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WoW! What a beautiful read it was. They way your write makes each and every scene interesting to read. You vocabulary, your writing skills are just outstanding!
Why are you wasting your talent here? You should have been an official writer. Write books and publish them. đ
' She would always be the wife and he would be her husband, and they'd push around their little kid in a stroller around the neighbourhood arm in arm. '
AWWW â¤ď¸
' And I also felt bad for killing her imaginary brother, whoever he was. '
HAHAHAHAHAH! Pagal Zain. đ
' The 7 year old boy who used to hate playing "house" but would never let anyone else be her husband. '
Stupid guy! He loved her from this point and he took forever to realise.
' "Well, were you going to say no?" He asked her with a 'are you for real' look on his face.
"No but-" '
Lolz! Aliya đ¤Ł
' As his lips made love to hers '
This is my favourite line from the whole TS. â¤ď¸
' "She isn't allowed to be friends with boys." Zain exclaimed. '
HAHAHAH! Zain turned into a possessive father. I likey. đ
He forgot that he too was Aliya's "best friend" in childhood. đ
Awesome TS dear. Loved reading it.
Please do write more. Your work is worth reading. đ
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