. Loved, Loved this. :)

Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago

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Dhaneshree

@Dhanesh27

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Res :) I'm late by a mile I know :(

Unres!

Dances around like an idiot because I'm consumed with so much happiness after reading this right now and I'm smiling from ear to ear.

Firstly the cake, I hope it was chocolate cos any form of chocolate cake and Aahil just makes my day😆

And then there's the Hot Dog, and he catches her out for saying he's hot hahahaha that's so like something Aahil would do,

And he's all jealous of Rehaan and drinks, and then takes the couch - see he is a sweetheart. <3

Sanam cooking up stories so he can sleep on the bed is so cute, especially the holding on to his hand. And the. When he grabs it :) and doesn't let go, yes yes take her hand and never let go baby.

So if Sanam is legally lisecned to drool over her extremely hot husband and I'm not does that make me a criminal😆 Whatever it is I like living in the edge 😆😉

And lastly the sausage - say it like a French person and it sounds so dirty - almost like Sanam's mind ;)

Please update soon, I wanna know if she gets beyond the mustard pants 😆😆. My mind needs one hell of a good cleanse right now

Oh Juliet this is an amazing story!! And I'm so looking foward to part 2

Xoxo

Also Faruu thanks for the love babe mwah!

Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago