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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
brilliant start..thank you for the PM..👍🏼

most welcome... 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Chinu_Rose
Fabulous update as usual Shona... Continue soon...🤗

ll do thnx fr d comment 😳

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: re123
heyee shona😆 u write storys n all thats great yup i do write them😳
aree abhi always shout at her...she feeds tons of tears..really feels bad😭 me too
oyee i really loved the way u wrote pragya's felling
abhi n his frustration well written 👏thank u
love letter fr lover boy oh god yeh abhi kab samajenga🤔 next update 😆
purab finally speak out the truth 😃🥳yuppiieee
kya shock laga abhi ko..pragya di😆 aur bhi lagenge 😆
wow nice conv bw purab n abhi👏 thnk u 😳
i really want him to read the note seriously he need a emotional trauma 😈
continue soon dear..waiting how abhi is going react n pragya is where!!! ll update today drafting the part only
give me a pm fr sure😆 ll do 😉

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ArlequinAJ
Res 😳

Unres 🤣

shona kamini tu pragya ko kaha chupayi be?? 🤣 🤣

Thnk god @least tere story mein purab ne abhi ke saamne pragya di bola ..warna yeh confusion show mein leap ke baad reveal hoga 🤣 🤣 🤣

Nw Abhigya ki love story start karde bhai bhai
😳

Fab start jaani 😳 .plz continue soon
Warna thapad padega 😡 😡 ..tumhari mummy se complain kar dungi 😡 😡

credit goes to ayesha aka Huhu 🤣 🤣

Ich Liebe Dich 🤗

ohh terri🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 pragya ko me khud dhundne jaaungi time lagega ab bhai bhia ab thoda hi bacha hai... wahi dungi thappad maaregi tu chal hatt 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ForeverFabulous
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Shona ab megha sirf baarish kar sakti hai , sunny sunny ek hafte se gayab hai bee 🤣 🤣

awesome start jaani 😳
tune Abhi ko shock laga mode pe chod diya 😲 ..achha hua pragya aur purab ka confusion durr hua 😳

pragya aur abhi ko mila de jaani

Aur subha Tujhe VD ki pic bheji Maine ..ussi mein khush reh beta 🤣 🤣

kamini anji pic se khush nahi rakhti wo mujhe... megs dekh tere baare me kya anaab shanaab likhi hai... wapa aaja 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

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Edited by BlackWidowBaby - 9 years ago

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Megha

@ForeverFabulous

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

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UNRES 😳

WOW! Shonu, just wow! Dono updates ek saath padhe and I'm speechless! First update was amazing but second update was best! Itne saare feels aa rahe the, main bata nahi sakti!

Solid wala mood bana diya tune! ☺️ Bechara Abhi! Woh letter wala scene! 🥺 Ekta ko main kaam se nikaal rahi hoon aur tujhe writer bana rahi hoon! 😆 Kyunki jahaan tak main Ekta ko jaanti hoon, woh Purab-Bulbul ki sachai itni jaldi reveal nahi karne wali! Chudail kahi ki! 😡

Ab bas Sunny Sunny ho jaye jaldi mere life mein! ☺️

Edited by ForeverFabulous - 11 years ago

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ArlequinAJ

@ArlequinAJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

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Pehle sunny ki dhund fir usse warning mein daal 🤣 🤣

WANTED SUNNY SUNNY
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Fab update jaani 😳 emotional kardita 😭 😭
bichara Abhi usse pragya se milade jaani 😒

Pragya se yaad aaya pandey ji 😲 ..tune pragya ko kaha chipaya be 🤣

Update soon love ..Warna thapad padega 😡 😡 ..tumhari mummy se complain kar dungi 😡

credit goes to ayesha aka huhu 🤣 🤣

Edited by ArlequinAJ - 11 years ago

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rekha

@re123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

heyee shona ..sorry fr the late comment😳

abhi feeling hw stupid n wrong he was for pragya 😆 n his emotions was well written dear👏

really good conv bw bulbul n abhi well written as dramatically well done 😆..

finally the letter yipee kuch sense of relief for his eagerness /his tadap😔

dam he really need her presence just for sake of people***some body hit his head**😡😆

why did he hide letter from alliya **first dam thing in his life ---did something good***👏

oyee really he sad/worried for pragya n aliya madam😡 ur bhai is gone out of ur order🤣

really nicely pinned up how is feelings are fighting his own present situation**wow he lied to his sister👍🏼😆

four months😲 where is pragya bol shona tu kidnapped her😡🤣

after judai at least he got his senses back 😃 wah kya drasctic change of his character that i really want in the serial but naa jaane kab milenga😆

the one last thing which connected him to pragya😳

the letter was so emotional one😭 really felt bad for abhi **literally what flow of here wording vs connection of his feeling really a wow to end of this part wowww really khushi ki ansoo😭😭

do continue soon

pls pm me next time😆

Edited by re123 - 11 years ago