My Poem about Mahabharata - NEW POEM ON PAGE 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My little poem -

Bheeshma sikhaye humko, bhaveeshya jaane bagair kabhi naa karna koi vaada,
Karna kahe, mitra chuno man chaha, par mat modo dharm se apna naata..

Shakuni samjhaye, mat rakho badle ki koi kaamna apne mann,
jo bhasm karde har ek nirdosh jann.
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Dhritarshtra Sujhaye, mat aasu bahao apne hee dushkarmo par..
Gandhaari kahe, aankhein kholo, mat baandhon pattiyan samajh ke paapi karmo par..
Kunti bataaye, kaarya karne se pehle dhyaan do uske parinaamo par..

Abhimanyu dikhaaye , ardh gyaan agyaan se bhi hota hai bada ghatak,

Shri Krishna muskuraye aur kahe, karm karo nirantar, mat rakho koi aas phal ki ant tak..



English Meaning

Bheeshma teaches never promise anyone anything, as you don't know what the future beholds,

Karna says, you may choose your friend as per your wishes but it should never make you n leave your righteous duties forlorn.


Shakuni explains, never make revenge plunge so deep into your heart that it makes other innocent die in its Ash.


Dhritarshtra displays that there is no point in crying after your sins..

Gandhari teaches us not to deliberately make a blind eye towards the unrighteousness that happen in the society.

Kunti says, never act without thinking about its future implications,


Abhimanyu demonstrates that half knowledge is even more dangerous than ignorance.


Shri Krishna Smiles and preaches that keep doing your righteous duties without thinking about what you will gain from it.



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RisingPhoenix thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey your poem is really very very nice😊
Keep it up👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks you very much ..it means a lot 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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English translation anyone..please.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sure I will do it just for you in English
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Originally posted by: lovesunshine

Sure I will do it just for you in English

Aww...thank you dear. You are really sweet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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English Meaning

Bheeshma teaches never promise anyone anything, as you don't know what the future beholds,

Karna says, you may choose your friend as per your wishes but it should never make you n leave your righteous duties forlorn.


Shakuni explains, never make revenge plunge so deep into your heart that it makes other innocent die in its Ash.


Dhritarshtra displays that there is no point in crying after your sins..

Gandhari teaches us not to deliberately make a blind eye towards the unrighteousness that happen in the society.

Kunti says, never act without thinking about its future implications,


Abhimanyu demonstrates that half knowledge is even more dangerous than ignorance.


Shri Krishna Smiles and preaches that keep doing your righteous duties without thinking about what you will gain from it.



Edited by lovesunshine - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Your poem is really good, do keep writing. And PM me whenever you write another poem again. All the characters of mahabharat do teach us something or other which is worth learning and you have expressed the teachings of every character very well. Keep on writing such poems.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks I will sure keep writing ..

Mahabharata is my passion..I will keep writing about it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesunshine

English Meaning

Bheeshma teaches never promise anyone anything, as you don't know what the future beholds,

Karna says, you may choose your friend as per your wishes but it should ever make you n leave your righteous duties forlorn.


Shakuni explains, never make revenge plunge so deep into your heart that it makes other innocent die in its Ash.


Dhritarshtra displays that there is no point in crying after your sins..

Gandhari teaches us not to deliberately make a blind eye towards the unrighteousness that happen in the society.

Kunti says, never act without thinking about its future implications,


Abhimanyu demonstrates that half knowledge is even more dangerous than ignorance.


Shri Krishna Smiles and preaches that keep doing your righteous duties without thinking about what you will gain from it.



Such a beautiful piece of fine writing dear. Keep it up! And do write more poems.

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