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Honey

@Honey712

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Posted: 11 years ago

KRIYAANSH

KRIA:A GIRL WHO ONCELIVED FOR HER DANCE FRIENDS MOM AND HER LOVE REYAANSH SINGHANIA BUT NOW SHE ONLY LIVES FOR HER MOM AND NO ONE ELSE SHE LEFT HER LOVE DANCE AND FRIENDS IN SHORT SHE LEFT HER DIL DOSTI DANCE

REY:A BOY WHO ONCE LIVED FOR HIS FRIENDS FAMILY DANCE AND HIS LOVE KRIA BUT NOW HE LIVES FOR HIS FAMILY DANCE FRIENDS AND HIS BEST FRIENDS SISTER AND HIS SO CALLED NEW ATTRACTED LOVE TANNI

REST ALL ARE SAME AS N THE SHOW TANNI IS ALSO THEIR

SWARON NIMMI RIMAR BARKHA VIHA AND TARREY

KRIA WAS GONE BACK TO DHERADHUN

REY MOVED ON WITH TANNI

ALL WERE A COUPLE NOW

IT WAS A REGULAR DAY OF COLLEGE IN ST LOUIS

SWARON WERE IN THE REHERSAL HALL

ALL OTHER WERE IN THE CANTEEN

REY WAS TILL NOW DID NOT COME TO COLLEGE AND TANNI WAS IN THE PROJECTOR ROOM PREPARING A REPORT

IN DHERADHUN

KRIA WAS IN HER MOMS ROOM

KRIAS MOM WAS ON BED WITH A OXYGEN MASS AND KRIA WAS SITTING BESIDE HER HOLDING HER HAND

DOCTOR WAS CHECKING SMRITI

KRIA:DOCTOR UNCLE MOM KASE HAI

DOC:KRIA SMRITI KA CANCER 3 STAGE PAY HAI OR AB INKA TREATMENT MUMBAI MAY HE HO SAKTA HAI

WHA PAR EK DOCTOR BAKSHI HAI JO CANCER SPECIALIST HAI OR UNSAY MEINE BAAT KE HAI UNHE SMRITI KA ILLAG PTA HAI KASA HOGA SO MEIN TOH YHA KHUNGA KE TUM SMRITI KO DR BAKSHI KO DEKHAO

KRIA:OK

DOCTOR LEAVES

KRIA :MOM HUM MUMBAI JAYENGA VHA PAR I PROMISS MOM KE MEIN (PHONE RINGS )

K:HELLO

CALLER:KRIA SMRITI KASE HAI

KRIA:ABHI SO RHE HAI JAB UTHENGE PHONE KARLANGE

CALLER:PLZZ KRIA OR KITNA NARAZ RHOGE

KRIA:PLZZ NANI MUJHA KOI BAAT NHE KARNE APSE SO PLZZ

KRIA CUTS THE PHONE AND WENT BACK TO HER MOM

KRIA SLEPT WITH HER MOM THAT NIGHT

IN MIDNIGHT SMRITI STARTED SHOUTING DUE TO PAIN KRIA GOT UP AND PANICKED

K:MA MA KYA HUA EK MIN

KRIA TOOK A INJECTION AND AND INJECTED SMRITI

SMRITI AGAIN SLEPT

KRIA TEAR ROLLED DOWN

K:MA HUM LOG MUMBAI KAL HE JAENGEY PAR MEIN APP SAY WADA KARTE HU KE MEIN UNSE KABHI BHI NHE MELUNGE CHAHE MEIN MUMBAI MAY HE KYU NA HU

SHE WAVED HER HANDE ON THE SMRITIS FORHEAD

AND SLEPT

NEXT DAY KRIA BOOKED A MINI CAB FOR HER AND SMRITI NAD WENT TO MUMBAI

IN ST LOUIS

GANG WAS IN THE CANTEEN

VISHAKHA:GUYS FOOTLOOSE FINALE AA RHA HAI OR HUM LOGO NE ABHI TAK KOI REHERSAL SHURU NHE KI HAI

SWA:HA VISHKAHA U R RIGHT

REY:SO GUYS AJJ SAY START KARTE HAI

NE:RIGHT U REY

SIMMI:TOH 9:00 TO 12:00 HUM LOG REHERS KARENGE OR 12:00 SAY 3:00 TUM LOG REHERS KAR LENA

SH:NO SIIMI ABB SAY HUM LOG EK SATH REHERS KARNGE

EVERYONE SHOCKED THAT SHARON RAIPRAKASH SAY KI WEAKLINGS AND DAZLLINGS EK SATH REHERES DOING

SH:WHAT OH STOP IT GUYS PLZZ

SW:CHALO GUYS RHERSAL SHURU KARE

GANG GOES TO THE RH

TANNI FOLLOWS THEM TO RH

VISHAKHA :GUYS TANNI BHI HUMARE REHERSAL DAKHEGE

NE:HA VISHAKHA Y U PROBLEUM HAVING

VISHAKHA :NO CHALO LETS START

THEY ALL REHERES AND MAKING A BAND

AS SOON AS THEY ALL STOP TANNI GOES AND HUGS REY

EVERYONE LOOKING AT THEM REY IS SHOCKED

REY:TANNI KYA HUA

TANNI:REY APP NE BHUT ACHA DANCE KIYA

REY BREAKING THE HUG OK THANKS TANNI

VISHAKHA :AB PTA CHALA KE TANNI KITNI BADE CHEAP HAI

BHARAT AMAMR SIMMI RINNI VICKY NEHA NILESH AND VISHAKHA LAUGHS OUT LOUD

TANNI SEES THIS AND LEAVES

SHARON:CHALO GUYS HUM LOG CLASSES KA LIYE LATE HO RHE HAI

EVERYONE LEAVES

KRIA REACHES MUMBAI AND CALLS HER NANI

KRIA TELLS HER NANI THAT SHE AND HER MOM IS IN MUMBAINANI TELLS HER THAT THEY CAN COME AND LIVE WITH HER BUT KRIA OBJECTS AND SAYS NO NANI TELLS HER THAT THAN THEY CAN LIVE IN HER OWNED APARTMENT WITH NO WORRIES ABOUT RENT AND ALL NANI REQUEST A LOT KRIA AGREES AS SHE DO RESPECT HER NANI

KRIA GOES TO THE APARTMENT AND CALLS HER FRIEND OR BROTHER LIKE FRIEND ABHISHEK SHE TELLS ABHISHEK THAT TO APROOVE HER APLICATION IN A GUD COLLEGE OF MUMBAI AS SHE HAS TO COMPLETE HER FURTHER STUDIES

ABHISHEK AGREES AND SENDS KRIAS APLICATION TO MANY COLLEGES

ST LOUIS SEES THE APLICATION AND TAKES KRIA AND ABHISHEK SEES THE AGREEMENT AND CALLS KRIA THAT SHE GOT ADMISSION IN ST LOUIS COLLEGE

KRIA GETS SHOCKED BUT STILL SHE KNEW THAT ABHI DOES NOT NO ABOUT HER PAST SO SHE DECIDED TO AGREE SHE TELLS ABHI KK AND THANKED HIM FOR HIS HELP AND ABHI SAID THAT HE IS ALWAYS THEIR FOR HER

DAY GETS OVER

RECAP:KRIA ENTERS ST LOUIS COLLEGE

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Supab story

Part 1 is really good

But why u have to include tani?

I dont like her attall

N she cheap rey se cheapk rahi thi

Huj

Kria ki mom ko cancer n that to 3rd stage!

That was quite shocking

Hope she will get well soon

N kria back in moumbai n in st. Louis

That is really interesting

Sab ke face dekhane layak hoge

N why kria was so naraz with her nani?

Love it

Update next part soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

nice and good... do continue and hope she will be able to keep the promise
and not break or get more hurt... by her group of friends...

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

aweeesome one Yr Love the concept nd the tittle was fav Story line was also intresting waiting for more Parts plz update soon thank u for the pm

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

wow

amazing start

love the concept and the storyline

do continue with it

thanks for the PM

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Fab!!!
Smriti has cancer!!! OMG!!!
Kriya is broken!!!
N d gang is njoying in der own world!!!
Taani ki classic insult by vishakha!! 😆
N kroya moving to mumbai with smriti!
N OMG!!! Kriya joining St. Louis again!!!
Superb!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

nice concept...
looking forward to it

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Honey

@Honey712

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

PART2

Reacap kria got admission in st louis

Next day at kria home

Kria was getting ready for her college

Kria got ready and moved towads her moms room she gave her mom medicines and called up her nani and informed her that she has to come and look after smriti as she has to go to college

Nani said that she will reach their in 5 min

Kria left for her college and nani came their to look after her daughter smriti

In st louis

Gang was in the rehersal hall when a peon came and told them that vp sir is calling them to his cabin

Gang came to vp sirs cabin

Tanni was with gang

Vp : guys ajj ek new student join kar rhe hai

Sw: ok sir par uss new student ka naam kya hai

Vp was about to say the name when evetually their was a nock nock on his door

Vp : cum in here she is miss kria ghai

Gang was shocked to hear this name specially rey swayum sharon

Vp asked kria to submit her forms and all to the respective counters and join the college from today

Kria said kk and left the cabin the gang also left

Kria after submitting her forms amd completing all the formalities was in the canteen drinking water when she suddenly felt someone calling her she turned around and was in a hug by vishakha neha amar bharat

They huged her tightly

Kria to responded as she knew that her mom never had a probleum with these guys

Vishakha and neha bursted out their questions on her like y did she leave and etc kria told them that she will tell them all when it will be the right time they all respected her decision and again huged her

In rh swayum sharon rey and tanni was present

Sw: kria yha god voh yha kya kar rhe hai

Sh: phir say rey ka dil todne aye hoge

Tan: bilkul theek kha rhe hai sharon

Rey was in a shock and did not no how to respond to the situation

Sw plzz sharon kria ki bui koi majburi hoge

Bell rang and evryone moved to the canteen

Gang was in the canteen

Rey sharon vicky tanni nil simmi rinni amar bharat were sitting on one bench

Kria neha vishakha were sitting on other bench

Swayum entered the canteen and saw this he thought of going to rey and all but his heart wanted to hug his bf andask her y did she leave them so he listened to his heart and went to kria

Kria got up and swayumed pulled her into a hug and asked her y did she go

Kria said him that she will tell him when it will be the right time

Swayum said kk and looked at sharon and all other sitting there

Sharon was burning but she to understood that kria and swayum were bf so its normal

Kria phone rang

Kria ha nani kya hua

Nani kria smriti ke halat bhut kharab ho rhe hai plzz jaldi aajao plzz

Kria git shocked and told her nani to give smriti the pain killer injection and call dr joshi

Kria cuts the call and quickly picked up her bag and was going to make a move when vishakha stoped her asked her that whats the matter

Kria vishakha voh ma ma ma her tears started rolling down her cheeks swayum rey neha all other except tanni got in tention that why is kria crying and whats the matter

Kria told vishakha and swayum that she has to go no she willl meet them tomororw

Kria left

Swayum kria ko kya hua or voh itni tention may kyu hai

Vishakha or uske mom ko kya hua

Neha tention hapoening to neha

Amar kuch nhe hoga neha

Swayum ha kal jab voh college ayege toh puch lange

Kria reached her home and saw that dr joshi was treating her momand her nani was sitting beside her mom

Dr got up and said that smriti ke halat bhut critical hai jiske vaja say uska treatment hume jaldi say shuru karna hoga

Dr left and kria sat beside her mom

Day over

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