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Posted: 11 years ago
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Okay So I cant unres the previous comment for replies so I'm here with all replies together.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So here I am! I have replied to everyone in my previous comment. U can check it above this post! thanku for all likes and comments. So here goes part 4 and if anyone of u like my story and if u can, plz pass n pm the link to ur friends. and lemme know coz i want to giv u the credit for it! So thanks in advance!😊😊

Part 4

"Hey! Isn't that The St. Stephen's?" was an ordinary question by Sharon, but this name caused Kriya to widen her eyes and look around. But her eyes focused to Swayam who was now answering her query.

"Ya Shar... you remember Dean Sir informing us that its not just us who's gonna be a part of this expedition. Its one more college which would be joining us. St. Stephen's."

Holy Mother Of...!!!

Why ? I mean God must be seriously having a problem with me! Why is Lets-not-allow-Kriya-to-move-on thingy still on?

"KRIYA!"

"HUH? Yeah... Rey why the hell are you screaming my name?"

"Oh... Because I find it utterly amazing sounding name! DUH! Its the third time I am calling you and you are just lost in your own world... Are you okay?"

Ya... I am okay! Hearing the name of the college... hearing those students are gonna be here... Hearing my one trip which could probably make me come out of that thoughts... HAS FAILED! So ya I'm perfectly fine and having a ball!

"Um.. ya I'm allright. Just a bit tired with the journey."

Hmmm... Well I'm not that dumb Kriya... there is something out there making your face turn like you've just seen a mirror! I mean you've just seen a ghost! Hahaha.. Hey that's a good one!

Rey chuckled as this silly stupid joke came to his mind.

"What's so funny?"

"uh... um.. not..nothin just... Oh ya! Just saw that guy in green pants and yellow shirt and mistook him as a sunflower! Hehe.."

DUMB! This is the worst joke I must have cracked in centuries! C'mon man Rey! What's wrong with your sense of humour? But Actua... Wait what? Why is Kriya's face turning pale as she is seeing the sunflower guy? I mean he isn't that weird!

"Um... Rey I... I gotta go okay... just I... I need rest."

"Wait! Kriya jokes apart. What the hell is wrong? Please tell me before I die of curiosity."

"Rey... *sigh* see its just that..."

"Kriya! My God Is it you?" interrupted a voice between Rey and Kriya's conversation. Rey noticed this is the same sunflower guy and he knew Kriya and talked to her like he knew her from ages ago. But what was Kriya thinking?

"H.. He... Hey Ron. Yup, Its me. Whatsup?"

Ron. Rohan Malhotra. My first and only crush till today. What a fudging idiot was I! I made his notes, I dreamt about him, I hid behind the pillar and used to look at him and admire him for how handsome he was..! I even planned our wedding, honeymoon and kid's name for crying out loud!! And he? He just broke my heart thinking that I didn't deserve him! Well its not like I proposed him or something But hey! When a girl tells you she likes you, infact when a girl writes a letter to you describing her feelings, you are not supposed to burn it, Now are you?

I actually liked him a lot and it was one of the worst phase of my life when I was trying to get over him. But how can life be any fair? You had to bring him here right?

"I'm fine and totally cool. So... St. Louis haan?"

"Ya, and you St. Stephen's, just as you dreamt of"

"Ya... you see people dream a lot but do not achieve that much. Anyhow.. Look who's here. Meet her, She's my girlfriend, Lara. Lara dear, this is Kriya my... classmate."

Ya right! Classmate. This is what I meant to him. I mean why had I sang almost every Taylor Swift sad song on him. C'mon Kriya. You cannot lose yourself again. This is not a time to go weak!

But that maybe was not working. Kriya's eyes were filled with a layer of unshed tear and all she could feel was her heart breaking all over, As she saw Lara (you can imagine Lara's character as Lara in yeh Jawani hai Deewani.) With Ron. His hand around her almost bare waist and her hands on his chest when they were standing in a hugging position and looking at each other as if they were in love since birth. Just like Kriya wanted to be with him.

But it wasn't her.

It was Lara.

And her heart was on the verge of breaking all over again.

"Hey Lara."

"Hey Kriya! Oh I've heard so much about you from Ron and all your other classmates. You know sometimes when I'm sad and Ron's talking to me and telling me all about when you both were in school together and when you granny died how weak you had grown! But still you were strong enough to handle yourself! How on almost every phase of your life you've welcomed loneliness and still stood along it. You are so brave! I mean I can't even imagine a day without Ron's care and affection! He's always there for me... Aren't you Sweetheart?"

"Ofcourse I am, Honey! Anytime at your service!"

"So Kriya... Ron told me you used to believe in all love stories and stuff... Do you still believe or after what happened in school you lost your faith in it? I mean... Do you have someone with you?"

Kriya was broke with the long speech Lara gave and about how Ron had without second thoughts exposed her to Lara. Even about her love for him in school days. She wanted to leave. Leave, Rush to her room, and cry... cry for as long as she can so she chose her answer wisely.

Yes Lara I do believe in love, And it does exist. But not for me.

Perhaps this would have been her reply, but before she actually spilt these words in front of the jerks, she felt a hand crawling on her waist and pulling her close. Another hand holding her hand... holding like that hand would hold hers for a lifetime. And what she saw was rather a shock when her view rested on the owner of the hands, with a firm jaw and determined expression. She was out of her shock when she heard that person's voice, Rey's voice, calmly but seriously looking and the disgusting couple and say...

"Yes, she believes in love, Because now she's not alone. Not lonely. She has love, and its me who loves her THE MOST. A And will always be there for her. Hey, I'm Rey, Reyaansh Singhania, Kriya's boyfriend."


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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
res
Unres.

Loved it.
so finally the reason behind Kria's pain is finally out and loved the way you depicted Rey understanding Kria's unsaid words and coming to her rescue.
Well i loved the entire sequence of events.
It was a perfect chapter.
Will be waiting for the next chapter very eagerly.
Edited by arshafan94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Ahhh! I'm literally screaming right now!

How much I love you and Rey for doing this.

When that Ron and Lara (I liked that you gave someone to imagine... I'm very bad at it.) were blabbering on and on and on I so wanted Rey to say something!

I just love the way you ended it at a cliffhanger. (Yeah, I'm weird)

So eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome...

loved it...

omg... rey.. he is the best..

loved it how you described everything..

and the end of this update was amazing...

can't wait for the next part..

update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rey...yay I so love you for doing that!
That was amazing...he just new Kriya needed help and he was there

Love KR...mmm I know out of everything in the update I'm just stuck at the end...but that was how cute that moment was😊

The update was amazing...so reason behind Kriya's pain is out...She'll soon get over woth it😉

I so hated Ron and lara...their show off😡...but there was Rey to put an end to it!

Kriya's reaction after this would be interesting...update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
love your story.❤️
Haawww. so cute name blush😳
rey said he's kriya's boyfriend.curious to knowwhat happens next.
please update soon .
and if possible please pm me.
i will send you a buddy request.
xx Shannel🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Amazng part...

Ron is such a jerk...

Rey kriya 's boy friend... 😲 update soonnn

n thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Just read all the chapters
Awesome story,

Rey is so understanding&sweet

Rey becoming kriya's boyfriend, without kriya even knowing her problem.

Do update soon
Waiting eagerly for the update
do pm me when you update
I have sent you the buddy request.😊

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