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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar



Oh man Kri. I don't even know how I deserve such a long, beautiful, amazing, fabulous, heart-touching review from you. You are seriously fabulous. I don't know how much more I can praise you for being an amazing reviewer! You truly make my work seem valuable! I love you so much!

Kaustuki isn't heartless... I didn't ever think she was. In fact, I always thought that Sanyukta was more insensitive and inconsiderate than her. Kaustuki is a loyal supporter of Sanyu, but Sanyu initiates all the humiliating plans in the show. Just like that, Kaustuki is going to continue to support Sanyu throughout the challenge and help her when she needs it, but she won't necessarily think what Sanyu is doing is right. I tried to keep the characterization consistent here. She wants Sanyu to drop the challenge, because she realizes that this is a big deal... at first she was like, yeah right... RD won't fall for you Sanyu, because it seemed impossible. But now that it's actually happening, she is feeling guilty about challenging her in the first place. This is from Sanyu's point of view, so I can't go into Kaustuki's inner turmoil here (nor Randhir's for that matter =(). I like to keep my fics as realistic as I can... I mean sometimes I do like to take creative liberty (the excessive making out for example), but in the end, there are repercussions with everything I do... I make them genuinely have to pay for mistakes they make. So now since Sanyu and RD are making out... a lot, they're going to be even more attached with each other (obviously, since Sanyu doesn't go around making out everyone, and neither does RD), and then they'll eventually have to pay for that. About whether what Sanyu-RD is doing, is morally correct or not, I don't want to get into that, because everyone's perspectives differ on that matter, but the feelings and consequences that come associated with it for characters like them will be shown in future updates...

Don't apologize. I genuinely didn't want you to review so much because I thought you would over-exert yourself, but you managed to do it and that too, with amazing dedication and time. I love you for that! You are truly brilliant! But from now on, if you miss an update (or 5), just telling me you read it and liked it will mean a lot to me too... I just don't want you to feel stressed out because of all this reviewing, when it should be something you do for fun. So only do it if you like it! And yes, I told you to not apologize, because you shouldn't be apologizing! -_-

Hahaha Kri, I wouldn't make him not know just because people think he knows if I was planning to make him know this whole time. He is a genius, you are right, but I can't give that part away... I am so bad at hiding my plots and twists that I need to stop talking now. >.> But I love reading speculations, so never stop speculating!

If he was intentionally trying to make her fall for him, then yes he succeeded... but regardless, Sanyu has fallen for him and now that she has, there is going to be no doubt that heartbreak is on the cards. Love doesn't come without heartbreak... at least not in Saffi's writing world! She has decided already that she feels something for him and she doesn't want to leave him, but circumstances won't always favour our desires. She does love him a lot... and here's a hint (secret... not so secret because this is a public forum), but he loves her too. Now whether these two egoistic kids recognize and understand their feelings is another story.

Haha there is still some time to go before the heartbreak phase, so just enjoy it until then! Don't worry, at the very end, everything will be okay... *cough I am planning to write a sequel cough*. By the way, you analyze and understand my work really well... you truly know what my characters are like. Yeah, she's going to continue, because according to her, RD likes her, but she wants to make him fall fast so they can stay together... why prolong it if it can be done in 7 days you know? Wow, you're really involved in this fic! I hope everything that happens I do justice to! I hope all of your questions get answered soon, because I hate leaving loose ends. As of now, Sanyu and RD are crazy about each other... they may/may not have recognized their feelings for the other, and the 7 day challenge still exists from Sanyu's side in order for her to make sure that RD is there to stay with her. Not because she wants to hurt him or prove him wrong anymore. According to her, she still doesn't love him so she doesn't give a damn if he's heartbroken, but her own heart breaks at the thought... sooo she will come to that realization soon too.

I am very deeply touched by this review Kri! You are such a dedicated reviewer that I can't praise you enough for that. You are commendable... an inspiration, someone I look up to. Now this is dedication man! Thank you so much for taking the time to review like this, despite your busy schedule. *Pinches self* You are not a figment of my imagination, you are real... wow this world feels complete now! <3 I love you! Thank you once again. Thank you * infinity. I love you! <3

Sorry, just wanted to add a bit more so I'm quoting my own response!

Once again, you're too sweet Kri. Like TOO sweet. I love you so much. Sanyu and RD are going to get much closer in the upcoming chapters, that the heartbreak (when it comes, don't think about it now) is going to hurt... a lot. For them, not for us... and since heartbreaks don't usually get fixed in one day (or seven for that matter), I decided to introduce a sequel (once this is finished of course)... so 7 days won't finish in just 7 days, the sequel will deal with the consequences of their silly ego clashes, and the challenge, because like I already mentioned, in real life every action has an opposite and equal reaction. Every mistake will have a positive side and a negative side. Nothing is totally negative, nor positive, which is why I'm telling you from now that there will be a sequel to this so I can convey everything properly. xD

In the end (the very end I mean), SanDhir will be together, but this challenge would only be a reason for their strong relationship in the future. As of now, at least with Sanyukta, she does love him, but she isn't aware that love is not just a game. She will slowly continue to understand (it has already started, with her worried that this is a game for RD) that feelings are not... irrelevant haha. She can't make this a game and expect to come out with him loving her, and them living happily. It doesn't work that way. Which is what I eventually hope to achieve... let's see if it works out.

This challenge will be the starting point to their growth as not only individuals but two people who are mature enough to function as one through a relationship! Because relationships require maturity... and it isn't showing yet.

I tried to make this fic like this: it's light enough for you to read it without thinking too much about it, but it's also deep enough that you could extract something out of it if you want. I am trying to cater to all audiences. I hope I am succeeding.

Once again, thank you so much!


Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey nyc update there sumthing going on rds mind pkz don't break sanyu heart do update soon n ha tum be pm no kia mjhe is update k 😡 Chao koi in BT next tym don't frget
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey nyc update there sumthing going on rds mind pkz don't break sanyu heart do update soon n ha tum be pm no kia mjhe is update k 😡 Chao koi in BT next tym don't frget



Thanks! I'm sorry I didn't PM you. Next time for sure.
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Posted: 11 years ago
There is a wonderful girl named Kri (Kri1) who reviews my chapters. A few posts up on this page, I have replied to a really nice (and lengthy) comment by her... it talks about this fanfic (and what's coming up), so if you want to give her comment and my response a read, then you can do so and leave your thoughts about it! =D

Day Four: Part I

Sanyukta stared at her reflection in the mirror, the same smile from last night still haunting her face. She adjusted her dupatta around her neck to hide the red mark that was situated there.

"Kaustuuu," Sanyukta whined, "I don't want to see him!"

There were butterflies floating in her stomach... the thought of seeing him again was exhilarating, nerve-wracking and something she wanted to run away from.

She never believed in lust... but she didn't hate Randhir either anymore. She wanted to be with him. It couldn't be love... no way! She wasn't in love. She was attracted... or in other words, lust. Randhir made her believe in something she thought didn't even exist!

"Just go Sanyu!" Kaustuki replied, with a smile on her face.

"I don't even look good! I don't have any decent clothing!" she complained.

"You look nice Sanyu... okay wait," Kaustuki said, making her way over to Sanyukta and started to french-braid her hair.

Sanyukta had already finished applying pink nail polish on her fingers and had put on makeup... a lot of makeup to look nice for Randhir.

She was wearing a salwar kameez.

"Sanyu, wear something nicer, more modern," Kaustuki suggested.

"No... Kaustu, I have to hide my neck," she muttered, blushing.

"Why?"

"He... he gave me a hickey," she whispered, completely embarrassed.

Kaustuki's jaw dropped open.

"You two have been making out?" she asked, her eyes widening. "Sanyu why didn't you tell me?"

Sanyukta blushed and hid her face behind her hands.

Kaustuki shook her head.

"Wear skinny jeans and a nice shirt... then wear a scarf as a design," she suggested.

Sanyukta nodded and obeyed Kaustuki. She always knew how to look good. When she came out wearing dark blue skinny jeans and a v-neck blouse that clung to her body, a scarf around her neck, Kaustuki grinned.

"Much better," she said. "Now go... you're getting late!"

Sanyukta shook her head nervously. "I - I can't face him!"

"Why not?"

"I just can't!" she said, blushing deeply.

"Aww Sanyu, you have a crush," Kaustuki said brightly. "Go and work on your project first, think about him second!"

She nodded slowly, still wondering how she would get him off her mind, especially since she was working with him.

She made her way to the mechanical lab slowly. It was nine in the morning and she was on time for once.

Once inside, she noticed that he wasn't there. Sighing with relief, she placed her bag down on the desk.

She got a text as soon as she sat down from Randhir.

Won't be there today... you handle it. I know you can.

What
? She felt herself get angry. She tried to look presentable for him and he wasn't even going to show up?

She called him right away. He didn't pick up.

Where are you?
she sent, hoping that he would at least have the decency to tell her where he was.

Just tied down.

She gritted her teeth angrily. She didn't ask why, she asked where. She was about to send him another text when he replied.

I'm in my room. Don't come here. You need to finish the project.

Just then Parth entered with Vidhushi. He gave Sanyukta a disgusted look before he walked to his workstation. Sanyukta felt like snapping, but she held herself back and ran out of the mechanical lab towards the boy's dormitories.

She knew that Jiggy was with Kaustuki, so that meant that Randhir was alone in the room. What was he doing?

Glad to see that the coast was clear, she entered the boys dormitories with ease and knocked on Randhir's door. When he opened it, her heart sank. His eyes were bloodshot red, as if he hadn't slept last night.

"Randhir," she said, reaching out to touch his cheek.

She was sure that this had to do with his parent's divorce.

She couldn't see him like this. She wanted to hug him and tell him that she was going to be there for him everytime he needed someone.

He stopped her hand in midair, looked in both directions, and then pulled her in, locking the door behind her.

Just like she had guessed, his room was empty.

"What happened?" she asked, concerned for him.

"I told you to work on the project didn't I?" he asked angrily. "What will happen to that now?"

She didn't know why he was acting like the old Randhir. She wasn't nobody anymore, she was his girlfriend, she had the right to know what was happening in his life.

"Randhir, please tell me what's going on," she said softly, reaching out to touch his shoulder comfortingly.

"Sanyukta, go away!" Randhir yelled out of frustration.

She felt like crying - not because Randhir told her to go away, because that was his natural reaction... he never let anyone into his life if he could help it, but because she couldn't see him like this.

"Randhir, I didn't get with you to leave you!" she yelled back, feeling her eyes sting with tears.

Why couldn't he understand that fact? Noticing her tears, he stepped forward, held on to her shoulders gently and seated her on his bed, falling to his knees in front of her. She felt the tears fall from her eyes.

He wiped her tears with his fingers and took her hands in his.

"I'm sorry," he muttered, "I shouldn't have said that."

She shook her head, her lips trembling, and took his face in her hands.

"What happened Randhir?" she asked again.

He placed his head on her lap and suddenly started to sob.

"They postponed the court date again for next month," he choked. "I found out last night... and dad wants me there or he won't talk to me."

Sanyukta felt tears fall out of her own eyes seeing Randhir in this condition. She stroked his hair softly.

"It's okay Randhir," she said, wiping her own eyes.

He looked up at her like a little child who was lost and needed to find someone desperately. Sanyukta reached out and wiped his tears with her fingers before cupping his face.

"I'm here for you Randhir," she said genuinely.

He wrapped his arms around her and pressed his face against her stomach, closing his eyes.

"You won't be Sanyukta, you'll leave me just like the rest of them," he said hoarsely.

"No Randhir... I promise I won't," she said honestly, stroking his hair again. "You must be so tired. You haven't slept all night have you?"

Randhir stood up and Sanyukta followed his lead. He shook his head.

"I'm sorry... let's go work on the project, that comes first," he said, turning around, but Sanyukta caught his hand.

"Randhir, rest," she commanded.

"But the project," he argued, "We need to complete it today. Tomorrow we're going to have to go to the venue and then the day after is the presentation."

She shook her head and dragged him to his bed. Sitting down, she tugged at his hand to indicate that she wanted him on his bed too. He sat down next to her.

She crossed her legs and gently brought Randhir's head to her lap. He stretched his legs and closed his eyes as she stroked his head.

"I'll be fine when I wake up, I promise," he mumbled.

"Shhh," she said, stroking his hair. "Be quiet and sleep!"

"You look very nice by the way," he said into her lap. "Sorry I couldn't appreciate you more."

"You can appreciate me when you wake up," she said, blushing.

She watched his lips curve upwards to form a smile and she immediately felt her heart fill with warmth.

"I promise I will," he replied.

She leaned forward and planted a kiss on the top of his head and leaned back against his bedframe until his breathing got heavier and he fell asleep. She watched him sleep, holding on to her legs like he needed her, and she couldn't help but wonder what she was thinking when she told herself that she wanted to break his heart.

She wouldn't break his heart.

She would make sure he fell in love with her by the end of the week, but that didn't mean that she would break his heart afterwards. She would keep her promise, she wouldn't leave him. She would stay with him. Smiling happily to herself, she kissed the top of his head one more time.

A few hours later, Parth entered the room and looked at them, disgusted.

"Sanyukta, Randhir isn't the only one who lives in this room," he said loudly.

Randhir stirred in his sleep and Sanyukta angrily placed a finger on her lips indicating for Parth to be quiet.

"Shhh," she hissed, stroking Randhir's hair softly. "He's sleeping!"

Parth rolled his eyes and left the room, closing the door loudly behind him. Randhir woke up with a start.

"Go back to sleep Randhir," Sanyukta said softly.

He rubbed his eyes and looked at the time.

"Oh no Sanyukta, it's one!" he yelled, getting off the bed.

"So?" she asked.

"You should've worked on the task!" he snapped.

She got up too, stretching her legs.

"I care more about you than the damn task!" she yelled, feeling a blush creep up her cheeks.

She saw his face soften as he took a step towards her, holding her arms and pulling her close, seemingly lost in her eyes. Time seemed to stand still for a moment as they looked at each other.

"Too much makeup farzi," he finally said with a smirk, letting go of her.

She furrowed her eyebrows angrily. She spent all this time getting dressed for him, and he was here criticizing her?

"And why are you wearing that tasteless scarf?" he asked, wrapping his arms around her waist and pulling her close.

"T- t - tasteless?" she spluttered angrily. "I knew you were still an MCP. Argh!"

She shook his arms off her and stormed towards the mechanical lab. A few minutes later, he joined her there too.

They were alone, and he was was walking closer to her. She felt her breath hitch in her throat.

"Take off the scarf," he ordered.

She felt her face burn. "No!"

He walked even closer to her, her walking backwards with each step he took, until she hit the wall.

"Take it off," he whispered into her ear, making her feel weak in the knees.

"N - no!" she replied feebly.

He brought his fingers up, gently carressing the skin over her neck, making her shudder, before taking off the scarf and letting it fall to the ground.

She gasped as he smirked seeing the hickey.

"Who gave this to you farzi?" he teased.

"Shut up MCP," she said, trying to push him off, but he pressed her body back with his.

His lips made their way over the red mark, making her shudder again. Instinctively, she tangled her fingers in his hair as he kissed it softly.

"Don't worry, next time I'll give them in places nobody will see," he said with a wink and backed off, picking up the scarf and wrapping it around her neck again.

Why was she blushing so hard? Why did she want him so close to her? Surely... this was just lust's effect.

Smirking, he walked back to the model.

"No matter what we do, we have to finish everything today," he explained. "Vardhaan sir already informed me that he'll take care of transporting the model. Tomorrow afternoon we're going to leave for the venue. It's a five hour ride. We'll get there in the evening. Next morning is the competition."

Why didn't Vardhaan sir tell her this? She frowned.

"He told me the day you slept until one," he said with a smirk, reading her thoughts again. "I just remembered."

"Fine," she said through gritted teeth. "Presentation's almost done anyways."

"Good," he said simply, and began to work on the machine.

She glanced at Randhir who was so into his work... he looked so good that she kept on staring. She didn't know why she didn't want to take her eyes off him. She felt a dreamy smile take over her features as she continued to watch him.

When he turned around to look at her, she still didn't snap out of her reverie. He walked towards her and gripped her wrist tightly, which caused her to look up sharply, her breath catching in her throat again.

"What were you looking at?" he asked with a raised eyebrow.

Then, without thinking, her hormones taking over her senses, she pressed her lips against his. He dragged his hands up her cheek and into her hair as he responded, causing her to shudder. He grabbed her back and held her close so she wouldn't fall backwards.

She took a step back and smiled, her cheeks flushed, feeling content. He took a step towards her and held her waist again, pulling her close.

"Randhir... task," she muttered, "Focus!"

"I have such a hot girlfriend," he replied with a smirk, inching closer to her, "She comes before everything else."

She felt herself blush and closed her eyes, anticipating a kiss, but she heard Randhir's footsteps only walking away from her.

Surprised, she opened her eyes to find Vidhushi at the doorway, her mouth open.

"You two are together?!" Vidhushi sputtered, her eyes wide, as if she couldn't believe it.

Shit. Now the whole school was going to find out.

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Leave your thoughts! ^_^
Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Resss
Imma firssst!!!! Finallly!!! After forever!! Imma first!!!!
*smirks at everyone*

I feel like gloating a little more, but I think I am lazy now xD
I read your and Kri's conversation and I must say her concerns about sensibility and values were very well voiced! And she didn't go off on a tangent, like me! Very direct to the point!

And I must say you too have done a brilliant job at getting that point across in this update! They way Sanyukta said she won't be leaving Randhir even after the seven day challenge! I was like damn but she is still thinking about the challenge!

I love how you have balanced the entire update with the perfect amount of sensitivity and sensuality!

Loving this fic! Update sooon!

Love,
Pari :*
Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago
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RES
UNRES
I AM JUST SPELLBOUND DEAR😊😊
THIS FIC...
I REALLY DON'T HAVE WORDS TO PRAISE YOUR BRILLIANT WORK👏👏
I'VE READ ALL THE CHAPTERS IN ONE GO...
AND IT'S JUST AMAZING 👏👏
AMAZING👏
THE WAY YOU BALANCED EVERY SINGLE EMOTIONS...MAY IT BE OF SANYUKTA OR RANDHIR'S
IT WAS JUST FABULOUS 👏
YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER 👏
THE WAY EVERY EMOTION IS POTRAYED IS JUST STUPENDUBULOUS
SO SANYU FELL FOR RANDHIR ❤️ ❤️
AWWW IT WAS SO GOOD TO SEE SANYU BEING SO CONCERNED FOR HER RANDHIR☺️☺️
AND WHEN SHE JUST SPAT ON PARTH...😃😃
I JUST LOVED IT❤️
LOVED IT TO THE CORE ❤️❤️
BUT VIDUSHI GOT TO KNOW ABOUT THEIR RELATIONSHIP...
WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW ??
BTW IT WAS SO...SO...SO GREAT 👏
AND WHEN SANYU SAID THAT SHE WON'T LEAVE HIM...
THAT SHE WON'T BREAK HIS HEART❤️
IT WAS AN AWWW MOMENT ☺️☺️
CONTINUE SOON...
WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY
AND OOPS FORGOT TO TELL YOU
I'VE BECOME ADDICTED TO YOUR FF 😛
AND THANKS A LOT FOR THE PM🤗🤗
Love
Sudeshna :
Edited by gossipgirl12 - 11 years ago
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Res
Unres...
M loving how the story is going..😳
M totally hooked to the story now
U write so well
And this was again a beautiful chap
Update soon (well no need of saying DAT, u update really soon)
And I love u for dat😉😆
Ohh I was third today, yippie 🤣

Love
-Sush 😳

Edited by sushie166 - 11 years ago
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Awesome
Yeah sanyu is falling fr him yeahh
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Awesome going on dear

finally she agreed she cant break his heart

please update soon
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Loved it sooo much
Awww...sanyu took care of him :)
The bed scene was the cutest...
Why is Parth behaving like that... I have a feeling he likes sanyu...

Vidushi...hahahahaha
Plzzz update soon XD

LOVE
SANA

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