Letting Go! - SaHil TS|Final Part Updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

This was superb. Please update soon!!

Originally posted by: -Directioner-

amazing

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Res. Julia ;)

I am gonna call you by this now! 😆

Unres!

HOT DOG?! SAUSAGE?! SANDWICH. $%$%%^@#%

Yes he is a HOT DOG! Grr!! Woof woof!!

Sausage!! God! Juliet. Only you could make it sound sooo damn sexy!!

I can't beleive the way their first meeting went! Hilarious!! 😆 Lol Sanam thought Nida and Aahil have something going on! And Aahil was fuming!!

And Ravished Untamed Playboy. Oooh yess!! He WAS. Now he is Tamed ;)

AND. You just had to make him SHIRTLESS! Glistening face with droplets. And I just loved the part:

Yes! Yes his face is gorgeous and chiseled and all this shit, but right now I am more interested what is below the face, those pectorals, his abs, that sinister V.

Gahh! Yes yes below that face and below that chest and below thipse abs..and below that belly...ugh. Eh Uh ;)

God awesome or what?!

And the convo after that. Hilarious! She was drooling and he knows what effect he is having on her! "More Tonight!" Gahh!!☺️ Huskily in front of her. Staring at her lips. I can imagine how there "Tonight" is gonna be! ☺️

Loved loved and just loved!! And the ENDING!! Hahaha! He was laughing! Because she burnt his Sausage and might be buying new one!! 🤣 Innocent Sanam or is she? ;)

Good that she banged her head! 😆

And all that part where she was missing him <33 He cared for her without asking anything. She made silly stories of horror stricken her 😆 So cute and he caught her one night! Aww!! 😆

Juliet!! It was spellbound!! Super excellent!! I LOVE READING YOU!!

Yes the next part sooon!!!

Originally posted by: mahwash17

Loved this!! :)
It was really well written and I loved how the flow of the plot was :)

I really enjoyed the small moments where I was blushing madly, yet had the 'aww' feeling as well.

"Good Night Sanam! Unfortunately It's only Mr.Dementor for you and no one else." - I totally smiled at this <3 awww.. They're so cute.

The ending was priceless!! 😆
Only sanam can make a fool out of herself. I totally loved how he smirked and knew what she was thinking when she was checking him out!

"My husband is HOT!" I mumble hoping I was not loud.
"Thank You! And you are legally licensed Sanam, Don't be shy! You are allowed to drool openly."

I mean I think she spoke our thoughts out loud :D Who wouldn't drool seeing like THAT?? <3

Great story,! :) I'm so hooked to read the next part <3

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

Res

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"BORRIIINGGG! RIDICULOUS!
If I do find love, I would chain him down and seal him with a gigantic lock, He would never be able to leave me ever. Love had to be forever!"

Juliet. THIS is possibly the most snappier opening ever. 😆 Love it.
And my absolute favourite one:

"He looks like The Dementors from Harry Potter. His sole purpose is to suck happiness out of people."

🤣 🤣 LOL This is like crazily vivid dreams. Ii could actually imagine him do that...like a dementer.
I have thing for stories that have to do with the whole bad boy good girl plot. And here the bad boy is soo sexy!!! ☺️ And yummyy. Yummyyy HOT DOG.
And you have done an excellent job of keeping the characters true to their source and capturing the voice of each one of them without even being connected with the show. 👏 YOU ARE AMAZING.

They both are soo cute. He thought she likes Rehan. And she thought Nida and Aahil are together. And Sanam doing all that nightmare drama just to hold his hand and sleep was soo cute. And he pretended to believe her. You HOT DOG. 😆
'My husband is hot!!'
Yes! Yes! You dumb**s. Your husband is hot. And you burned his Sausage. 😆 Hot Dog without Sausage??? I wonder how its gonna taste. 🤣 And you are getting him a new one...by tonight. ;)

Oh Juliet dear. You awesomeness has no limits sweety. Loved, Loved this. :)

Amazing.. and then hilarious..

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Res :) I'm late by a mile I know :(

Unres!

Dances around like an idiot because I'm consumed with so much happiness after reading this right now and I'm smiling from ear to ear.

Firstly the cake, I hope it was chocolate cos any form of chocolate cake and Aahil just makes my day😆

And then there's the Hot Dog, and he catches her out for saying he's hot hahahaha that's so like something Aahil would do,

And he's all jealous of Rehaan and drinks, and then takes the couch - see he is a sweetheart. <3

Sanam cooking up stories so he can sleep on the bed is so cute, especially the holding on to his hand. And the. When he grabs it :) and doesn't let go, yes yes take her hand and never let go baby.

So if Sanam is legally lisecned to drool over her extremely hot husband and I'm not does that make me a criminal😆 Whatever it is I like living in the edge 😆😉

And lastly the sausage - say it like a French person and it sounds so dirty - almost like Sanam's mind ;)

Please update soon, I wanna know if she gets beyond the mustard pants 😆😆. My mind needs one hell of a good cleanse right now

Oh Juliet this is an amazing story!! And I'm so looking foward to part 2

Xoxo

Also Faruu thanks for the love babe mwah!

Originally posted by: vaishnavi31

I really don't think I can sum up enough or the right words to tell you how amazingly, epicly, fantastic this was❤️

I think I'll die of anticipation if you don't update soon🤢

PM me if you could please when you do because I'll be waiting😉

Really though, this was beautifully written. And the characters were well portrayed. I was happy there wasn't a pitiful Rehaan in this because that just kills it man😭😕

I love the way you wrote it, and the gradual change in behaviour toward each other. It was to much of a jump, it was slow and just right, making me fall in love with Sahil even more

Thanks for writing this piece and do update it soon👏

Take care

Lots of love from vaish🤗

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Simply superb...total rocom...lovveeeddd it

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD. A GOOD CONTENDER AGAINST WALLBANGER.

Loved it Juliet. You are so good with this stuff 👏. I think only you can make me read on Sahil. With stuff like this... who can resist 😉

Just brilliant. Now don't make us wait too long for the next part please please pretty please.