DANGEROUS ISHQ...updated last pt 70 on pg 99 nov 23 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the story
Interesting intro
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Intersting. ..congrats for new ff...

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Congrats for the New Story👏👏 Its so lovely and interesting😳 waiting for the update
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Part - 1

Geet is in trouble...haan Geet Handa bahut badi musibat mein hai...

Aaj Geet bahut pareshaan hai...

Geet sochthi hai...hare babaji!... hamesha mere saath hi aaisa kyun hotha?

What's my fault? I just wanted Sam to be happy...

How dare that MSK comes inbetween their friendship?

Geet is really worried about Sam and all thanks to MSK...Geet curses her fate and blames Maan for her troubles...yes, MSK is the cause for Geet's problems...

Geet toh ab MSK ki galthi ko sudaarne ke liye hi jaa rahi hai...

Galthi MSK kartha aur bechari Geet fasjaathii...

Lagtha hai ab ye MSK hummari pyaari Geet ko chain se jeene nahi dega...

Achcha hua ki kam se kam Dev Geet ko samajtha...

Kahin Dev bhi Sameera ki tarah Geet ko galat samajtha toh Geet kya kar sakthi?...

Dev knows that Geet is not at fault...it's just a misunderstanding deliberately created by Maan...

Geet doesn't care about Maan, she is only concerned about Sam's anger...

Sameera Geet ki best friend hai...nahi thi?...nahi abhi bhi hai?...

Geet ko kuch samaj mein nahi aatha ki itne achche dhost hokke bhi Sam ko kaise Geet pe itna sa bhi barosa nahi hai?

Geet Sam ke boyfriend ko usse kaise cheenegi?

Woh bhi Sam ki b'day party mein Geet aaisa tamasha kyun kada karegi?

Sam had just revealed her love for Maan only to Geet and is yet to confess her love...

Aur Geet achche se jaanthi thi ki Sam ussi din Maan se baat bhi karnewali thi...apne pyaar ko confess karnewali thi...aur kitna kush thi? Geet uss kushi ko kaise cheen sakthi?

Sam ne aaise kaise socha? Geet kabhi bhi aaise nahi karegi? Haina babaji?

Woh bhi jab Geet Dev se pyaar karthi hai, woh kissi aur ke barein mein kyun sochegi?

Sam too knows about Dev and even then she thinks that Geet would betray her?

Maan has gone mad or he is trying to turn Geet mad...

Waise Geet ko ye Maan bilkul pasand nahi hai...pura ka pura Dhust danav, haina babaji?

Mein usske saath? Chiii, ye Sam aaise kaise soch sakthi?

Mujhe toh pehle hi Sam ko warn karna chahiye tha...uss Maan pe barosa mat karo, haina babaji?

Ye Dev wahan Maan ke jagah Geet ke saath hotha toh ye sab nahi hotha...

Par Maan ne toh Dev ko aane ka moka hi nahi diya tha...

Sam ne Dev ko pehle dekha bhi nahi hai...

Geet Sam ko Dev se ek bar milathi toh sara confusion katam ho jayega...

Shayad Dev se millkhe aur Dev ke bathon ko sunkke Sam bhi Geet ko samaj jayegi?

Geet yahi umeed lekhe Sam se milne jaa rahi hai, Dev ke saath...

Ab Geet Dev ke madat se sab kuch teek karegi...

Dev nahi hotha toh patha nahi Geet kya karthi?

As Geet keeps thinking Dev is worried by her troubled face...

What happened to her innocent smile?

Kahan kho gayi meri pyaari chulbuli Geet?

Dev looks at Geet...

Geet is still lost in her thoughts...

Sameera ki b'day party Geet ko bar bar yaad aakke pareshaan karthi...

Sare galthiyan toh ussi din hue the...

Patha nahi Maan ne aaisa kyun kiya Geet ke saath?

Par bechara Maan kya kartha?

Jab bhi Geet samne hothi toh Maan se koi na koi galthi ho hi jaathi...haina?

She disturbs him so much...

But Maan has been following Sam...Maan is always seen wherever Sam is...he has been like a shadow of Sam...right behind her...

Sam was irritated by this in the beginning but later on she started liking it...

Being stalked by MSK...

It's always nice to have someone special so concerned and caring...

And if that someone happens to be MSK, then no girl would complain, isn't it?

Maybe Geet is jealous of Sam ?

How could he ignore Geet, the Geet Handa...

Geet aaise nahi sochthi...Geet sochthi hai ki,Nahi...mujhe uss DD se kya matlab?

Maan has no business with Geet...haina babaji?

Waise Geet ko pehle hi Maan pe shak tha...

Sameera samne hothi toh Maan ek minute bhi Sam se nazar nahi hatatha...

He just keeps looking at her, his eyes follow her wherever she goes...

Sam ko hi gurkke rehtha...sab ko lagtha tha ki Maan Sam ko bahut chahatha hai...

Geet ko bhi pehle aaise hi laga tha...

Par Maan ke saath thode din rehne ke badh Geet ko patha chala ki Maan kitne bada Dhust danav hai...

Kabhi bhi Geet Maan ke saath akhela hothi ya sam kahin chale jaathi toh...Maan Dhust Danav banjaatha...jab ussko patha chaltha ki Sam nahi hai aur woh kahin bahar gayi hai apne Dad ke saath toh... achanak Maan ke nigayeen Geet ko doondhne lagthe hai...

Aur aaise gurtha ki Geet kabhi usse nazar nahi mila pathi...

Geet iss barein mein Sam se baat karne hi wali thi...

Lekhin Sam toh bahut kush thi...ussko laga ki Maan sirf ussko pyaar kartha...

Sam bhi Maan ko chahane lagi...aur Sam ussi din Maan ko apne mann ki baat bathanewali thi...

She had decided to accept his love...

Aakhir kitne din woh bhi Maan ko avoid kar sakthi?

Koi bhi ladhki Maan ko na nahi keh sakthi, Geet bhi ye jaanthi hai...

Aakhir Maan hai hi itna hot and handsome...haina?

Sam ko chodo, Khanna uncle ne toh apni beti se zyada Maan pe barosa kiya tha...

khanna uncle ne Maan ko kitne freedom diya tha...

jab chahe hummare apartment aasaktha...Jaise woh Sam ki mangetar ho?

Uncle toh ussko apne damad ki tarah hi treat karthe...

Maan jo bhi kehtha Uncle maanjaathe...

Uncle ke naam lekhe Maan sab ko order karthe rehtha, specially Geet ko hamesha hukkum karthe rehtha ki ye mat karo woh mat karo..haina?

Mein kya usski gulam hoon?

Woh toh sirf Sam ke paison se pyaar kartha tha?

Nahi, usse toh uncleji ki karodon rupyon ki business pe nazar hai...

Kam se kam mujhe Sam ki zindagi ko toh bachana chahiye...

Warna Sam uss badmaash gunde se shadhi karkke dhoka khayegi...

Ye Maan Sam ko shadhi kartha toh Sam ki zindagi barbad ho jayegi...haina babaji?

Ab tak toh Sam ko bhi patha chalna chahiye ki Maan kitna kamina hai?

Lekhin Sam toh mujhpe hi shak karthi hai...apne best friend pe!

Ye Maan kya utna mahaan hai?

Ab toh sab mujhko hi galat samajthe hai...

Babaji aapko patha haina ki kaun gunegar hai?

Aap jaldhi usske asli chehre ko sabke samne laoge, mujhe patha hai, haina babaji?

Geet aaise soch soch ke bahut pareshaan ho rahi hai...

Dev bhi uskko sawaal karkke aur pareshaan nahi karna chahatha...

Dev ko patha hai ki Geet kitni innocent hai...

Dev ne Geet se promise kiya hai ki kal Dev usski sare problems ko katam karega...jaise bhi...

Raat bahut ho gayi...

Abhi bhi Chandigarh pohunchne mein 100km bakhi hai...

Dev ko lagtha hai ki abhi unkko kahin rukhkke thoda aaram karna chahiye...

Itne raat ko Chandigarh jaakke kya karenge?

Lagtha hai ki ye koi choti shehar hai, yahan rehne ka jagah asaani se miljayega...

Waise Geet bhi bahut tak gayi hai...

Aaise soch soch ke kahin pagal na ho jaye?

Ussko bhi thoda aaram karna padega...

Dev: Geet

Geet abhi bhi apne khayaalon mein hi rehthi...

Dev stops the car...

Dev shakes her shoulder...

Dev: Geet

Geet turns and looks...

Geet: hum aagaye?

Dev: nahi

Geet: phir gadhi kyun rokhdhi tumne?

Dev: Geet, ab raat bahut ho gaya, aur tumne subhe se teek se khaya bhi nahi

Geet : mujhe bhook nahi hai

Dev: Geet, aaise soch soch ke apne aapko itna takleef kyun dethi ho?

Geet: par mein kya kar sakthi?

Dev: jo bhi hua, ussme teri koi galthi nahi hai

Geet: lekhin kissi ko bhi mere upar viswaas nahi hai

Dev.: mujhe hai Geet...

Geet smiles...

Dev: mein jaantha hoon ki tum aaisa kabhi nahi kar sakthi, waise ye toh meri galthi hi hai

Geet: tumne kya kiya? Ye toh uss Maan ki galthi hai

Dev: agar mein tujhe akhele chodkke nahi jaatha toh ye sab nahi hotha

Geet: tumne jaan boochke toh aaisa nahi kya na? aur meinne bhi ussko rokhne ki kitni koshish ki? Lekhin woh mantha hi nahi

Dev: mujhe toh pehle se hi uss Maan kuch achcha aadmi nahi laga

Geet: mujhe bhi patha hai, lekhin mein kya karthi? Koi mere baat ko manthe hi nahi

Dev: tum fikar mat karo, sab teek ho jayega

Geet: lekhin kaise?

Dev: mein hoona? Mein sabko teek kardhoonga

Geet: ab toh tum hi mere aakhri umeed ho dev

Dev: mein kal jaise bhi Sameera ko sare sachayi bathakke uss Maan ki asli chehre ko sabke samne laoonga

Geet: kash sab aaisa hi ho jaise tum kehthe ho

Dev: tum fikar mat karo Geet, iss bar koi galthi nahi hogi

Geet: tumme bhook lagi hai toh tum kuch khalo, mein yahi wait karthi hoon

Dev: nahi, mein dubara tumme aaise akhele chodkke nahi jaanewala hoon, ek din nahi khatha toh mein mar nahi jaatha

Geet: Dev, aaise mat kaho

Dev: Geet, tum bahut dari hui ho

Geet: mein nahi chahathi ki mere wajhe se tum bhi kissi mushkil mein fusjao

Dev: mein tumme aaise nahi dekh saktha Geet

Geet: chalo mein bhi aathi hoon, hum kuch khalethe hai

They go and have dinner at a dabha...

Though Geet orders food she couldn't have it...

She has lost her apetite since this problem started...

She has been questioning herself what went wrong with her that night...

What made her lose her mind that time?

Was it her fault?

No...it's all Maan's fault...

He forced Geet into it...haina babaji?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part...I think maan is in love with geet not sam...he was just roaming around sam to be with geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice ud
wat Maan did
Geet pori ud main Maan ko kos rahi thi
i think Maan using sam to come close to geet
he loves Geet not Sam
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice part
loved it
update next soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ab yeh kya confusion hai lagtha hai maan ne sam ko use kiya geet ke paas aane keliye aur party mein shayad geet ne haan bhi kehdiya hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update!!!!!
what did maan do?????
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Part - 2

After a while...

Geet keeps satring her plate...

She tries hard to swallow the food but couldn't...

Something stops her...

Dev looks at her and is worried...

Dev: Geet, tumne kuch bhi kaya nahi?

Geet just smiles...

Her lips smile while her heart is still aching...

How could Dev expect her to be normal?

Dev: kam se kam ye lassi toh piyo Geet

Geet has a little lassi...

Geet: toh chalein?

Dev: Geet, hum aadi raat ko Chandigarh jaakke kya karenge? Koi lodge bhi khula nahi hoga

Geet: toh?

Dev: mein soch raha tha ki yahi kahin rukh jaathe, kal subha jaldhi utkke Chandigarh chale jaathe hai

Geet: lekhin yahan kaise?

Dev: yahan nahi buddu, koi paaswale lodge mein rukh jaathe hai

Geet: teek hai, tum bhi itne dhoor drive karkke tak gaye ho

Dev: mein teek hoon, lekhin tum bahut tak gayi ho

Geet: haan, kal se teek se so bhi nahi payi

Dev: Geet, tum aaise hi sochthe rahi toh aaj bhi nahi sopayegi, meinne kaha na, mein sab kuch teek kardhoonga, waise Sam ko jab patha chahlega ki tum mujhse pyaar karthi ho toh Sam apne aap samaj jayegi ki kal ki iccident mein tummari koi galthi nahi hai

Geet: aur uss Maan ke barein mein bhi patha chaljayega, pehle uncle ko bathana hai ki Maan kaisa uncleji ke samne achche honne ki natak kar raha hai aur unko hi dokha deraha hai

Dev: haan Geet

Geet: Dev, dekho wahan koi hotel hai

Dev: haan

Dev stops the car...

Geet: chalein?

Dev: par Geet ye bahut gandha lagtha hai, hum kahin aur jaathe hai

Geet: mujhe toh aaisa nahi lagtha?

Dev: nahi, mein tujhe aaise jagah mein rehne nahi desaktha

Geet: teek hai, dekhthe hai ki koi aur jagah miltha hai kya? Nahi toh yahi wapas aathe hai, mujhe koi problem nahi hai, tum mere saath haina?

Dev: mujhpe itna barosa?

Geet: haan, kyunki jab sab mujhpe shak karthe hai tum hi ek ho jo mujhpe itna barosa karthe ho, haina?

Dev smiles...

Dev: Geet, patha hai ki teri problem kya hai?

Geet: kya?

Dev: tum kissi pe bhi asaani se barosa karthi ho

Geet: nahi nahi, mujhe toh uss Maan ko dekhthe hi patha chal gaya ki ye achcha aadmi nahi hai

Dev: achcha?

Geet: ye mein bar bar uss Maan ke barein mein kyun sochthi?

Dev: ye toh galat baat hai Geet, mere hothe hue bhi tum ussko yaad karthi ho?

Geet: Dev?

Dev laughs...

Dev: mein toh mazak kar raha tha

Geet: chalo, ab chalthe hai

Dev takes her to some other place...

This is also like that one...

But Dev prefers this, so Geet also follows him...

Dev reception mein jaake do room book kartha...

Someone calls...

Dev: excuse me

Dev attends the call...

Receptionist: m'am, yahan sign kijiye

Geet sign karkke dethi...

Samaan utakke jaane ke liye bhi koi roomboy nahi hai...

Geet kudh lekhe jaathi...

Dev comes and takes it from her...

Dev: Geet, tumme utaane ki kya zaroorat thi? Mein hoona?

Geet: toh ye lo, ye bhi lo, Geet apna handbag ko bhi Dev ke galle mein dalthi

Dev: ye teek nahi hai Geet

Geet: issiliye kehthe hai ki itna bhi achche nahi hone chahiye

Dev: achcha?

Geet: haan, itni sundar ladhki ke saath rehne ka mokha mila aur tumne do room book kiya?

Dev: mujhe kya jaldhi hai? tum toh jaise bhi meri hi honewali haina?

Geet: ahccha?

Dev: haan

Geet: lo mera room aagayi, mere samaan do

Dev: wait wait, tum kholo mein andar hi rakhtha

Geet: abhi abhi meinne kaha ki tum kitne achche ho

Dev: hare, toh tumme mujhpe koi barosa nahi?

Geet: tum mere saath rehthe toh pure raat tum bhi so nahi pathe

Dev: toh aaisi baat hai? toh phir mujhe bhi yahi rehna hai

Geet: mera matlab mein raat bar baat karkke tumme sone nahi doongi

Dev: yahan hoon ya wahan, jaise bhi aaj toh mera neendh toh gayi

Geet: hare, humme kal jaldhi jaana haina? Chalo, sojao, gud night

Dev: gud night Geet

Next morning...

Someone knocks...

Geet: kaun hai?

No response...

Geet darwaza kholna nahi chahathi...

She takes the phone to call Dev...

Tabhi Geet ka phone bhajtha...

Geet: Dev?

Dev: haan haan, mein hi hoon, darwaza kholo

Geet opens the door...

Geet: meinne socha ki koi aur hoga?

Dev: tumne achcha kiya ki tumne darwaza nahi khola, aaise jagah pe koi bhi aasaktha

Geet: haan, mujhe patha tha, waise mujhe ye jagah kuch pasand nahi hai

Dev: sorry Geet

Geet: hare, tumme sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, tum toh mere wajhe se yahan aaye ho

Dev: toh tum coffee piyogi?

Geet: nahi chaay

Dev: mujhe patha hai, mein toh pehle hi lekhe aagaya, chalo

Geet follows him to his room...

Tea is waiting for her...

After tea...

Dev: Geet, jaldhi nahaakke tayaar ho jao, humme aade gante mein nikalna padega

Geet: teek hai

Dev: Geet

Geet stops...

Geet: kya baat hai Dev?

Dev: woh, mein

Dev hesitates...

Geet: tum kay chupa rahe ho? mujhe dikhao

Geet snatches the cover from him...

Dev: ye

Geet: mere liye hai? wow, beautiful

Dev: Geet, mein chahatha hoon ki aaj tum isse hi pehno

Geet: par ye toh bahut cute hai, mein issko apne b'day pe pehnoongi

Dev: nahi nahi

Geet: hare, kya hua?

Dev: kuch nahi, tummare b'day ke liye toh meinne already ek dress kareedhke rakha hai, tum isse aaj hi pehenlo

Geet smiles...

Geet: teek hai, tum chahathe ho toh? Aaj isse hi pehenlethi hoon

Geet uss dress ko lekhe jaathi...

Thodi bari hai...lekhin chalega...

Ye Dev ka pehla gift haina?

Geet is happy that atleast now she got to know Dev well...

What a person!

He is so nice...

Geet thinks about Maan then...

What a contradiction?

Dev north pole hai toh Maan south pole...

Dev speaks so soft and sweet...

But Maan, he always yells at Geet...

She had never seen him without a frown on his forehead...

Always keeps staring her...

And also keeps scolding her...

Good or Bad...but Geet couldn't stop thinking about Maan...

He has totally occupied her thoughts...

And this is too dangerous...

Yes, it's very dangerous even to think about the devil...

Geet gets angry with herself for thinking about that DD...

She tries to get rid of his thoughts as soon as possible...

She takes a look at the Saree Dev had gifted with so much love...

It's so beautiful...

She decides to wear it to make Dev happy...

He has been trying to cheer her up for the past two days and she had been messing up with him all the time...

Whenever Dev tried to open his heart and confess this Maan came inbetween and messed things up for them...

Luckily today they are far away from that MSK...

That's what Geet thinks...

She doesn't know that they have been followed closely...

By none other than the MSK...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago

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