taarey~HUM MAR JAYENGE (UPDATED CH-16 PG 120) - Page 67

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thank u so much buddy 😊
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Wow awsm is to emotional update but awsm taarey hug is nice plz next part update soon plzzz...
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Originally posted by: skfirdous

awesome update
loved it
u always makes me cry
loved thr TR love
precap is so intresting
waiting for TR romance
awesome edits
update soon


aww dil se big wala thank u so much buddy
i m so glad that u loved it
it really means a lot to me
y a i will update asap 😊
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Originally posted by: _Cupid_

Wow awsm is to emotional update but awsm taarey hug is nice plz next part update soon plzzz...


aww dil se big wala thank u so much friend
ya i will update next asap 😛😛😛
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thank u so much buddy 😊
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thank u so much buddy 😊
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Originally posted by: anaghchavan

very very beautiful update.

u make me cry again, worth it but, superb update,
how much they love each other. while reading i can imagine
taarey live.

really u write so so good/beautiful/superb, every emotions can
be make out while reading it, i really like ur this story very much.

please update next part soon, and give us surprises as per promo.

update soon.

i know i must not say thank you to you as u don't like it being buddy, but
really a big vala thank you very much for such a beautiful story which u have
written so nicely.

now waiting for taarey scenes in part 14, update soon.


oh my god such a special comment 😊
dil se big wala thank u so much my sweetu buddy
ya i will try 2 update next part now

vaise no need to say thank u but still if u r saying then i accept it ok
and u r most welcome my sweet buddy cum special reader of my story
ur comments r always special and precious to me
dill se big wala thank u again
plz keep reading n keep commenting 😊😊😊
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thank u so much buddy 😊
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VERY DISAPPOINTED WITH LESS NO. OF LIKES AND LESS COMMENTS .. BUT STILL I M UPDATING FOR ALL D SPECIAL READERS OF THIS STORY AND THOSE WHO COMMENT WHOLE HEARTEDLY PLZ DONT DISAPPOINT ME THIS TIME ..

THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED TO SOME OF THE VERY SPECIAL READERS OF THIS STORY .. RADHI , ANAGHVACHAN , PREMLATA , ASHWINIPINDORIA , HUMZY AND EVERYONE WHOSE COMMENT TOUCH MY HEART AND MAKE ME FEEL SPECIAL . SO THIS IS A TAAREYLICIOUS UPDATE AND HOPE U ENJOY ..AS M NOT GOOD AT WRITING ROMANTIC PARTS .. BUT WROTE ESP FOR RADHI .. SORRY INADVANCE IF ITS NOT UPTO UR EXPECTATIONS OK PLS DO LIKE AS WELL AS GIVE BIG COMMENT FROM HEART.. avoid mistakes as i have not proofread it

HUM MAR JAYENGE

CHAPTER-14 ~'confession of love and proposal by rey ~'

{taani was still wearing that lehangha n has taken folded veil ( dupatta ) on her neck }

rey was hugging her as tightly as he could ... he want to get lost in his love .. he just wanna get away from everything .. and stay away from all the problems .. all the sadness and all the sorrows , esp he want him and her as well to forget her disease ... taani also hug him back not being able to control herself anymore..

.. after sometime taani broke the hug but when she was moving apart , her earing got stuck with rey's shirt's button and they look at each other with eyes full of love and pain .. for sometime they just kept looking at each other .. and rey was so lost in her .. he raise his hand and keep his hand on taani cheek as if caressing her and showering all his love on her .. both were looking at each other with intensity n deep love .. the love of souls... but taani came to her senses and she started looking here n there while taking out her earing while rey was constantly gazing her as if trying to read a pure soul and understand her pain a little .. and after some attempts she did it and move apart , and say facing in other direction " rey aapne kya decide kiya ??? aap vapis .. jaa rahe ho na kal " { this mere thought was killing her heart but still she said for her love }

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Rey go to her and hold her hand as if saying that this is his decision " HE WILL HOLD HER HAND FROEVER N EVER TILL THE END , TILL HIS LAST BREATHE "

He take her in front of the mirror in her room while she was just surprised that what is he doing now

He look at taani standing with her in front of the mirror and then ask her to look at the mirror by his eyes .. she look at the mirror .. while he was still holding his hands firmly and he raise his hand holding her hand while looking at the mirror seeing the perfect image of taarey in the mirror

Rey speak with little tears in his eyes " MAIN YE HAATH ZINDAGI BHAR AUR USKE BAAD BHI HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE THAAMNA CHAHTA HU "

Taani was surprised , touched and emotional listening his words that were undoubtedly spoken from his heart .. as response only some tears came to her eyes and as soon as rey saw her tears .. he just went close to her by side while holding her hand .. and kiss her tears and her beautiful eyes as if absorbing her tears and pain ...she just closed her eyes feeling shy and emotional at the same time . she just wanted to flow in his pure love at that time .. she felt that why is his love so true , so pure , so soothing , so calming that she couldn't stop her heart and her soul to flow with it

Rey further say with full of love and intensity in the same position being close to her so so so close ..

" main tumhari in khoobsurat aankho se har dard har aansoo ko churana chahta hu taani , I want to take away all your pain n wash away all ur tears by my love " saying that he kissed her again on her cheek , she just closed her eyes loosing in that beautiful moment of love and then rey keep his left hand on her right cheek while holding her left hand with his right hand and make her look at him .. she look at him with all the love and some pain also .. both were looking at each other intensely .. lovingly .. painfully ..

Then He rub his thumb with her lips but as he touch her lips .. she felt goosebumps and thousand of butterflies dancing in her stomach and some buried desires catching the flames of love again by the heat of his love which was increasing every second and he say further

" main in pankhudi jaise hoothon pe { lips pe } sirf muskaan khilte hue dekhna chahta hu , main tumhe iss jaahaan ki har khushi dekar sirf haste hue muskurate hue dekhna chahta hu .. I want the luscious lips of my love to keep smiling and adoring her face always as it gives me the biggest happiness of this world "

His every single word was feeling by her heart and she could also feel the love and purity hidden in those words in her heart .. she was getting more touched by his love

Then rey say " look into this mirror jaan , " she look at the mirror and then he say looking at the reflection of taarey in the mirror

" kya tumhe nahi lagta ki ye Jodi is jahan ki best Jodi hai ... {she smiles very little hearing this line ..as if she also agree ki ye Jodi is jahaan ki best Jodi hai "

Rey " cant u feel that OUR LOVE COMPLETE US , WE R SO INCOMPLETE WITHOUT EACH OTHER .. cant u see that TAAREY ARE MADE FOR EACH OTHER , OUR SOULS , OUR HEARTS , OUR LIVES ALL R MADE JUST FOR EACH OTHER "

REY look at her and say " aur jaaanti ho kya??"

Taani raise her brows asking kya ?

Rey " taani naam ki is jahaan ki sabse pyaari khoobsurat dulhaniya ke liye Krishna ji ne sirf ek dulha banaya hai reyy naam ka .. "

He go behind her and hold her from back and says huskily in her left ear " ye dulhaniya sirf meri hai ... I WANT TO MARRY U TAANI .. I WANT TO LOVE U JAAN , I WANT TO LOVE U TILL MY LAST BREATHE AND EVEN AFTER THAT... I WANT YOU AS MY PARTNER , AS MY LOVE , AS MY SOULMATE IN EVERY LIFE BECAUSE FOR ME LOVE AND LIFE BOTH R JUST TAANI... MY TAANI , ~ MY LOVE MY LIFE MY HEART MY SOUL MY EVERYTHING , PLZ MARRY ME MY LOVE I CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU , MY SOUL FEEL LOST WITHOUT U , MY LIFE IS INCOMPLETE WITHOUT U .. PLZ MARRY ME TAANI AND LET ME LOVE MY LIFE FOREVER N EVER "

{while saying this a lone tear fell from his eyes on her shoulder reflecting the truth n love in his words }

Taani couldn't believe her ears .. rey just proposed her .. her broken dream come true .. she was surprised ,speechless , overwhelmed , touched , emotional , n helpless at the same time . that was a unbelievable , beautiful and lovely moment of love

Some tears trail down her cheeks while rey was constantly seeing her from back by mirror's image .. and seeing tears .. his heart ached again .. but he couldn't stop himself but just kiss her cheeks with some fresh and dried tears standing behind her with no distance between them .. she couldn't say anything .. her heart was dying to say yes but stops thinking about everything .. she just closed her eyes ..

He then kept her silky hair to other side and kissed on her shoulders and back .. she started moving forward .. but rey pull her back and keeping his hand on her bare waist and playing with her .. his fingers were dancing n playing on her bare waist n belly ..sending shivers in her body .. she was closing her eyes by their proximity .. he was loving his effect on her .. he again kissed her bare back and neck and shoulders ... he kissed her again n again .. the kisses of love, the kisses of the thirst of love .. the kisses of incomplete desires .. he started showering kisses on her .. without knowing her answer as he know that she love him and that's enough for him to know .. and he want his love to melt the rock of his fears and pain ...she also couldn't stop him don't know why .. may be his love didn't let her stop him .. the thirst and desires of his love in her heart didn't let her stop him

He slowly slowly kissing her everywhere came in front of her .. and cup her face .. and then kiss her forehead , and then on her right cheek and then on her left cheek .. and then kissed her neck and jawline .. n kissed her again and again .. .. he was loving her .. he was loving to be close to her ..she also wanna love him before life comes to an end or leaves her hand ..

{ hawayein bhi sharmane lagi thi do pyaar karne walo ke pyaar ko dekhkar .. fizayein bhi mehakne lagi unke pyaar ko dekhkar .. }

The mirror was capturing this moment of love in it while witnessing it .. the moon and d stars of the sky were also feeling shy seeing the beautiful love of two lovebirds ..

He then bent down a little while kissing r arm and take her dupatta and cover it on her and him as well .. to love her limitlessly .. without any boundaries

{Inside the dupatta do dil mil rahe hai magar chupke chupke .. sabko ho r ahi khabar chupke chupke shhh .. its love time ... let them love and see them secretly}

Rey was removing every inch of distance between them .. he was just coming close and more close to taani .. .. rey cupped her face and there came the most beautiful moment .. he kissed her lips .. as if fulfilling the wishes of his soul and heart .. he kissed her lips , licking her taste and love .. she resisted at first .. but he kept kissing her lips without stopping .. and at last she responded .. she also kissed his lips back .. the kiss was the kiss of 2 hearts , 2 souls and 2 beautiful lovebirds

.. they kissed each other .. their lips were loving the taste of the other , they were licking the love ... and they were just loving and loving each other .. but taani broke the kiss .. as she was feeling short of breathe .. but then hugged rey as tightly as she could not being able to control herself , her heart n soul anymore .. he hugged her back .. both were loving each other hugging each other .. under d red duppatta which was the symbol of taarey's infinite love .. .rey took her in his embrace .. in a hearty wish to take her away from everyone , every pain n sorrows .. they were just lost in each other and their love

...

~~ end of ch- 14~~

{ Oyee hello come out from tarey dreamland .. and tell me how was it ??????? plz give ur precious comment .. and dont forget to hit d like button if u really like it }

take care

keep smiling always 😊

precap same as before " ch-15 mujhe teri zaroorat hai "

~~~~~~

Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Resss
It was beautiful update I Luv it Ohkk I Luv how rey propose taani aww
So romantic n cute I Luv his pure luv for taani it's was emotional yet luvly
Romantic I Luv tht rey was to Luv taani hug taani kiss taani be with taani
Till n after his last breath he win my heart here haaye he ask her for marriage
Wow man I Luv tht I Luv rey every line it show his pure deeply love for taani
N taani could not stop rey as she also love him endless with pure feeling that
is Luv rey kissing taani everywhere I Luv tht her back her neck her shoulder
Her chest her jawline her checks her eyes her noise n finally her lip I Luv tht n
Taani also respond wow yaar dil khush kar diya tune aaj mera now taarey marriage
Yuppie n I Luv tht waiting for nxt prt n thanks a lot for dedicating it to me thank you
So much per-cape hmmm nice thanks for PM n update soon plzz ^_^
Edited by raddhi - 12 years ago

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