DESTINY PLAY 2 updated Last Part on 17-7-2014 /Page 102 - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: drrose31

<font size="4" color="#0099ff">parts 3 and 4</font>

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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Nice parts ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">so much happened ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Parth was in danger coz of geet ???</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Maan saved ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">ops maan is someone ... else.. okhh</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">so he is some security personnel ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">Geet is what ???😲</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">and us se bhi zada shocker is .. precap seriously last part😭😭</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">thnx for pm sweets ...</font>
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<font size="4" color="#0099ff">cont soon</font>

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Posted: 11 years ago
[QUOTE=richa_kapoor] thanx dear[/QUOTE]
PLZZZ ITNI JLDI END MAT KIJIYEGA IS STORY KO ITS A REQUEST

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Posted: 11 years ago
maan is a captain but geet is involved in the kidnapping
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Posted: 11 years ago
part - 2 nice update i loved geet n parth's antics n there planning but poor souls planning backfired.they both were too much fun together
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Posted: 11 years ago
part -3 parth's plan again backfired targeting geet in it n then the attack n maan saving parth.nice update n i love parth n geet's bonding n masti
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Posted: 11 years ago
part-4 okh so finally my guess was right k iss eww lalan top maan k peeche koi raaj h n in reality he is a capt. N maaneet's faceofff hmmm intresting nice one
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Posted: 11 years ago
kardiya maine comment ab muje lfr ki update dede warna mai tere saare readers ko collect kar k tere against strile kar dungi update chaiyeee mujeee LFR ki
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Posted: 11 years ago




PART - 5



MAAN rush outside hearing Parth's shriek but he failed to reach on time. A black car took him away. Guards at the entrance were shot dead and many were injured. Maan is fuming badly. Dev too was informed and he too came back.

'Maan where is my son? I trust you for his security.' Dev's all hopes were shattred.

'dev i know what you have going through but trust me. I will bring your son and too in a fine condition. Kuchh nahi hoga use. Ab ye hume btayegi ki wo log Parth ko kaha le gaye hai.' Maan assured Dev and told his plan of action.

Seeing Geet as his hostage Dev was in shock. 'why you tied her like that?' Dev shout on Maan.

Maan fists her hairs and tilted her head back. 'tum btaogi ya main btau?' Maan threats her.

'whats going on Maan? Geet Maan kya keh raha hai?' Dev still wont get what they are talking about.


'dev open ur eyes. She is one who has involved with the kidnappers. She is their informer. Shak to mujhe usi dinn ho gaya tha jab Parth k trap se Geet ne khud ko badi sfai se nikal liya tha. Jo ki sirf ek trained soldier hi kar skta hai koi aam ladki nahi. Uske baad apne shak ko yakeen me badlne k liye main Parth ko jaan bujhkar Mall leke gaya. Parth mall aaya ye baat kidnappers ko kaise pata chali? Jabki wo to humare sath aane wala b nahi tha. Dusri baat hum kis mall me jayenge ye tak decided nahi tha firr b kidnappers waha pehle se majood the. Kaise? Coz she tell them.' Maan revealed one after another truth to Dev which broked him dreadfully. He trusted her blindly and she cheated him.

'why Geet? I trust you blindly and Parth usne tumhara kya bigada tha? Agr nuksan pahunchana hi tha to mujhe pahunchati.' Dev is completely shattred.


Geet is silent and clenched her eyes hard. Maan again fists her hairs and jerked them. 'dont test my patience and tell me fast or else i have another way to open your mouth.' Maan threaten her to get the address of kidnappers. But again she didnt replied to them.


'Geet please tell me where is my son?' Dev begged to her but Geet is not ready to replied.


'ye aise nahi manegi.' Maan's anger is towering. He dragged her to a room and locked from inside. Dev scared too.


'Maan what are you doing? Stop it. Dont harm her.' even after getting hurt by her he still have a soft corner for her.

Maan threw her on floor and bend on his feet. 'tume andaza b nai main kya kar skta hu tumhare sath. Ye sochne ki galti mat karna ki main apni limits cross nahi karunga. Kyunki Capt. Maan Singh Khurana ki koi hadd nahi hai. Na main rules break karne se darta hu na giri hui harkate karne se hickichata hu. I only want to complete my mission at any cost.' he clenched her hairs hard and tilted her head back. His warm breath is mingling with hers and she glance him blankly.


'do whatever you want par main kuch nahi btaungi.' Geet is stubborn to her decision. Maan's anger is on peak and to make her open her mouth he was going to harass her but meanttime George came inside. Maan stops and glared him too.

'sir there is a good news. We are suceeded in tracing Parth's location. The transmeter and camera. u fitted in his car is with him fortunately.

Maan leave her and went with george to the room where they fitted their machines. Dev followed them. Screen showing the spot moving. 'thank god wo car Parth k pass hai ab hum Parth ki location trace kar skte hai. Bas ek baar waha pahunchkar Parth car apni pocket se bahar nikal le to hume ye b pata chal jayega ki waha kitne log hai. Isse plan of action ready karne me asani hogi.' they only waiting for him to reach the destination.

Soon car stops and His team locate the place. 'sir its an old factory at xyz area.' george tell him.

All are only glancing the screen and praying Parth pick out the car from his pocket. 'George waha ki local police ko alert karo and command them to wait for my orders.' Maan gave instructions to Georgre. He nodded and obeyed him.


Soon his wish granted. Parth was thrown in a room,where already a boy is sitting with hand and leges tied in a rope. Seeing him Parth's cared eyes turn gleaed and he went to that boy and hugged him.

'bhaiya pls save me. Ye mujhe maar rae hai.' Parth hugged him and appeal for help.

That boy was so helpless and tried to protect Parth but cant as he was too clunched in ropes. As soon guard leave Parth bring out his car from his pocket. As he is getting bored. Camera on that car start working and now Maan, dev and all his team can saw Parth on screen. Seeing the view Dev's eyes poped out with shock.

'Saahil yaha kya kar raha hai? In logo ne use b kidnap kar rakha hai par kyu?' Dev said shockingly seeing the boy.

'dev you know that boy?' Maan enquired.

'ha ye Saahil hai Geet ka chhota bhai.' Dev revealed. 'par Geet ne to kaha tha Saahil hostel me hai. Ye yaha aise? Ye ho kya raha hai?' Dev get more confused seeing Saahil's worst condition. He looks pale and feeble. Also the marks of their brutality was visible on his face and body.

Precap:- guess at your own 😉

SORRY GUYS FOR SHORT UPDATE. I KNOW I HAD TOLD YOU THAT IT MUST BE A LAST PART. BUT DUE TO MY HEALTH ISSUE I WONT GET ENOUGH TIME. SORRY ONCE AGAIN AND WAIT FOR NEXT 😊

HOPE YOU LIKE IT...

SOON I WILL UPDATE LFR2 ALSO SO PLEASE COOPERATE.


Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats why she did it
for her brother
well wouldnt you
good that maan was with them
so parth got saved
no wonder she didnt say anything
well she cant let her brother be harmed right
yup she cant
parth means something to her
but more than her own brother
maan she wouldnt have said anything even when you crossed your limits
wait is she a soldier
how come dev didnt know
whats going on man
so much confusion
but we get more of it so small part is welcome
they found parth and sahil
time to rescue them both
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fabulous part
i think geet is forced to do all these..
Hope maan saves both prath nd sahil..

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