Proposition *Randhir-Vidushi OS*

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Okay, so before I'm bombarded with jootas, chappals, bricks, bats and brickbats, I'll tell you I am NOT going to accept them. No, no tomatoes and eggs and any of the food items either. Unless you give me chocolate, of course.

But. I am intrigued by these two. Is that a crime? I don't think so.
And this is just a simple non-platonic, non-romantic OS. Drabble, more like. And it's not even physical, huh. So I personally don't see anything wrong with it.

So, that's that with the clearing up of stuff. On to the oneshot!

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Proposition



"No."


"No?"


"You heard me."


"Are you telling me, Mr. Shekhawat, that you are declining my proposition?"


"Yes."


"And why, may I know that?"


"Because you are what you are."


"Indeed. And may I know, what I am?"


"A scheming and manipulative woman."


"Ah, that is correct. But you are passing up an offer to destroy Sanyukta Agarwal, just because I'm a scheming and manipulative woman?"


"..."


"I'll take that as a 'yes', Mr. Shekhawat, but I'm still not satisfied. You have done so much to publicly humiliate Sanyukta Agarwal, in fact, more than I'd ever have done alone, made so many attempts to shut down her company too, and yet you refuse my offer of working together to annihilate her, simply because I'm a bitch?"


"I did not call you a bitch."


"Oh, but you meant it. Do not take me for a fool, Mr. Shekhawat. I am the owner of the company second only to your own, after all. I've worked hard to get it to where it is now. And believe me, it's my scheming and manipulation skills that have come in handy. So do not doubt me and my powers, Mr. Shekhawat. I can help you destroy Sanyukta Agarwal so much easily than you will be able to alone."


"My answer is still a 'no'."


"Oh really? I wonder if the rumour about you and Sanyukta Agarwal hooking up is true, after all?"


"There is no such rumour."


"Oh? But there might just be."


"Would you dare to do such a thing, Miss Kumar?"


She raised an eyebrow.


"My proposition still stands, Mr. Shekhawat. I'd rather you think about it carefully."


"Miss Kumar, you're-"


"Mrs. Kumar hyphen Kashyap, Mr. Shekhawat. The sooner you get used to it, the better. I'm getting married next month."


And with that, she walked out of the office, chin up and smirk on. The sound of her heels clacking still seemed to echo in his ears long after she was gone.

***

So. That's that.
Reviews would be major wala love, really.

Indebted,
Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RES 1st!

Originally posted by: NonComposMentis

Okay, so before I'm bombarded with jootas, chappals, bricks, bats and brickbats, I'll tell you I am NOT going to accept them. No, no tomatoes and eggs and any of the food items either. Unless you give me chocolate, of course.
But. I am intrigued by these two. Is that a crime? I don't think so.
And this is just a simple non-platonic, non-romantic OS. Drabble, more like. And it's not even physical, huh. So I personally don't see anything wrong with it.

So, that's that with the clearing up of stuff. On to the oneshot!

Hiii! My name is Kri... and I am a huge silent fan of yours... I am extremely sorry that I haven't been able to reply... in fact... this has been lingering for quite some time in my head... BUT I didn't have the link to this bookmarked... I tried looking for it... but in vain... about twenty minutes ago I remembered the Title name: Proposition... searched it on google... and found it! I AM SOOO HAPPY THAT I DID. I know you asked me long time ago to unres... and I am extremely sorry for that... but I wanted to let you know how incredibly you write and would love to read more of your works... Anyways... enough of my reviewers note (yes... I have a reviewers note because I am probably the most intense reviewer you've heard of... hahaha! it's okay... you don't have to worry... I have always been this weird.) Anyways!!! Let's get to reviewing... I like to analyze rhetorical devices and meanings of certain things... so uhm. I hope you like analysis on your works 😲 ... okay... enough of my crap! LET'S GET TO REVIEWING!

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Proposition



"No."


"No?"


"You heard me."


"Are you telling me, Mr. Shekhawat, that you are declining my proposition?"


"Yes."


"And why, may I know that?"


"Because you are what you are."


"Indeed. And may I know, what I am?"


"A scheming and manipulative woman."


"Ah, that is correct. But you are passing up an offer to destroy Sanyukta Agarwal, just because I'm a scheming and manipulative woman?"

I automatically knew it was Vidushi... and I love her..."manipulative-ness" in here...

"..."


"I'll take that as a 'yes', Mr. Shekhawat, but I'm still not satisfied. You have done so much to publicly humiliate Sanyukta Agarwal, in fact, more than I'd ever have done alone, made so many attempts to shut down her company too, and yet you refuse my offer of working together to annihilate her, simply because I'm a bitch?"

I love it... I love her frank reply... She is trying to find the real reason ... and by doing so, she's gonna lay everything out so he realizes that she's not dumb.

"I did not call you a bitch."


"Oh, but you meant it. Do not take me for a fool, Mr. Shekhawat. I am the owner of the company second only to your own, after all. I've worked hard to get it to where it is now. And believe me, it's my scheming and manipulation skills that have come in handy. So do not doubt me and my powers, Mr. Shekhawat. I can help you destroy Sanyukta Agarwal so much easily than you will be able to alone."

I loveee this. It sort of reminds me of Maya now... at this time, we didn't have the character Maya even... but it seems like the CVS have read this and made an older version of a sly Vidushi... even though I want Vids to change for the better... I like her character.

"My answer is still a 'no'."


"Oh really? I wonder if the rumour about you and Sanyukta Agarwal hooking up is true, after all?"


"There is no such rumour."


"Oh? But there might just be."


"Would you dare to do such a thing, Miss Kumar?"


She raised an eyebrow.


"My proposition still stands, Mr. Shekhawat. I'd rather you think about it carefully."

HAHAHA! I love it... the way she will make him listen to her. PERF. She infers that she can create a rumor.

"Miss Kumar, you're-"


"Mrs. Kumar hyphen Kashyap, Mr. Shekhawat. The sooner you get used to it, the better. I'm getting married next month."

WHAT A REPLY!👏 I bet everyone reading this must have been like😲. hahaha! But... her crisp-ness just seems refreshing... and I think that's why I love her character sooo much!


And with that, she walked out of the office, chin up and smirk on. The sound of her heels clacking still seemed to echo in his ears long after she was gone.

***

So. That's that.
Reviews would be major wala love, really.

Indebted,
Mugs.


Anywaysss! I gave you my review... I hope you aren't angry that I didn't review faster... but I am super sorry! SOOO! anyways... uhm! yeah! I love your work...so you should PM all that you do and have a really awesome Sandhir/Sadda Haq/ Vidarth (all in one) index! yes... okay. I am going to go! Byeee!

By the way... I take pride in reserving first til this date...your works are precious!

Love, Kri!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was something new and absolutely delightful !!
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Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

This was something new and absolutely delightful !!


Thank you! :)
I'm glad you liked it.

Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is an interesting story. Would love to see it developed further
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Originally posted by: U-No-Who

This is an interesting story. Would love to see it developed further


Why, thank you! :)
But, since this is a one shot, I won't be continuing this. I do have more to write on Randhir-Vidushi, though.
I can't see them in a romantic or a platonic light, personally, but I do see them like this.
Oh, and getting physical too, yes.

But thank you so much for reading and commenting! :D

Mugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry for taking so long to review!
Firstly, my Vidarth sensors went Haywire at the implied Vidarth.
Kumar-Kashup!!!!! HAWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tell me more!

And then, the simplicity and effectiveness of this piece...just wow!
Too wonderful,
Here's a bar of candy for writing this sweetness!
Love,
Ash
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hehe!
vidharth is the best part of it...
well written
love
snigdha.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a different concept!
i liked it!
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This was so different from the usual, I think that's probably why I liked it so much.
I don't see Vidushi and Randhir as a couple (Eww, no). But everytime I see those two on screen together, it's intruging to see them who are different, yet somewhere smiliar.
If you plan on writing more on them, I would love to read that!

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