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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: kinkinikki

Such a brilliant update, loved every bit of it, especially the bit she called out baldeva . Veera wants him so bad! !! She even has naughty dreams about him which are becoming a reality.
I agree that u need to wrap this story up so update very very very soon , everyday if u want, twice a day if u wanna finish quickly.



😆R u serious?Twice a day?!!😲😲How m I gonna do dt?!🥺Nd I cn never stop tryn now!😡
yes..Da angry and hurt Ballu has to be dealt wid b4 I cn move onto my odr stories..😳Hence da hurry..So dnt complain now if u get bombarded with my stupid updates..😡😆🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ElireEli

☺️ Tehsina...do u want me to kill me with the hotness...and u wrote this while watching world cup finals and being pissed off at the rival supporters😲...amazing...how could you write so well in such a situation????😲...I am so jelly of you...coming to your story...do u know I had the same doubt in the last few chapters as Baldev- how can she be so comfortable with any stranger...we know it is Baldev,Baldev knows it is Veera but Veera just feels he is somewhat familiar but still allowing a stranger to touch you like this...😲...will anger me as well had I been in Baldev's shoes...😡...but well deep down she knew it was Baldeva...😳...ohh...this girl is so crazily in love with him and in the end...OMG...neend main yeh sab kar sakti hain to...☺️...consciously kya kya karegiii??☺️...wild update...loved it...and love you for this...🤗Please keep updating as soon as you can...I want to read the next update before I come out of the effect of this hot update...😳



Eli!🤗First of all a big thank u for such a big fat comment!😃Me like it!!!
Dnt be jelly girl!😳I was venting out my frustation and anger thru my writings only..So I tuk longer write da chapter..I cud finish it in one hour maybe,wid break in da middle,but dn I took bloody 4 hours!🤬
Nd since I was burning wid anger I cudnt vent out,I took it out in mkn Veeba hot..!😆Nd if u notice u will see da first part lacked the usual grace..I mean i felt if it was my usual style,I'd hv added more details..🥺But jo ho gaya so ho gaya..I cn only try to improve later ones..😳U'll read it as da hotness is still fresh..!Nd I want fresh comments too!😡😆
Okay will be updating in smtym.Nd yes my anger md me write half da next update last night..
My Argentina lost..!😡🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: tamzin43

☺️ Loved it thanks for the pm dear 😃



Thank u so much love!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



Eli!🤗First of all a big thank u for such a big fat comment!😃Me like it!!!
Dnt be jelly girl!😳I was venting out my frustation and anger thru my writings only..So I tuk longer write da chapter..I cud finish it in one hour maybe,wid break in da middle,but dn I took bloody 4 hours!🤬
Nd since I was burning wid anger I cudnt vent out,I took it out in mkn Veeba hot..!😆Nd if u notice u will see da first part lacked the usual grace..I mean i felt if it was my usual style,I'd hv added more details..🥺But jo ho gaya so ho gaya..I cn only try to improve later ones..😳U'll read it as da hotness is still fresh..!Nd I want fresh comments too!😡😆
Okay will be updating in smtym.Nd yes my anger md me write half da next update last night..
My Argentina lost..!😡🥺


You are welcome dear...🤗Don't worry dear...now you will get fresh comments...beech main thoda stuck ho gayi thi isliye late ho gayi comment karne main😳...I know about Argentina losing🥺..coz though I am not a football fan I was a mute spectator of similar after effects of another ardent Argentinian fan, my better half.😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Great update...lovely story and Baldev at his best...Thank you...Please update soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: ElireEli


You are welcome dear...🤗Don't worry dear...now you will get fresh comments...beech main thoda stuck ho gayi thi isliye late ho gayi comment karne main😳...I know about Argentina losing🥺..coz though I am not a football fan I was a mute spectator of similar after effects of another ardent Argentinian fan, my better half.😳




😆I suffered and fumed due to my better(🤪) half too!😡He and his buddies had late night sehri for da match,and me da cook and da organiser fumed silently wid headphones stuck in my ear,and my lappy infront as dey cheered Germany!Aaargh!😡
Me not a football fan too!😆But dere is just sth about supportn ur fav team!😉Though da ony thing I notice is da fights and da goals!😆
Anyways updatn soonish!😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u dear!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Great update...lovely story and Baldev at his best...Thank you...Please update soonnn



Thank u!😛Yes will be updatn soon!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



😆R u serious?Twice a day?!!😲😲How m I gonna do dt?!🥺Nd I cn never stop tryn now!😡
yes..Da angry and hurt Ballu has to be dealt wid b4 I cn move onto my odr stories..😳Hence da hurry..So dnt complain now if u get bombarded with my stupid updates..😡😆🤗



Complain if we get bombarded with updates? ??? Are u outta your mind, that would be the best thing ever. 😃 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
[NOTE:See I told u u'll be bombarded wid updates!😳]

Chapter-5,page-12:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110057243


CHAPTER-6.

Unfeeling, I was frozen in a web of dream..

Frozen forever in time that stood still..

I was frozen,and then He happened,

The ice broke and all I do now is burn,scorch,and feel..

Baldev closed his eyes,and gritted his teeth,as another hissed breath passed between his clenched teeth..She was now licking at his bobbing Adam's apple,making fire run through his blood..

There was only a little that a full on aroused man could do when the woman of his dreams was full on intent on seducing him to oblivion,in sleep or not..

His hands clenched into tighter fists,raised half way up almost to hold her..Almost but not yet..

She moved and straddled his hard self full on now,making him stifle another groan,as she moved her lips to kiss his bearded jaw.

Baldev was going crazy now with the need that clawed at his senses..That was when her lips went to his earlobe,sucking there,and Baldev lost his control.

He turned her round trapping her soft pliant sweet smelling body under his,as he placed hot hungry kisses along her throat.

She writhed and moaned underneath him,making him go hard all the more.He rubbed his hardenedshaft against her soft stomach,intensifying his need and raising his hunger by notches.

He bit hungrily into her soft sensitive creamy neck,and sucked and licked there making her moan all the more..

He moved his way upto her soft juicy beckoning lips,kissing every inch of sweet scented skin on the way,as if his life was centered on that..

He had moved to claim her lips as his,when she moaned out something..

He stopped for a second,breathing harshly trying to hear her words..

"Maat ja..Chadhdke maat ja..K-..

[Don't go..Don't leave me..K-..]"Her words made him go still..

Who was she dreaming about..?!Was she dreaming about that Karan?!How stupid could he get?!

Hissing in a sharp painful breath he moved away off her,as he felt his insides burn and seeth,and a sharp coil of pain seemed to wrap within his inside nearly making him choke out with the pain of it.

He stood by the side of her bed,as he saw her sleeping peacefully like a baby without a worry in the world now,as he tried to fight the painful throbbing of his hardened aroused body.

She smiled in her sleep again,making his heart flutter again despite the pain of unrelinquished love he felt right then..

He felt a prickling sensation,at the back of his eyes,as he quickly turned to leave through the window,the same way he had come.

He was gone in minutes,so he did not hear Veera's last whisper before she drowned into a deep slumber.

"Chadhdhke maat jaa mainu..K-..Kiss me..Kitta zyaada pyaar hai mainu tujhse Dev..I love you Baldeva..

[Don't leave me..K-..Kiss me..Love you so much Dev..I love you Baldeva..]"She nuzzled ino her pillow before going back into her dream world..

Veera woke up confused in the morning,as she felt strange sensations rocketing her body..

She blushed red as she remembered the vivid hot dream she had at night..

It had felt so real as if baldev was really in her room,loving her,just like she had imagined so many times in her dreams..But this time her dream had been too real..

With her face flushed tomato red ,she went to freshen up..

Her face was changed into a frown of confusion,as she saw a small red mark on her neck..just where she had dreamt Baldev had beaten her so erotically last night..

How could that be?!

Veera spent the entire day in a flurry of activities,until in the afternoon she was informed about a new admission in the night school..

They had opened a night school in the Krishi Vidyalay to educate those who had missed there timely education..

Her Veerji and Gunajn bhabhi were students there too..And any new admission always seemed like a new milestone achieved..

Veera herself also taught there part time,and tonight she wanted to see this new admission herself.

But somehow Veera managed to be late,and missed the night school.

It was the third day,and she still had not managed to visit the new stranger,although she had kept an eye on him..

Even yesterday she had secretly ogled at him chopping woods in the forest, unable to keep away..She was strangely attracted and felt guilty all at the same time..What was happening to her..?!

That night Veera finally managed to find the time to reach the night school..

The school was closing and almost everyone had left,but Veera managed some spare minutes to talk with the teacher..

She was praising the new admission..That he was a brilliant student,and also much advanced in his studies..That they needed to little to give him the higher degrees..

Veera smiled and talked with her for sometime,now impatient to see this new peson herself..

In her hurry,she forgot to ask his name too..A very serious mistake..She would realize later..

Veera swathe new admitted student leaving the school building,and ran after him,asking him to stop.

That was when she realized she did not even know his name..!

She was not sure if he had heard her voice,but he was striding away fast now,so that Veera had to run fast to hold onto him,and yet could not reach him.

He was getting into the forest when Veera stopped for a few seconds to catch her breath..

Where was the guy going?!She thought breathing heavily..

She quickly ran after him again,least she should lose the sight of him,but alas!

As she went pat the trees she had seen him pass by,she noticed he had just vanished..!

She could see little in the moonlight that fell through the trees,but stealthily stepped forward..As she searched the semi darkened area,she strangely felt eery..

Dry leaves scrunched under her feet,and she nearly jumped put in fright when an owl hooted nearby..And then chuckled at her own nervousness.

Maybe she should return,she decided as she could not see any sign of the guy she had just followed into here.

She had just turned to leave the semidark tree surrounded area,when a dark shadow came out of nowhere and blocked her way out,nearly making her scream out in surprise.But she stifled the scream before it got too loud..

The way the air around her seemed to crackle she knew who was standing in front of her even though she could not see his face again,as it was completely in the shadow..

"Aap nu kuch chahiye tha mujhse..?

[Did you need something from me..?]"His husky voice made her heart flutter some more.

"Wo main..Tu..I mean aap hi hai night school ki naya student..?Main wo-..

[I..You..I mean you are the new student at night school..?I-..]"

"Haan..Main hi hun..Koi gunaah ki hai kya..?Mere jaise aira gaira nai par sakta ki uththe?

[Yes..I am..Have I committed a sin..?Nobodies like me cannot study there?]"Was she imagining it or was there a hidden bitterness behind his words..?

"Nai main wo-..

[No,I-..]"She could not finish her sentence as he strode off and vanished into the darkness,just like he had come out..

Strangely she could not even hear his footsteps..How did he walk like that..?!

Veera wondered in vain,as she made her way to home,snapping and crunching twigs and dried leaves as she walked..

Suddenly she stopped,and decided she wanted to talk to him more..

Why had she not seen his face yet..?!

She had to..

Now!

Veera walked towards the clearing in the forest,where the lone cottage stood..

A soft light came out of its tiny window,the only light beside the moonlight bathing the clearing in its milky whiteness..

She walked to the cottage door with racing heart,and feet that felt like stones.

Slowly she knocked on the door.

No response came..

She knocked again,and again no response..

Slowly she pushed the door open and it creaked so loud that she felt her heart almost burst out.

The cottage was empty..But in a corner she saw something cooking on a small stove,and it smelt nice..

Curiously she went in to take a look,feeling like Goldilocks who had been into the three bears' house without permission.

She noticed it was khichdi and it was done..

Afraid it might get burned she quickly put the stove off,and wondered again where the man had gone to..?

She walked outside the cottage,when a strange splashing noise reached her ears.

Curious she walked towards the source,and was surprised to see a beautiful pond,its waters rippling in the moonlight..

She had walked close to the inclined bank,when she heard the splashing sound again..

She turned her head,and instantly her mouth hung open as she saw naked biceps moving in the water,as a man swam in the pond..

She was deciding whether to leave when the man started swimming towards the bank,making her heart race as she stood rooted to the ground..

With a loud splosh he pulled his wet body out of the water,and shook the water off his longish hair,and Veera thanked God that he was actually wearing a half pant below..

Her eyes were dragged to the water dripping down the wide softly haired chest that glowed in the moonlight,and the biceps that bulged with his slightest movement..

He was wiping the water off his face,when he shook his hair again,and a few drops fell on her face too,making her gasp out audibly.She took a step back was slipping,when strong wet arms caught hold of her bent backwards form to prevent the fall.

That was when Veera ,for the first time,got a glimpse of the mystery man,who got her heart racing.. Time stood still,and the world stopped on its axis,as she stared mesmerized at the face above her,and all the breath left her body,as she saw the dark handsome face glowing in moonlight,looking down at her with an odd expression in those dark,oh so familiar,heart wrenchingly piercing eyes..

Chapter-7,page-18:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110294759


Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 11 years ago

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