DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update...loved it😳
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Part - 11

@Mithuna Ur right dear...

Geet ke samne kaun aayega? Hummara MSK...

Actually Maan is also a resident of this apartment...

Not by chance, but he had to be here, haina?

He has done his homework and he knows that Mr.Khanna has bought a home here...

Then Maan had to be here only...

And he had been planning to befriend his daughter...

But unfortunately he meets this Geet Handa...and here starts all the trouble...

If only Maan didn't meet Geet, everything would have be fine...

Geet was running so fast that she couldn't stop at once...

She just collides on him...

She felt like hitting a rock...MSK haina?

He gets irritated as if he had touched something untouchable ...

He jerks his shoulders to get rid off her and Geet bounces back like a ball hitting a wall...

She tries to hold him for balance but he moves back ...

Geet looks at him and he looks at her like some dirt on his foot...

This hurts Geet's self esteem, Geet can't tolerate this male chavanist attitude...

This is not the the 19th century? Mard ho toh kya hua?

he has not just descended from heaven, haina babaji? issko toh narak mein bhi jagah nahi milega...

Maan just pushes her off and walks away...

Geet almost falls and she drops her notebooks and cell phone...

Her mobile falls on the ground and breaks into pieces ...

Geet: hey...you...baktameez gayinka, idiot, fool, samjthe kya apne aapko?

Geet trurns back to see who was that rougue ... so rude and full of attitude...

But he didn't even bother to look at her, he just went on his way...

He must be someone from their building only...

He was going into their building only...

Maan has disappeared in seconds...soemone comes to her rescue...

He saw her plight and has come to help her, " aapko lagi toh nahi? Are you alright?"

He offers his hand and helps her collect her notebooks ...

Get looks up...and finds a handsome dude smiling at her...

It's Dev...he is so charming and so nice quite a contrast to the other guy who pushed her...

Geet is still angry ...

She picks up her mobile and tries to fix it...but it's broken...

Geet: aaj ka din hi karab hai

Dev: lekhin mera din toh bahut achcha shuru hua hai, aap se mulakaat jo hui

Geet smiles...

Geet: mera mobile?

Dev: kya mein dekh saktha hoon? Let me see if I can fix it

Geet gives him her mobile...

Dev takes a look...

Dev: oh! It's not working

Geet: what? Ye ab kaam nahi karega?

Dev: don't worry, I will get it repaired

Geet hesitates, how could he trust a stranger?

Geet: no thanks, I will manage

Dev gives it back to her...

Dev: you are so smart

Geet looks at him confused...

Dev smiles...: you shouldn't give your mibile to anyone, even if it's me, it's quiet dangerous

Geet: haan

Dev: ok then, see you soon

Geet: kya?

Dev: lagtha hai ki aap yahan naye naye aaye hai, mein yahi paas mein rehtha hoon, phie milthe hai, mujhe dher ho rahi hai, bye

Dev leaves...

Geet stares him as he leaves...

Pinky just comes...

Pinky: chalein?

She is still munching something...

Pinky: Geeet, hare isse kya ho gaya?

Geet: tum kab aayi?

Pinky: Geet, tum kahan kho gayi ho?

Geet: hare, chalo chalo

They leave...Romeo drops them at college ...

At the college...

It's a new year and everyone is excited...

New students arrive and the seniors rag them...

Not the hard way but just to make friendship with them...

Sam is an expert in that...

Her favourite ragging is to make them Salman's songs...

Sam ko bhi Salman pasand hai...

If they sing properly then it's fine, if they say that they don't know any if his songs them it's trouble for them...

She makes them write the songs 100 times...

And they have to sing it the next day...

If she likes their song then she makes them her friend and presents them Salman's being human t-shirt, a cause she likes a lot and often asks her father to help...

If they fail to sing the song then they will have to eat the food at the mess which is a dreadful punishment...

Most hostel students skip the lunch at the mess and they head to the nearby cafeteria which is far better, but they really miss home-made food, so Sam asks the loosers the give their lunch box to them and have lunch at the mess instead

At the cafeteria...

Sam and party enter and head to their table...

But it's already occupied...

Sam gets angry for everyone knows that it's their table...

Even the manager knows her ver well and he always keeps the table free for her...

But it's occupied today...

Sam: pandeyjiii

He is the manager...

Hearing her shout one lean man wearing specs comes laughing aloud in an unsual way...

It's Adi...ha ha ...ha aha... ha...

Sam: who are you? And why are you struggling so much and laughing? Yahan aaisa kya funny hai seva tummare laughter ki?

Adi stops laughing immediately...

Adi: yes ma'am, how can I help you?

Sam: Pandeyji kahan hai?

Adi: kaun pandeyji?

Sam: yahan ka manager

Adi laughs again...

Sam stares him and he stops...

Adi: m'am, yahan ka manager mein hoon

Sam: what?

Adi: haan m'am, meinne aaj hi join kiya hai

Pinky: toh tum bhi yahan junior ho

Tasha: tab toh ragging bantha hai

Sam: haan guys

Geet: hare guys, ye bechara toh bahut dara hua hai, ussko kyun takleef karthe ho?

Sam: Geet, tum chup raho, isse bhi patha hona chahiye ki mein kaun hoon?

Adi: woh...sorry m'am, meinne aapko pehechana nahi

Sam: what? Tum mujhe nahi jaathe ho?

Adi: nahi m'am, mein Delhi abhi abhi aaya hoon, mein yahan sirf hummare PM ko jaantha hoon

Sam: tum Prime Minister ko jaathe ho?

Adi: nahi m'am, PM matlab, hummare Patialla Mamaji, ye unkka hi dukhan hai, mein unkka batheja hoon

Sam: mein kissi PM ko nahi jaanthi, tum Salman bhai ko jaanthe haina?

Adi: ji m'am, mein chulbul pandeyji ka bahut bada fan hoon

Sam likes him very much now...

Sam: ab dabang style mein unkko uss table se nikhaldo

Adi pretens to be chulbul pandey and clears the atble for them...

Sam is very happy and they become friends with Adi...

Ab hamesha ki tarah yahan Sallu bhai ka Ghana hi bajathe rahega...

Next day...

Maan has been waiting for sameera from the morning...

Just to meet her...and maybe get to know his new neighbours ...just a courtesy call would be fine...

Maan waits in the lift and Sam is just to enter when again this Geet dragged her out...

She had seen Maan and she didn't want to go with him...

Geet: hum badh mein jayenge

Maan itna gusse mein tha ki Geet ko patha nahi kya kartha...

Precap...
Luckily for Maan, Mr.khanna himself fell in one of Maan's traps the following week...

And Mr.Khanna also introduced Maan to his daughter...

Isse kehthe hai ek goli mein do nishaani...

Maan ka kaam itna aasaan jo ho gaya...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
nice part
does maan have some purani dhusmani with mr.khanna
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update...loved it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 11
awesome...
nice one dear...
my God cant believe their first meet was like this...
and Maan didnt bother to help her also...
grrr...
and Dev helped her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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itna rudely behave kiya maan ne😡😡😡par dekho dev help kya geet ko. sam ko phasane aaya tha MSK
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 12

Next week...

Mr.Khanna makes a surprise visit...

Sameera is very happy...he is going to stay with them for a week...ye toh aur bhi kushi ki baat haina?

Here is Sam guys...
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Sam: Dad?

Uncle: hai honey

He hugs her daughter...

Sam: Dad, aap ka koi business meeting hai kya?

Sam always complaints that he doesn't spend time with her after she joined college...

Actually she wanted to stay with him in Chandigarh but Mr.Khanna wanted her to get out of Chandigarh and be independent, she is too dependent on him, or should we say he is too dependent on her, an he is very possessive, aaise hi chalega toh koi ghar jamaai hi dhoondhna padega, par khanna ko aaise gulam nahi chahiye, apne princess ke liye kissi Rajkumar hi chahiye...

Uncle: mein toh apne GF se milne aaya hoon

Uncle winks...Geet smiles...

Geet: I missed you BF

Uncle: me too dear

Sam: aap donno apne nautanki bandh karo, aur kaho ki aaj ka kya plan hai?

Geet: mujhe picture dekhna hai, Salman ki naya film release hui haina?

Sam: that's a good idea

Uncle: par aaj toh pehle din hai, bahut crowded hoga, weekend bhi hai

Sam: Dad? Aap abhi tickets book kardho

Uncle: Sam, hum Monday chalthe hai

Sam: nahi, mujhe aaj hi dekhna hai

Uncle: lagtha hai ki mujhe tere liye koi achca ladhka doondhna padega, jaldhi se tujhe shadhi karkke bhejtha toh mein apne GF ke saath aaram se jeesaktha, haina GF?

Geet: haan uncle, jaldhi se ek achcha ladhkka doondho, koi aaisa ladhkka jo isskke har baat mantha aur isse koi sawaal nahi kartha, warna do din mein Sam ussko dakke markke bahar nikhalegi

Uncle: tumne sahi kaha, iss ke liye ladhkka doondhna bahut mushkil hai, mein aaj se hi apna kaam shuru kartha hoon

Sam: Dad, meinne kitne bar kaha ki mein aapko chodkke kahin nahi jaaoongi, mujhe koi shadhi anhi karni, mein toh hamesha aapki beti hi bankke rahoongi

Uncle:haan haan, ab toh sare ladhkiyan aaise hi kehthe hai, par jab koi miljaatha toh tab humme ek pal mein bhool jaathe hai

Sam: mein aaise nahi hoon

Sam gets angry...

Uncle: sorry sorry, mujhe patha hai meri beti aaise nahi hai, woh toh mere pasand ki ladhkke ko hi shadhi karegi

Sam: what? Meinne aaise kab kaha?

Uncle: hare, pehle ladhka toh miljaaye, phir hum iss argument ko continue karenge, ab jaldhi tayaar ho jao, tickets milgaye

Sam hugs him : thanks you Dad...i love you Dad...I love you Salman...

Uncle: khaas real life mein koi Salman miljaatha

Sam: Salman toh ek hi hai, aap chahe toh mera rishtha Salman ke saath karwadho, mujhe koi Xerox copy nahi chahiye

Uncle: agar Salman mujhse chota hotha toh shayad mein soch saktha

Sam: daaad

Uncle: honey, I'm still young, dekho mere GF bhi hai

Geet: haan Uncle, aap salman se bhi bahut young ho

Uncle: uncle? GF tumne mere dil phir se thoda hai

Geet: sorry, BF

They have a great time watching Salman and return late after having dinner at a 5 star restaurant...

Next morning...

Mr.Khanna as usual wakes up early & goes for jogging...

He meets a young man who takes him to the gym...

He runs a gym in that building and is also a fitness freak like Mr.Khanna...

He is very happy to meet Mr.Khanna...

It's like a dream come true for him who aspires to become a business tycoon just like Mr.Khanna one day...this Gym is only his hobby...he has got his own family business in Mumbai...he is here for some new venture...

Ab tak kissi ko nahi patha tha ki yahan ek gym hai...

Jab se gym se aaye hai Mr.Khanna bas ussi ke barein mein batein karthe hai...

He is so impressed that he even wanted Sam to meet him...but Sam is not interested...

Sam: dad, aapko koi aur kaam nahi hai kya? mujhe college jaana hai, bye dad

Mr.Khanna wants Sam to meet this handsome young man somehow...

Next day Mr.Khanna brings a guest with him...

Uncle: welcome young man, andar aao, ye toh tera hi ghar hai

That man is confused...but he is ahppy to befriend the one and only Sandeep khanna, owner of one of India's largest business empire...

Uncle: isse pana ghar hi samajna, aaj se tum bhi iss parivaar mein ek ho, haina Sam

Sam stares Mr.Khanna...

Sam: dad, aap toh pagal ho agye ho, how could you invite some X and Y to my house

Mr.Khanna: hare, mein toh issko introduce karna hi bhool gaya

Geet: ye...ye yahan kaise?

She recognises the dhust danav ...how could he forget him?

Uncle: so girls, meet Mr.Maan Singh Khurana, hummare tarah Khuranas bhi business people hai

Uncle looks at Sam and winks...

Sam is not at all interested...

Sam: dad, business people ko ghar pe kya kaam hai? aap isse kahin bahar milsakthe the

Uncle: mein toh issko roz miltha hoon, ab tumme bhi milna haina?

Sam: what?

Uncle: girls, this is your new fitness trainer

Tasha: ohhh...wow...issko dekhkke toh mera dil dhak dhak kartha hai

Geet: chup kar Tasha, Sam bahut naraaz ahi

Tasha: par mein bahut kush hoon

Tasha adjusts her hair ...

Geet : tu toh pagal ho gayi ho

Tasha: isse dekhkke tumme kuch nahi hotha toh tum hi pagal hogi

Geet looks at him...he is well built...looks like a perfect play boy...

Geet: babaji, ye mein kya soch rahi hoon? Tasha is right, sach mein mein hi pagal hoon

Sam: dad, what are you saying?

Geet: ye? Fitness trainer?

Sam: that this is not funny, aap aaise mazak kaise kar sakthe? Woh bhi kissi stranger ke samne

Uncle: he is not a stranger anymore, I'm serious, kal se tum log bhi gym join karlo

Sam: no ways dad

Uncle: toh phir hostel wapas chale jao, mein bhi kush, tum bhi kush

Sam: lekhin dad?

Maam toh Sameera ko hi dekhthe rehtha...

Sam is very angry, kaise gurtha hai? mein kya koi exhibition mein lagi art piece hoon?

Uncle: Maan, aaise kya dekhthe ho? she's my daughter...

Uncle pretends to be upset...

Maan: woh...aaisa kuch nahi sir

Uncle: hotha hai, hotha hai, iss umar mein aaisa hi hotha hai, don't worry, I also got a Girl Friend

Maan: sir?

Uncle: woh dekho

Uncle shows Geet...

Maan looks at her...she is so cute...

Uncle: bahut sundar haina?

Maan: haan sir

Uncle: isse dhoor raho, ye meri GF hai

Uncle laughs...

Manisha: baby

He looks at Maan and almost faints...

Sam: ye bhi? Manishaaa

Sam shakes him up...

Manisha: ohh, he is so cute...

Sam: Manisha, breakfast tayaar hai kya? mujhe bhook lagi hai

Manisha: haan baby, pehle guest ko bhulathi hoon, hayee, aap bhi aayiye

Manisha winks at Maan...

Uncle: yes yes, you also join us

Sam: Geet, chalo, hum bahar khana khathe hai

Geet: uncle, hum chalthe hai

Uncle: sam...sam

Maan looks at him...Is he the same Sandeep Khanna, the King maker, all the politicians and the business men shiver in front of him...

Uncle: that's my daughter, you will get used to her soon, come on, let's eat

Maan: it's OK sir, mein phir kabhi aatha hoon

Uncle drags him to the dinning table...

Maan looks worried...

Uncle: what's wrong young man? You don't like the food?

Maan: nahi sir, it's nice

Uncle: phir kya baat hai?

Maan: who...ek choti si problem hai sir

Uncle: what? Kya problem hai? I will help you

Maan: sir, I don't train girls, our gym is only for boys

Uncle laughs...: what? Kaise aadmi ho, chalo kal se girls ko bhi train karna

Maan: par sir?

Uncle: come on Maan, aaisa moka bar bar nahi miltha

Maan: this is against my principles sir

Uncle: so you are saying no to Sandeep khanna?

Maan: nahi sir

Uncle: fine, kal se sare ladhkiyan join karenge, OK

Maan accepts reluctantly...

He doesn't want to spoil his friendship with mr.Khanna...

Maan: teek hai sir,ab mein chaltha hoon

Unlce: rukho, Manisha mere visiting card lao

Manisha: ye lijiye

He gives to Maan directly...he looks at Maan and keeps smiling...hayeee...

Maan snatches it...he stares Manisha...

Manisha: kya mein bhi aasakthi?

Uncle: jab bhi Chandigarh aathe ho mujhe zaroor milna. Mujhe toph tummare jaise hi kissi ki talaash hai

Maan: sure sir, ab mein chaltha hoon

Uncle: kal subha tayaar rehna

Uncle winks...Maan smies and leaves...

Iss aadmi ke dosthi ke liye Maan ko kya kya karna padtha?
Lekhin Mr.Sandeep Khanna se milnna hi bahut mushkil hai, aur yahan toh woh kudh Maan se dosthi karna chahathe hai, strange? Ab kaun janega ki unkka plan kya hai? aakhir business man haina? Zaroor isskke peeche koi bada motive hoga, haina?

Precap...

Ab toh ghar mein entry milgayi...thanks to Mr.Khanna...

But Sam will not be at home all day...she will go to college...
Then Maan needs to be there to fulfill his mission, haina?
aaise aada adhura kaam toh Maan kabhi nahi kartha...
haan, Maan had already thought of it...he has already managed to find a way for that too...Maan kaise ye sab kartha? wait and watch...
Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
Nice plan to become friend with sam
Why is maan behind khanna😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part...so maan is behind khanna but why
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nice update
sam dint like maan
why maan is behind mr. khanna

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