My Poem about Mahabharata - NEW POEM ON PAGE 3 - Page 2

nice poem, but it's kind a smalll, mahabharat ke sabhi paatra kuch sikhaati hain humein,
draupadi kehti, sankat ho kitnaa bhi gambhir vikaraal, mat chodo aas, kyun ki swayam eeshwar hain tumhaari dhaal, bas, kevaal sachche man praarthanaa karni ki hain baat.
bheem kehtaa, kabhi bhi paapion ko mat karnaa kshamaa, kyun ke unke man mein pashchataap ki bhavaanaa bhi nahi aati.
arjun kehtaa, chod do sab kuch uspe, banegi us se sab bigdi baat, tumhaaraa kaam hain keval kartaavya nibhaaate jaanaa.

Originally posted by: Arijit007

nice poem, but it's kind a smalll, mahabharat ke sabhi paatra kuch sikhaati hain humein,
draupadi kehti, sankat ho kitnaa bhi gambhir vikaraal, mat chodo aas, kyun ki swayam eeshwar hain tumhaari dhaal, bas, kevaal sachche man praarthanaa karni ki hain baat.
bheem kehtaa, kabhi bhi paapion ko mat karnaa kshamaa, kyun ke unke man mein pashchataap ki bhavaanaa bhi nahi aati.
arjun kehtaa, chod do sab kuch uspe, banegi us se sab bigdi baat, tumhaaraa kaam hain keval kartaavya nibhaaate jaanaa.

yes arijit, but it is a reason I took these selected characters..and have left out the pandavas and the draupadi..

The above from my poem are the main pillars , as because of their acts the great war was fought..excluding abhimanyu...

i have included him because he passes a strong message..n also when I was writing this, I was in the abhimanyu mode..

It's a very nice poem dear even I have some ideas to express about mahabharat characters because this is a great epic where there is devotion,strength,sacrifice and everything else .i will start from the panda as.please guys sorry but whatever is in my heart I wanna express so it's gonna be kind of long.yudisthir he knew what was dharma but he considered himself to be bound by dharma which was his mistake. For the sake of that same dharma he put his brothers and draupadi at stake which he did not wanna do so in a way he had a big hand in the war and the death of all their dear ones including the uppandavas and abhimanyu. And then when we talk about behemoth and Arjun they were never bounded by dharma but were bounded by the love of his brothers which became a reason for their weakness but they proved to be their greatest strength during the last stages of the war.nakul and sahadev the twins,they were always kind hearted and intelligent all five were really brave but their own mistake became the reason for the death of their sons and nieces. So it was a painful victory for the pandavas. Then talking about draupadi well her name always brings thoughts of sacrifice.firstly when she was born from the yang a she was not accepted by her father,she wanted to marry Arjun but was divided among the pandavas,she wanted honour but got a huge insult,she wanted to shower all her love on her sons but lost all during the war which in fact happened for her insult and to seek revenge but this war brought nothing but pain for her. Abhimanyu another great warrior well I think he was the one who really made himself immortal in the history.he could not see his son even once he was just 16 when he was killed in war especially at the time Uttara was pregnant. His son parish it could not get the love of his father.uttara lost her brothers father and finally her dear husband whom she loved a lot. Subadhra lost her only son abhimanyu.how deep must have been the deadly memories of the war. So in a way even kauri as cannot be blamed they were never advised by their parents since childhood only hatred grew in their minds causing their death too.i think mahabharat is an epic which everybody must see hear read or listen.its great and it's heart breaking.

yes you are correct dear one thing led to the other and all this happened..

Mahabharat I think is the forewarning of the almighty of what the people of kalyug will be facing..

Cousins killing each other for property, family monye- its happening in abundance today

unjust government and rulers - yes this is also happening.

Women getting raped and molested

Big wars and people killing each other - look at World war 1 and 2 , 9/11 and other terror attacks happending toay .

the problem is that no one took god's forewarning seriously.

Hey Thanks Diala.

The characters that I chose for this poem were specifically selected.

a lot of literarure is there about the pandavs and draupadi etc..

I just wanted focus about these ones only..

But I will surely write something about others.

Hey do tell me whenever you a new poem or post😃

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

Hey do tell me whenever you a new poem or post😃

Sure and I still have to read yur stories ..just got caught up with work..I will read them all together and let you know😃

Binti sunlo morey Brij Bihari,
Prithvi ho gayi hai ab Trahi Trahi |

Dharm toh sabhi chun rahe hai apna vibhinn,
Karm nahi koi samjhta saccha apna lekin |

Prithvi ke ek tukde ke liye har roz hota hai maha yuddha yahan par,
van-van, jan-jan jal rahe hai, prati din yahan par |

Cheer sambhaalaa tha Yagyaseni ka kisi din aapne,
Ab toh har naari ka cheer hai kisi drushta ke haath mein |

Jis samaaj ko samjhaaya aapne geeta saar,
Wohi samaaj ab maan raha hai usey mithya aur bekaar |

Raaj paath hai ab adharmiyo ke haath mein,
Dharti ro rahi apne har ek swaas mein |

Ab toh aa jaao phir se O Murli Manohar,
Pattharo mein khoj rahe hai bhakt aapko har pal ||

Bas nahi jiya jaata Pruthvi par ab,
Nahi kisiko parvaah yaha prani, pashu ya manushya gan ki,
Ab bas aa jaao, karlo naash aur vidhwans, bankar kalki , bankar kalki , bankar kalki ||


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Fabulous
Awesome dear.
So very true. Everyone should get the message. Its very well written.
You are the best hindi poet and this is my favorite poem from today.
Keep on writing. 😃