KR FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya NOTE PG 120

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guyz..shocked to see me here
well my friends wants me to continue my ff Saath nibhana saathiya
so here I am...

credit : starry.phoenix



About this ff :

Kriyansh belongs to the family...who are rich but believes in old traditions and value...aur aap sab jaante ho kaise hoti hai family...no western clothes for girls...DIL humesha head par palla rakhengi...aur kehte hai na jaisa desh waisa besh...toh wo unki family hai toh apne kids ko bhi vahi teach karenge jo unhe unke parents ne kiya...dono famlies main girls k liye kuch rules hote hai...jo unhe follow karne hote hai...oh one more thing...Kriyansh is going to get married ya arrange marriage...


Index :
Concept,Character Sketch & part 1 : Below
part 2 - page 10
part 3 - page 16
part 4 - page 20
part 5 - page 21
part 6 - page 24
part 7 - page 24
part 8 - page 37
part 9 - page 58
part10- page 92
part11- Page 112
part12 - Page 117


Originally posted by: Devil_kriti

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Concept

ye kahani hai do ajnabiyo ki jo ek atoot bandhan main bandhane ja rhe hai...lekin ye faisla unka nhi...unke parivar walo ka tha...wo kya chahte hai ye toh unke parivarwalo ne kabhi unse pucha bhi nhi...ab dono apni puri zindagi ek doosre k sath bitane ja rhe hai dono ek dusre k naam aur chere k ilawa ek dusre k baare main kuch nhi jaante...sirf dono yahi umeed rakh kar apni nyi zindagi main kadam rakh rhe hai..."sukh main dukh main Saath Nibhana Sathiya"

kya dono ne jo ek dusre par umeed rakhi hai kya dono ek dusre ki umeed par kadhhe ho payenge

To more know about the story here's the
character sketch...


reyaansh singhania (27) :

elder son of singhania Family,MD of Singhania Empire after his Father retirement..sweet in nature but sometimes naughty...but in business world he's terror...his staff is afraid of his anger...he hate cheater and liars...mascular body...girls drool over him but he don't paid any attention because of the morals and values teach by his mother never say no to his mother never ever argue with his mother...his mother words is god's words...

kriya ghai (19) :(soon to be singhania)

Younger daughter of ghai family...always wear suits...no jeans and skirts allowed in her home..very sweet never raise her voice against anyone...want to do M.B.B.S...but her family never allowed...and only her last hope is her soon to be husband will he allow and her in laws allow her to do M.B.B.S...also believe in old tradition and values just like her family.

Harleen ghai :

kriya's Grandmother belives in old values and tradition and also teachs his son the same.her words is the gods words for the ghai's.

arvind ghai :
Chairman of ghai Enterprises and belives in old values and tradition.

Smriti ghai :

wife of arvind believes in old values and tradition and also teaches her daughter the same...never raises her voice against her husband her husband words is gods words.

Taani Shivam Malik(21) :

elder daughter of arvind...wife of shivam malik never raises her voice and her eyes against his father and Husband just like her mother.She also want to do the M.B.B.S but before marriage her family never allows...and after marriage her husband and her dreams shattered.

Shivam Malik (25):

orphan,husband of taani and works with Arvind as a partner...first he's a favorite employe of Arvind then Arvind chooses him as the soon to be husband of taani and he accepted his proposal then after marriage he gave him the big house to live and makes him the partner in his business.believes in old tradition and values.short tempered.more to know about him later.

Sharon Ghai (19):

Cousin of kriya and Taani...Daughter of Arvind younger brother , her parents died in a car accident...and she lives with her badi ma and bade papa (Arvind and smriti).

Savitri singhania :

Grandmother of Reyansh(rey) and just like kriya's grand mother and childhood friend of harleen.

Ranvijay singhania :

ex-chairman of singhania empires.and just like Arvind believes in old traditions and values.

Ananya Ranvijay singhania :

believes in old tradition and values and always keep one thing in her mind that no one no one in her home de-respect this tradition and values loves her elder son rey and rey's also a mumaa's boy.

Swayam singhania (23) :

younger brother of rey and work as a major employee in KE.

Neha singhania (19):

little sister of rey and swayam..they both loves her very much and she loves her bros too..she's the only one in the family who not believe in these old culture...she have to follow them because of her mother...and want to beacome a dancer but have no courage to tell her mother about her desire now coz she knows if she open her mouth her mother her will make her marry to some old tradition guy..and she dislike her mother so.much why I 'll disclose this further updates
more characters will be revealed later on in the story if its necessary...

Common thing in both families:
1)Both believes in old tradition and values
2)They teaches their children the same.
3)All daughter in laws puts the dupatta on their head when they are with elders.

ok about about age difference thing I love this type of stories 😳
Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Its Kriyansh wedding day

IN Ghai mANSION...

all are busy in the last minute preparation...and in any minute barat will be arrived...
In one of the room...
A girl sitting in her wedding attire and her face colour shows her shyness and nervousness for future and then the girl come in saree and her head is covered with pallu...

Girl:kriya tu tayar ho gyi...wah meri gudiya toh kitni payari lag rh hai kisi ki nazar na lage meri gudiya ko...and put the kajal behind her ear to protect her from evil eyes...

Kriya:taani di mujhe bohot gabrahat ho rhi hai...nyi zindagi naye log main kaise manage kar paungi aur koi galti ho gyi toh...ananya maa toh mujhe kabhi maaf nhi karegi...aur main iinke saath kaise nibha paungi...humne ekdusre se kabhi baat bhi nhi ki...sirf ek dusre ki shakal dekhi hai...aur maine koi galti kar k inhe naraz kardiya toh...di mujhe bohot gabrahat ho rhi hai...meri toh kisi k saamne awaz bhi nhi nikalti aur aapne ka tha main ek baar inse apni M.B.B.S ki baat karu...di batao na main kya karu...itni der se main hi chapar chapar kari ja rhi ho aap kuch bolti kyi nhi...

Taani :tu mujhe bolne ka moka de toh main bolu..

Kriya:oh sorry acha di batao na main kya karu...

Taani :kriya ye nervousness shaddi k din har ladki ko hoti hai...mujhe bhi hui thi bas shaddi k baat apne pati ka saath mil jaaye toh har muskil aasan ho jaati hai...aur rhi baat teri M.B.B.S ki...toh reyansh ji khud itne pade likhe hai...itna bada business chala rhe hai...toh wo kyo teri M.B.BS k liye mana karenge...

Kriya:lekin di agar ye bhi in baato par maante huue ki ladki ki jagha sirf rasoi aur pati ki seva main hai toh mere M.B.B.S k sapne ka kay hoga...

Taani :kriyu think positive aise kuch nhi hoga(I hope so...In mind)

Kriya:paka na di...

Taani :ha meri payari behan...in baatao ko chod aur is moment ko ache se jee aaj teri shaddi hai...aur shaddi k baad *ahem ahem* u know...(she said teasingly to distract her mind from the M.B.B.S topic)

Kriya:Di aap bhi na..(and she blushes)...(then worry takes place on her face)...di ek pati ki apni patni se bohot saari umeede hoti hai kya main unki ummedo par khari utar paungi kahi maine unhe neerash(disappoint) kar diya toh...

Taani :kriya tu itni tension kyo le rhi hai...aur saath main mujhe bhi tension de rhi hai...acha acha soch sab acha hi hoga...aur chal main ye teri chunri dhang se sar par set kar dun...(afterdoing)...hm hogya...bohot payari lag rhi hai meri behan...(now her face is covered with long veil)

On the other side a other mansion is decorated THIS MANSION is SINGHANIA MANSION and in one of the room a guy standing in front of the mirror and set his hair and he's looking extreamly hot in his wedding attire...and then another guy comes in the room with the sehara/pagdi in his hand...
Guy :(with pagdi)bhai aapki pagdi aagyi...(and yes the mirror guy is rey)(he turn towards the pagdi guy)
Rey :kya hai chotte abhi toh maine baal set kiye the aur ye pagdi pehni toh saare baal kharab ho jaayenge.

Swyam:Bhai aaj aapki shaddi hai aur pagdi toh aapko pehnni padegi ye riwaz hai...

Rey :s wayam teri tabyat toh teekh hai na...

Swayam :ha bhai kyo kya hua...

Rey :nhi wo riwaz ki baat tu kar rha hai...isliye pucha...

Swayam :stop making fun of me aur jaldi sar aage lao mai pagdi pehnau...(when he proceed to wear him pagdi a girl bages in with panting badly look like she comes from the marathon and screams)

Girl :Ruko...

Ghai Mansion
In Kriya's room
man barges in the room and
Man :taani...(he spoke rudely but not loudly)..(and then taani stand up with fear...)

Taani:ji...(the man is shivam taani's husband)

Shivam :meri sherwani ka scarf kahan hai...dundke do mujhe mil nhi raha...(order her)

Taani :ji...(and she obeyed her husband and goes with him and kriya silently sit o her seat)

Singhania Mansion
rey's Room...
(both rey and swayam shocked to saw a girl like this and)
Rey :neha kya hua aur tum itni tez bhag kar kyo aayi...

Swayam :ha neha bata...(she's Neha Singhania)

Neha :wo swayam bhai aap rey bhai ko pagdi nhi pehna sakte...kyonki ye kaam behno ko hota hai...aur bhai ki behan main hoon toh pagdi main pehnaugi...

Swayam :ha toh itni si baat k liye marathon bhagne ki kya zaroorat thi ye le pehna...
(neha wore him his pagdi)
Neha :bhai mera neg...

Swayam :acha toh madam ko pagdi isliye pehnani thi taaki neg mile...wah neha maan gye tujhe...kya behan hai tu...bhai isne toh aapko pagdi pehna kar topi pehna di..(neha make sad face and)

Rey :swayam shut up use mujhse gift lene k liye faltu k excuses dene ki zaroorat nhi hai.(and neha shows swayam tongue)..wo jab chahe mujhse kuch bhi le sakti hai main apni princess ko kabhi kuch mana nhi kar sakta ha agar us baat ko maa ne mana kar diya toh main bhi kuch nhi kar sakta...

Swayam :ha bhai wo toh hum jaante hai...aap neha ko kisi baat k liye mana nhi karte agar wo baat ma k asulo k khilaf na ho...lekin bhai ab toh aapki zindagi main bhabhi aa rhi hai...toh aap sabse zayada dhayan kisko doge bhabhi ko ya neha ko...ab toh aapki first priority bhabhi hogi na...

rey :aisa kuch nhi hoga...kriya k aa jane se is ghar main kuch nhi badlega na maa k rules na meri priorities...kuch cheez badlegi toh wo hai humare family members ki counting...uske ilawa is ghar main kuch change nhi hoga.kuch nhi...(hehe ise abhi kya pata kriya k aane k baad wo khud hi change hone wala hai 😆😉)

Neha :bhai ab bate chodo aur jaldi se mera gift do...(he smiles to her and gives her a gift)...bhai main abhi kholo...

Rey :as u wish...

Neha :main abhi kholti hoon...(she unpack the gift and found a beautiful diamond pendent )...

waooo bhai its so beautiful...thank u bhai u r the best brother in the whole world...(and hugs him)

Swayam :oh hello aap dono ka agar bhai behan milap khatam hua ho...toh aap is bhai par bhi dhayan dedo...

Neha :oh bhai come...(trio hugs)
(and then a lady comes in a room and founds trio hugging)

Lady :bacho chalo jaldi...barat nikalne ka waqt ho gya hai...
All :yes maa...

(and then her eyes stops to rey and she comes near him and cup his face left side)

Ananya :kitna pyara lag rha hai mera bacha bilkul ek shezade ki tarah...(rey gave her smile and touch her feet)

Neha :ha maa aap bilkul shi keh rhi hai...bhai bohot hot lag rhe hai...bhabhi toh unhe dekh kar bilkul flat hi ho jayegi...and chukles...

Ananya :neha ye kaise shabd use kar rhi hi...hot flat...kuch sharam hai ya nhi hai...itni bhi tameez nhi hai...apne bhai k liye kaise bole jaata hai...

Neha :maa maine aisa kya kahan main toh bhai ki sirf...(rey signals her to not to speak more and )...I m sorry...

Ananya :chalo niche jaake dekho sab ready hai nhi hai thodi der main nikalna hai...(and neha left from there)

Ananya :chalo ab tum dono bhi niche ghudchari ka samye ho gya hai...(and they all left after the ghurchari the barat leaves with all the band baja)

Ghai Mansion
kriya's room...
(kriya sit on her seat waiting for taani then she hear some kids voice outside her room
kids ran from outside the her door and shouts...Baarat aa gyi baarat aa gyi her heart skip for a second her all fears coming back)
Gupta welcomes malik with all the rituls and then rey goes towards the mandap and sit there...and the pandit started chanting the mantra's...

(and after sometime kriya cames in the room her lips are swollen ,marks of tears on her face and she walks with very difficulty...kriya knows the reason behind it but shut her mouth taani cames to the dressing table...touch up her makeup and apply dark color lipstick match with saree...taani's condition added more fear in her brain...and she thinking..."agar ye bhi shivam jeeju ki tarah hue or meere saath "..."nhi nhi mera dil kehta hai wo aise nhi ho sakte"par"

ok now u guyz tell
u want me to continue this ff or not
kriti
Edited by Devil_kriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!
this is tooo good
I really loved every bit of it
I want to see how kriya is gonna
change rey
I don't want him to be like shivam
actually I want to know his reaction
wen he sees kriya in bridal Wear
Sharon ki entry kab hogi??????????

update next part soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: trueArShaian

OMG!!!!!!!!!
this is tooo good
I really loved every bit of it
I want to see how kriya is gonna
change rey
I don't want him to be like shivam
actually I want to know his reaction
wen he sees kriya in bridal Wear
Sharon ki entry kab hogi??????????

update next part soon please


thank u dear
m glad u liked it
well shron ki aise koi brief mai entry nhi hai
my main focus is on kriyansh...toh i dont think abhi kisi ko swaron moments milenge
well i dont knw mai add karungi bhi ya nhi


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriapatel

Nice story

Do update soon

thank u
i will
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u will continue from where u left na???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

u will continue from where u left na???

no i m going to post it all over again i mean from prt 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ye galat baat hai..link post kr de sb padh lenge aage continue kr na plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

ye galat baat hai..link post kr de sb padh lenge aage continue kr na plz

mujhe reponse acha aya toh 3 days mai sab parts post kar dungi jab tak new update bhi likh lungi

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