T2 FF :Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi...Discont note on page 134 - Page 63

Originally posted by: kannu_m

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I m new and don't know much about dis forum..i would like to ask whether i have to comment on thread 1 chapter in thread 1 or can comment on all chapters in thread 2...
sorry for bothering u

Anything you wish..😆

hey due to time constrain( my exams r starting from next week and taking MBA coaching) i m writing a single comment
instead of commenting for each chapter separately
hope u don't mind
wonderful story
beautifully written
loved it..
now today finally i read it in a go...
you have defined every Character brilliantly
very heart touching...
loved sam and riya bonding
d convo of riya and sam was wonderfully written
n the way sam handles her is too good

Arjun-Aayesha friendship is great
Awww Samsha moments were really so wonderful.
Loved ariya dance sequence
loved d scene were arjun hold riya's ring to feel her
new character vishal, wow... I loved him. He realy care for riya
poor vishal i really felt bad for him
Arjun's behavior is confusing
Arjun has made every thing really complicated for everyone
Ariya's awkwardness, insecurities were described very well...
You portrayed ariya very well
can't believe riya aborted her own child just to prove her father and world
now she is regretting her mistake...
won't say only riya was at fault..arjun to was at fault
Both Arjun-Riya were equally wrong...
now the story is at a point where arjun, riya and sakshi all r going through pain..
hope Ariya soon get over all their issues and pains
Sakshi is not at fault at all n still she will get hurt..
Arjun does not love sakshi he only try to find solace in Sakshi
sakshi avoiding arjun and he trying to talk to her
her outburst were justified
Arjun must clarify everything before something big happens...
Missed parts in between,the pm update ones...
plzzz pm d links of chapters 15,16,21 and 27

awesome updates..
loving ur story..
I'm ok with arjun reaction as what he feels that he shouldvfirst tell his past to sakshi parents then.only to. go further with the relation..
but sakshi anger was equally justified.. as she fell.betrayed...
update soon..

Have replied to all your comments in the earlier posts..please do check if you please...😳

the teaser for the update will be given in the next post but before that one small note...😳

recently i have been making mistakes while sending pms...i know i missed some readers...sorry for that...😳

i have finally taken time to make a list of my regular readers and also cleared my buddy list of unwanted buddies...so hope these mistakes would be reduced...😳

thank you for still motivating me with such wonderful comments...they always help me write the next updates...😳

now scroll down for the teaser..😃

Teaser for Chapter 28


'I understand now sir,' Sameer said,

'get it done as soon as possible Rathore, Riya is here only today, she would leave tomorrow morning,' Commisioner instructed,

'it will be done sir,' rathore agreed and nodded at Riya, who replied with dimpled smile and small nod.

Sameer stood up to leave. Riya was stealing glances at Arjun, but he kept a stern face, occasionally nodding at Sameer sometimes. Neither he gave a look at her, nor spoke a word. But she knew well, he had registered her danger in his mind well. They left the commisioner's office in silence, only Arjun knew the storm, brewing inside him.

Days flew by and Riya was continuing her mission well. She usually contacted Sameer. On a rare occasion she had once contacted Arjun, when the channel to Sameer wasn't working properly.

Arjun had felt her voice tremble thrice while giving him the details and his instincts said it wasn't the weakness towards him. She was in real danger. He had asked her, but she laughed it away. He didn't probe again but it kept bothering him.

Another few more days passed without any contact from Riya. They was worried and tried to contact her when Sameer received a call from someone, who informed about her. Riya was injured and needed a hospital urgently. Arjun and Sameer rushed to the spot mentioned and found Riya lying alone on a bench, unconscious and bleeding.

the complete update will be send in your inbox within couple of minutes...😳

Awesum tesear. Cant decide to whom i support ariya or arakshi. All r right at their place updt ch asap.

Awesome update
Loved it
Each and every emotion was beautifully written
Well so this is how the relation between Arjun and Sakshi started
the last part was funny😆
waiting for the next part
continue soon
thanks for the PM

Awesome update! 👏

Thanks for the pm n update
Sakshi saw the broken things and underatood
Sakshi still has feelings on arjun
Ayesha n arjun talk is nice
Sam n auesha moments are sweet
Loved how arjun teased both