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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys. I thought I'd write a poem about Aahil...

If you dare to cross his path
He'll bring you to your knees
No begging for mercy
Around him please!

His world belongs to him
His fortune
His harem of women
His conniving Mother
His beautiful Brother
Then his chalk and cheese sisters!

But all this is facade
His past haunts him at night
Those memories won't fade
An explanation of his hardcore persona..

Those killer eyes
That chiselled body
Not made for vanity. ..

It's all for the love
Of beautiful woman
Who has melted his heart..
He knows he effects her...
His touch will make her
Lose control of her innocence

All he needs is a good omen
From the blessed Lord above!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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If you dare to cross his path
He'll bring you to your knees
No begging for mercy
Around him please!




Oh my goodness what have here!!!! I absolutely love the rhyming!!!




These lines...? Very, very Aahil!!!

I can't even begin to tell you just how spot on you are!! Incredible!! No begging for mercy indeed!!


His world belongs to him
His fortune
His harem of women
His conniving Mother
His beautiful Brother
Then his chalk and cheese sisters!


His harem of women;)


Conniving mother;)


Beautiful brother :) Hayyyeee!!!



But all this is facade
His past haunts him at night
Those memories won't fade
An explanation of his hardcore persona..



The above. Truly. Touched my heart!!! :'( His past definitely haunts him! But all this is facade.



:'(


Those killer eyes
That chiselled body
Not made for vanity. ..
It's all for the love
Of beautiful woman



Not made for vanity...!!!!!!!



Are you sure you're talking about Aahil here. Haha!!


Are youuu!!?



Who has melted his heart..
He knows he effects her...
His touch will make
Lose control of her innocence
.
All he needs is a good omen



Wow!!!! il


From the blessed Lord above!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi my friends thanks for commenting on my poem. I will b writing more soon including Sanam, Rehan and Begum Sahiba.
So watch this space.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's all for the love
Of beautiful woman
Who has melted his heart..
He knows he effects her...
His touch will make her
Lose control of her innocence

All he needs is a good omen
From the blessed Lord above!
❤️
Oh! Can i jiust say i freaking loved these lines!

You. An awesome piece there. Beautiful rhyming and so well explained his about his persona.

A facade :( Yes its so damn true! Its just a mask he wears, trying to hide all his fears and haunted past. :( Such a troubled soul

He needs THAT ONE HAND which could bring him from the darkness to the light called LOVE❤️

Such a brilliant piece. You should write more! :)

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