|AsYa TS| I simply love Jogging! ~ *Completed*

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

Hilarious 😆

This was just simply amazing 👏

I was reading it with a silly grin on my face 😃

I agree with Asad about the early morning sleep part totally... well you know me 😛

Asad and alarms... I really at times feel like smashing mine but can't as it is my cellphone 🤔

Asad getting kicked my Najma... that part was so funny 🤣

Asad and Simba... that was simply the best... a scene to watch

Asad eyeing Zoya and opening lying to her that the dog did not scare him and she easily caught him 👍🏼

Zoya dropping Asad on scooty... the great 'AAK' on a scooty with a girl

Blushing Zoya and the sweet silly Asad... I loved their conversations 😳

Asad at home saying he loves jogging... subah toh kucch aur hi scene tha 🤪

Asad being extra sweet to Haider in office... after all uski behen par line jo marni h 😉

Zoya coming to office and AsYa ankhon hi ankhon mien baatein... wow ❤️

The last line... Asad will ask Haider directly... excited for the next part ⭐️

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Mishti

@.LilGreenRobot.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

I never imagined AAK like this 🤣

He has always been a fitness freak but he hates his morning jog here 🤣 .. I love how you carefully plan out your characters.. Very unique AAK we have here 😳

Sibling nok-jhok is always a treat to read .. I love their little fight here 😆 .. Again; very unique unlike what they showed us.. A quiet and terrified of her brother on the actual serial 😆 .. I like it 😳

Asad being chased by a dog 🤣 🤣 🤣

I love how you describe the feelings and thoughts of your characters.. 'Her smile was to die for' amazing line

I wasn't expecting this 🤣 .. Zoya is Asad's employee's sister 😲 .. You're always giving surprises in your stories 😆

Simba is such a cute name 😳 😆

The AAK riding on a scooter and that too as a passenger being given a life 🤣 🤣 .. Another shock for me 😳 This character of yours is very interesting I must say 🤣

Awww.. Asad blushing is ALWAYS cute 😳 .. ooohh now I see how you've used your title because when I started reading the story I was like; well the beginning contradicts the title but let me see what she's given us ahead 🤣 .. Very clever 😉

I've always wanted to see Najma pulling Asad's cheeks in the serial when she finds out he's in love and he blushes but it never happened Would have been such an adorable scene to watch 😳

OMG 🤣 🤣 🤣 .. The AAK acting like that with his employee only because he 'fancies' his sister 🤣 🤣 .. Ahh this is epic.. Love it!!

Looks like the odds are in his favor.. He's thinking about her and how to impress her brother then BOOM! She turns up 🤣 .. Lucky AAK.. If only Haider knew why Asad allowed someone else to interrupt a meeting like that just for a lunchbox 🤣

Was so not expecting a wink from Asad because he seemed shy at first.. Hmm he moves quite fast in these matters I see ☺️ ☺️ A wink from Zoya is something I would have expected as she has done it quite a lot of times in the serial but I didn't expect it here because of your description of her in the beginning 😆 But I love surprises..

Amazing start baby 🤗 🤗

I'm waiting to see what happens next .. I hope Haider won't be the kebab main haddi kinda guy 🤣

Update very soon please 😳

Love you xxx

Annie x

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Yeah Baby!!!! Another story.. though it's TS..

Ok now.. It's fun to various version of Asad Ahmed Khan..

and this one is hilarious.. 🤣

AAK and getting lazy for jogging?? !! 😲🤣 That's a first...

The best sleep one could get! But do people understand! Nope... NOT A CHANCE 🤣🤣

Never did I imaging jogging would be a big headache for AAK...🤣

Hahahaa Tamatar kicked her brother!! oh god!! This is getting even more fun...

Love their fight.. always love siblings fight.. (experience talks😉)🤣🤣

Finally he sets out for jogging...

He got scared of a dog and is running away?? 😲

awww... The dog was just going to it's owner.. now AAK is ogling at the owner.. who happens to be his employees' sister.. Zoya Farooqui... 😳😆

Loved how Zoya teased him about getting scared of the dog.. Oh Asad.. accept the fact.. 😉😆

So AAK on a scooty behind a girl.. surely must be a sight..

I'm loving tamatar more... She wanted to check if he was fine!! 🤣

Ohh!! can he make it more obvious..? asking Haider if he was comfortable and all..

Why don't you just say AAK.. 🤣... Haider I'm in love with your little sister😳 .. 🤣

Awww... she came to office.. and used to come before and asad is just getting to know about it..

See be a little less strict with you staff.. 🤣

He winked at her... If only Haider had seen that.. you would have become tomato ka chutney Asad.. 🤣🤣

Oh ok.. She winks back to taking him by surprise.. 🤣

Waiting to see what and how he talks to Haider,... 😳😃

Loved the Update Mimi.. 🤗

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Ressy! 😳

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Okay, so first of all I'm very irritated with you Mrins! 😡 Couldn't you ask me the shutup with whatever work I was doing all day and give this amazinggg concept a read !!!! 😡😒🤬

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Okay, where do I begin ?? ...

I Luurrveee this flirty, naughtyy, winkyy , first chance pe dance wala Asad !! ☺️ *sigh*

Love how his staff calls him AAK !! Dum hain ! 😎

Hahhahaa.. Picturing a Lazy Asad Ahmed Khan !!! 😆🤣
Next, picturing a scared Asad Ahmed Khan ? !! Woh bhi Simbuu se ?😒🤣
What follows next is even more funnayy but also the most adorable sight ! ... Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan on a scooty behind a girl !! 🤣

The brother sister kicking fighting !! Har din ka chalu rehta hai mere ghar pe ! 🤣.. Loved how Tamatar kicked his ass ! And Dilshad's always Adorbs !! 😳😃

Hello to Haider pehle baar, and sister seedha cabin mein ! Waah !! Love the quickness !! 😃👍🏼
And then Bhai ke saamne behan ko aankh maarna !! Masha'allah !! Subhanallah !! Yeh hui na baath !! I likeyy !!! And Zoya toh hhai hi rockingg !! ⭐️

Waiittingg for the next parrtt !!!

And , I'm sure I'll want a SR for them , theyre both so naughty and sexyy !! ☺️☺️

Zabardasti ka lauv toy you !! ❤️🤗

Chans ! 😳

Edited by mona12345 - 11 years ago

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

cute and naughty update...

just say it had mrinalini trademark .. writing...

will be waiting for the next part...😳😳😳

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marcoe

@marcoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

Omfg

I just loved it

Asya r always so adorable, aren't they?

Continue soon

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aYASHIKA

@aYASHIKA

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful stry dear...
Aww...I love this catefree, flirty , naughty and lazy asad 😳
He is such a Mr. Lazy asad ahmad khan 😆
He is scared of the dog and is running like a maniac 😆
Asad is mesmerized by zoya beauty..
Asad ahmed khan on scooty behind zoya 🤣
Zoya smiled at asad and is jogging felt complete 😃
He was kicked on his ass by his baby sister 🤣
Al his staff members call him AAK..
Oye hoyye asad is full latoo over zoya. .
Lovely..
Update soon

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

unress

awsome story&awsome start

Najma kicked Asad's ass
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Asad scared of doggy
🤣🤣🤣
It was smtng new
AsYa part was amazing

well I love it

CONTINUE SOON

Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago