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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really felt the need to change ...

( maybe the cv's wanted to wake saras up from his dreamy mind state and. Make him look at the darker aide of a physco character. So they need him to get out of the house in anger and drive like a raged bull , same as he had done previously on the sands of Dubai. Then jerk to a halt and save someone from dying ... They needed someone to tell him " aakhon ke saamne jo hain woh dekho! " so they needed kumud to be believing that creepo > saras enraging himself > driving out of the house > etc )

Plus it was totally illogical for madam ji to judge a person by how much that freaking idiot helps ! Woh kehte hain naa ... Kisi ki niyat par bharosa nahi karna chahiyein - kiski niyat kab bigad jaaye pata he nahi chalta !

Yet ... It could have also been done like ...

[ saras throws creepo out 😃 ]

Kumud : Kya hua Saras ?
Saras : Tum jaanti nahi ki woh ..!!!
Kumud : tum ek kaam karo tum thoda bhaar ghoom ke aao , haava kha lo , tumhe acha lage ga.
Saras : Kumud ! Tum mujh pe ..
Kumud : bharosa karti hoon , par ab tum bahot gusse main ho , thoda thanda ho jaao - phir iss bare main baat karenge ... Thik hain ?


Saras walks out of the house and kumud runs behind him with the keys of the house ; locks the door and moves in the direction of Saras , she sees how helpless he was looking and gives him a tight hug ... While the hug ...

Saras : yeh kyun ?
Kumud : accha laga ? ( ignoring his question )
Saras : Sawaal ka jawaab sawaal se nahi diya jaata
Kumud : yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi
Saras : ( hold her hands as it is a back hug and her hands were on his chest ) ab mera jawaab ?
Kumud : ( hugs him tighter ) mil gaya jawaab ?
Saras : uh huh
Kumud : huh ! Kyunki tum mere ho aur main tumhaare saat jo chahun woh kar sakti hoon
Saras : woh to hain ( smiles )

They both get into the car ... While driving saras keeps looking towards kumud , kumud shies and looks away ... Towards the road where she sees that they were heading towards a kitten ... ! )

Kumud : SARAS !!!!! Aakhon ke saamne jo hain woh dekho !
Saras : jerks his car to a halt and looks at the kitty ... The kitty shrieks at their sight ... That stings his ears - the pain reminds him of the Maddo

And ... He confronts the truth ! Tell about this to kumud in their car ride back home

Episode would have been so much better if it would have been so !

What would you want to change ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really felt the need to make a come back of this article ... So here it is ! I would love to read your views !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Uff pia if only... urs kumud sundari was the reality

we would hv beared all kind of crap. But the dumb kumud sundari hurts the most 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gul.S_Ef



Uff pia if only... urs kumud sundari was the reality

we would hv beared all kind of crap. But the dumb kumud sundari hurts the most🤢



Ikr !!!! This kumud is that kumud who we used to know during the initial days of Saraswatichandra !
I thought how would she react ? I penned it down ...

But look ! 👏

Awww ! Thank you Gul !!!! ( sorry can't use huggie emoji - on phone so please except verbal huggies ... Oops ! Virtual huggies ! ) 😳

Ikr ! IF ONLY ...!!!!!

Hurts ? She has murdered our hopes , killed our aspirations , poisoned are expectations and kidnapped our real kumud !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pia .. how are your exams going?😃 .. regarding the episode .. I liked saras baaki sab jaayen baad mein 😆 actually what they meant by "look what is in front of your eye?" it means that saras should recollect the incidents with pra?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh-aarambh

Pia .. how are your exams going?😃.. regarding the episode .. I liked saras baaki sab jaayen baad mein😆actually what they meant by "look what is in front of your eye?" it means that saras should recollect the incidents with pra?



Exams : ended ; loads of : h.w ; final exams : two weeks away ...

Yeah ... It meant that pay attention to the incidents that happened in front of your eyes ... Which you have been ignoring , yet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: believerintruth



Exams : ended ; loads of : h.w ; final exams : two weeks away ...

Yeah ... It meant that pay attention to the incidents that happened in front of your eyes ... Which you have been ignoring , yet.



Subu ... Aapke baat main dum hain !

You - good ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: believerintruth



Exams : ended ; loads of : h.w ; final exams : two weeks away ...

Yeah ... It meant that pay attention to the incidents that happened in front of your eyes ... Which you have been ignoring , yet.

Now only exams ended..in two weeks again exams !😆 all the best for that..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: believerintruth



Subu ... Aapke baat main dum hain !

You - good ?

I am good Pia.. hope you are also good😃 you have been making positivity posts even during the worst episodes.. salute for your spirit 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh-aarambh

I am good Pia.. hope you are also good😃you have been making positivity posts even during the worst episodes.. salute for your spirit😆




Awww !!!! Thanks you subu !!!! 😃

Thanks for the best of luck ;)

How could I be with so much work and tension ..?

Yeah - I am just like that haatash pareshan saras ... That expression on kumuds face when saras abandoned her in Mumbai's flat for the second time ... Yeah totally me !

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