Opinion for New FF!! Must Read!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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By popular demand I am back with an idea for a new FF. And yes! It will be a dark, intense, Parud FF. Now, I've actually gone through quite a few ideas in my head, but I want to know what you all think of this storyline. If you like it I will begin writing it!
So...

What if...

Rudra wasn't a BSD officer, but a contract killer that works for Tejawat, who is still a weapons smuggler. Rudra is only called when they are in need of the best. He is cold-hearted, emotionless, merciless, and everything that turns a human into an animal.

So let's say that Paro is getting married to Varun, a man who works under Tejawat. Now, Varun has secretly been stealing Tejawat's money and weapons for his own personal side business. Tejawat finds out and takes Paro hostage and tells Varun that he has to return all the money or else he will kill Paro. Until then, Rudra is holding her as his prisoner. He pretty much treats her like he does in RR, but a little worse. He sends pictures of her broken state to Varun as motivation to hurry up and pay Tejawat back.

Behind the simple picture lies secrets that, when revealed could kill the human completely in Rudra Pratap Ranawat.

So will Varun save Parvati? What happens when Paro is able to tap into the human with the jallad? What happens when the prisoner becomes something more? And if Tejawat gives the order, will Rudra be able to kill Paro?



There will be much more to this story than meets the eye. Based on a simple summary, what do you guys think? Should I write it? Should I not? Give me the feedback because this FF depends on all of your support!





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Sumayya_Ejaz thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that is super amazing 👍🏼 liked the change of rudra character as a killer who works for tajawat and paro still his prisoner...👏 plz do continue😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting!
For me personally Rudra is Army officer 😆
But I'll give it a try. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this story sounds thrilling.
Please start it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whatever works for u :) its ur story to tell
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That sure looks intense but can you not have Rudra as the cold, ruthless Army man, who sees nothing beyond the need to be protect his country????? And Tejawat can be the scheming, plotting, shrewd arms smuggler from across the border?????
But having said that, its your story and you can pen it the way you want it... I am game for it anyways!!!! Always love reading dark and angsty stories, which of course have the scope of a happy ending... 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my gosh. This can lead to many conclusions.
It's very intriguing and nail biting. Keep going.
Ps. I hope Paro and Rudra become something more. And I think this is an FF I'll look forward to reading.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds great! Cant wait to read it, but not too many lovey scenes between paro and varun! Rudra and paro all the way lol
rashika thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This story sounds very intense and gripping already. Do write it. I would love to read it. 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes, write, but make Rudra fall crazily and intensely in love with Paro. So much so, that he can't live without her!

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