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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys so..I guess u can say this is my first ff I am writing... Hope u like it!
(Ishita just arrived at her clinic... The assistant tells her that Ashoka is waiting for her In her cabin...Ishita wondering what is he doing here gets a little angry

Ishita-why are you here.? To rub salt in my wounds? Just leave please...I have no interest talking to you

Ashok- listen, I just came here to warn you about shagun, she is once again playing games. Sobe careful .otherwise I have no interest

(Ashok is about to leave when Ishu taunts him)

Ishita- since when do you care about other people.? All you know is how to destroy other people lives..

(She reminds him of all his bad deeds, Ashok gets frustrated)

Ashok- okay..enough! Yeah..I'm bad but you know what? This world is full of evil..and only the evil survive so stop being all goddy, and face the bitter reality...if you want to survive then you have to look out for your self

Ishita- that's not true..the reason why we have evil in this world is because of ppl like you who are to selfish and think about them self ..

(Ashok doesn't know what to say...the bad memories he had buried years ago..came back to him)

Ashok- I am selfish?? You don't even know the truth! Before I met shagun I used to live in Kanpur..I had a wife simran and our two year old son Varun

(Ishita is a bit taken back..but Ashok continues with his story)

Ashok-I had a small job back then..simran was a social worker..we were both happy with our lives..it was as if nothing could go wrong

(Ashok voice was getting chocked up)

Ashok- simran was helping a woman in some rape case..I was out of town for some work, when I came home, I saw our house was on fire...with my wife and our son in the house

(Ishita can see the sorrow in his eyes..the tears..she herself doesn't know what to say)

Ashok- I tried to rush to the house...but some goons stopped me... They wanted to take revenge for simran helping that woman in the rape case

Ashok-(almost yelling and crying)-I saw my son and wife die ..in FRONT OF MY EYES..and I couldn't do anything..

(Ashok calms down..he didn't know what happened and why he told Ishita this truth...he hasn't told anyone not even shagun)

(Ishita is shocked and speechless... She had no idea..)

Ishita- I'm sorry..i had no idea that behind all this hatred there is so much sorrow

Ashok- ever person has a story Ishita...yes iam evil..but I wasn't always this way,anyways I am leaving

(Ashok is about to leave when Ishu stops him)

Ishita- listen Ashok...I know what happened to you was not fair,but wouldn't your wife and son want to see you happy? I'm not trying to lecture you but...you deserve better, we all have sorrows in our life, but it's our choice to be make the most out of life

(Ashok looks at Ishita..this was the first time in forever someone said something nice about him...it felt good to take his anger out, to share his sorrow)

Ashok- yeah..perhaps you're right..I think I should leave now

(Ashok leaves... He did came here to warn Ishita but also hoped to create rift between Raman and her.but the opposite happened, after a long time, he felt good about himself, why was he after such a witch like shagun anyways..he decided that moment he was gonna leave her)

(Ishita still couldn't believe what she heard..she felt sorry for Ashok, and hoped he learns to love again)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow..ishu turning out to b an agony aunt to ashok..very interesting idea
Pls continue
Edited by _Dipsi_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is an amazing writing
Loved Ashok-Ishu face off and the way she told him to be good
Hope you continue this
Want to see how he turns himself into a better person
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful...kinda something should happen in the show also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow guys thanks for the reviews!!will think of continuing this soon!

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